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reeno ...ending f part 1...he he he...wr was eyes hooked...🤣
Originally posted by: attiya1.3
really luuuv it😳
Superb writing!! Want to see Ishu and Shagun face off in the show too. Raman tho Romantic Bhalla hogaya hai😃
PART 2
A/N: FORGIVE ME. PLEASE FORGIVE ME. Im saying this Dil se... for two things... ek toh i know i took longer than i promised 😳 and no.2... this one is worse than the first one 🤣 SURPRISE SURPRISE! Actually, i was in too much pressure while writing this one. The thing is, i told a few friends that i dont think i can write Romance, they argued i could... and then this became more of a challenge for me... and well... i also just realized that challenges are probably NOT my thing?! 🤔 I dont know, i couldnt get myself to pay 100% attention to this,and i wrote this in the span of 3 days! Thats a lot cz i usually dont take more than a couple of hours! But here, my mind kept wandering and i kept finding more interesting things to do, so i mustve lost tempo at a LOT of points and it might seem mismatched and not relatable and i dont know, just please forgive me! 🤔
ALSO, NOT PROOF-READ. Please Ignore mistakes 😳
I really really sincerely hope this isnt as disappointing to you as it is to me!
EDIT: SORRY FOR NOT MENTIONING EARLIER, BUT this part... especially... the "DORI" LOL is dedicated to a few dori loving people out there... sabse pehle my BGDs... each one of us ;) has a special connection with the DORI, so Shiv (ForbbidenLove), Doc/BEG (PreciousPri), NB (Nikki_Titli), GB (-Garima-), Sia Dii (--Sia--), Nina Jii (luvsagar), Aani (EkPaheli), Uz (happenstance), ash AND EVERYONE OF US WHO'RE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE INFAMOUS "DORI SCENE"... yes, this one's for you! ;)
XXX
Rakesh and Ramesh took leave after a while citing work as the reason.
There was an awkward silence for a while. Raman and Ishita sat there silently sipping on their tea.
"Woh.. I got Mihika the latest MacBook" The reaction he got from Ishita was certainly not what he'd expected. One would expect a pleasantly surprised (not shocked) face, a genuine happy reaction, maybe a thankful response, but what he saw on his wife's face was certainly anything but the above mentioned!
Her eyes wide open in shock, her mouth open in a small o' and she seemed... wait, was that disappointment? Once she closed her mouth, she opened it again to say something, but then it was like she had a mini-battle within herself and whoever won, well, advised her to skip the idea of saying whatever she was going to say...
"Umm... Hi? Toh theek hai na? Usko kaam bhi aayega with her job"
Well, Ishita wasn't someone who could keep her lecture-prone mouth shut for too long, was she? So she started.
"Raman?! Aapko kya hogaya hai? Ghar main har kisi ko bigaadte rahoge kya aap? Ya phir itneyyy favors karke indebt karna chaahte ho sabko? Maine Miku ke liye gold ring and tops liye na, then why did you have to..."
Raman was furious now. Exacly WHAT does she think of herself?
"Wait a minute" He said, raising out his index finger in front of her. "What do you precisely mean? Main ghar mai sab ko bigaad raha hoon? Favors karta hoon? To make them indebted, what!?" He WAS furious, and his tone was dead-serious, and well, Ishita knew he only meant business... serious business right now. Seeing the seething anger which was double prominent in his apparently calm voice... he spoke in a low volume, but the way he said it with regular gritting of his teeth was enough to let ishita know she had hit the wrong nerve, and so, it was up to her to mellow it down and... maybe explain to him her point?
"Arey nahi, woh... mera matlab, see..."
"I don't care tumhara matlab kya tha Mrs Ishita Raman Bhalla, isey tum apne badhte hue ego ka masla na hi banao toh accha hoga... Mihika is like a sister to me, she is not just my saali or your sister now, she is also Mihir's fianc, and its just a damn laptop, instead of being happy about it, and supposedly thanking me for being considerate, which by the way I was trying to be, since she has a lot of work on computers I know that, YOU are here blaming me for ridiculous stuff that I haven't even ever thought about?! Just because I can get her this... AND MORE, you're going to..."
This time Ishita didn't let him complete. "Ego ka masla? Aap ki akal ghaas charne gayi hai kya? Aapne shayad suna nahi, I got her a gold ring and gold tops... from the both of us. im sure you do know what the gold's worth right now, don't you, Mr Considerate kumar Bhalla?! Aur main toh aap hi ke liye kehrahi thi... it is really expensive , and since I had already gotten something for her... Khair! Aap ko toh koi reason hi nahi chahiye ghussa karne ka!"
She folded her hands and turned away from him as she completed her sentence. It amused him, he couldn't control but gave out a lopsided smile in order to retain his chuckle at her cute gesture, which she obviously didn't see because she had turned her face the other way, away from him. Get back Raman! Get back! Her cute little silly antics cannot make you lose this... Jhani Ki Rani ko toh harana hi hai, im the Raavan after all!... WAIT! WHAT?!
"You never told me what you got her, and whatever you did, well, I don't care, because ive got something for her too, and sad, but she is going to like my gift better!" He said, he wanted to have the last word.
"We'll see" She said rolling her eyes, getting up and collecting her handbag.
"Kidhr jaa rahi ho andhe toofaan ki tarah? Aag bagole ki tarah garam hoke? Idher betho, paani piyo, thandi hojao..." he said while grabbing her arm and making her sit right beside him.
She jerked her hand out of his grip, annoyed at him. He was smiling and inwardly laughing seeing her irritated like this.
They were getting out of the restaurant, Ishita ahead, followed by Raman and he found her irritation and anger extremely amusing, he was secretly enjoying it, chuckling and coming behind her, he opened the heavy door of the restaurant from behind her, pushing it with one hand and giving her access to go out, she gave him a look and came out and he followed. She took the keys out of her bag and Raman snatched them from her hands and sat at the driving seat while Ishita was standing there with her mouth opened with an "O" yet again.
He honked, "Madam, aana nahi hai kya?" He said after rolling his window down. Ishita came and with her hands on the side of her hips, she demanded "Yeh kya tha? Main drive karungi!" She said, now folding her hands on her chest and looking the other side.
"Nahi, main drive karraha hu, aake betho jaldi"
"Raman, what the hell? My car, my keys, I get to decide, and ive decided, MAIN drive karrahi hu!"
"Ishita, tum aake beth rahi ho ya main tumhari gaadi leke bhaag jaun?"
"Haw! Aap meri gaadi leke bhaag jaoge?"
"Haan"
"You cant do that"
"Don't challenge me Mrs Bhalla... you very well know I can do that, aake beth jao"
"HMPH! Praand! Muttaal, Raavan Kumar!" She said while she came to the other side to sit on the passenger seat, all the while stamping her foot as she walked in protest, letting not just him but everyone around know she was pissed off.
"Aapki akar ko toh main nikaal ke hi rahungi ek din, Raavan Kumar" she said in a low tone while grinding her teeth.
He smiled. "Pata hai, tum jab ghusse mai hoti ho na? Toh tumhari naak aur gaal ekdum laal hojate hai" He said. He was looking straight ahead.
"Haan?" she said suddenly touching her nose and her cheeks.
He chuckled.
The car stopped at the signal. He turned to her and she had a confused look on her face, her hand on her nose. This time he chuckled louder, he removed her hand and caressed her cheek with his thumb for merely a second, and he could already see its effect on her. She held her breath and she was absolutely taken aback, staring at him in shock and bewilderment, and ofcourse, turning redder, the traffic light shone green, and before shifting the gear, he pinched her nose lightly, with a slight chuckle and zoomed the car in speed. Ishita was dumbfounded.
She could see that he was still smiling, the left side of his lips twitched, and she smiled too, she was blushing and she looked down, touching her nose and cheeks one last time.
The next day it was Mihika's birthday and Mihir had organized the whole thing in the community hall with the help of Romi, Trisha and Pathak. Trisha and Pathak also had gotten a good time and way to indulge in some cute cheesy romance, away from Raman's eyes, as Neel believed that Raman couldn't see him doing no work... he wanted to keep him on his toes. Hamesha!
"Ishita, jaldi karo, Ruhi needs to use the washroom, tum kapre room main pehenlo" Raman said knocking the bathroom door.
"ahh, oh acha Raman, listen, please take Ruhi to Amma's na? and please send Vandu Akka from there? I... umm need her help"
"Uff" Raman makes a face and rolling his eyes he murmurs an "accha" and takes Ruhi to her Paati's. After sending Ruhi to the washroom, he can't see Vandita anywhere, but he spots Bala.
"Arey Bala, Vandita kahan hai?"
"Mihir called her downstairs for some last minute touch ups, Mihika must be back any minute too na? kyun kya hua? Do you want me to call her?"
"Arey nahi" he said touching Bala's shoulder, "Ishita was asking for her, main jaake usse boldeta hoon shes a bit busy"
Bala smiles and Raman leaves to inform Ishita.
The bedroom door wasn't fully closed, so he knocked just once and entered. Before he could open his mouth to say Ishita, he heard Ishita speak
"Uff! Thank God Akka! I thought Raman forgot to tell you, accha suno na Akka, see, aapke and Mihika ke itna persuade, itna convince karne par maine yeh saari pehen toh li par itne confusing doris, mera toh haath hi nahi pauhach raha, thori help toh kardo" with this she moved all her hair from the back, sliding them over her left shoulder.
Raman was dumbstruck. The sight before him was too much to handle, burning him from the insides... already this woman was creating havoc to his senses, inside and out, and now this sight right before him. No No No! Control Raman.
Ishita looked absolutely magnificent and striking in the blue short netted backless Saari. She was definitely a sight to behold... atleast from the backside. He slowly raised his eyes up, closely scanning every curve of her body and then, finally... he saw it, did he say she looked striking? Well, that was definitely not enough. The make up she had done was different... how, he did not know, but he knew for a fact that she looked absolutely sumptuous, exquisite, ravishing and every other synonym that would fit the bill. His mouth was opened in an "O" just like the other day, except this time, his eyes were just as wide open, and biting his phone was of no help.
PS: THIS IS THE SARI SHE WORE, ACCORDING TO MY IMAGINATION AND MY LIMITED DESCRIPTION OF THE SARI, LOL. YOU ARE FREE TO IMAGINE ANYTHING SEXIER THOUGH ;)
"AKKA! Jaldi karo na please. Ek toh I don't know why you guys were hell bent on me wearing blue for Raman... I shouldn't have told you his favorite color was blue, we're already married, not that I have to impress him now? But you know what Akka, I honestly do hope he likes it... par please don't tease me in front of him, and don't bring anything in his focus, you know what I mean right? Please!"
Raman didn't know when a smile crept up his face. Enough with controlling yourself and your hormones Raman! She is your wife, and there is no doubt that she is looking absolutely breathtakingly gorgeous and its just ugh! UNFAIR!
With these thoughts still lingering in his mind, he took a step forward, and started walking towards Ishita. The full view of her back, the sexy sari, her beautiful silky hair that had soft waves at the end... her curves prominent at just the right areas... no, this was definitely not the time to control... he could do a bit of teasing and have some fun with his wife atleast, couldn't he?
He reached right behind Ishita and she was reapplying her lip gloss. He raised his hand and used three fingers, gently sliding a couple of strands of her hair that were still lingering on her neck and back to the front. He suddenly heard a loud gasp. Ishita let out a pretty loud hasp and was looking at him through the mirror, she just noticed that it was her husband in the room all this while and not her sister. Raman and Ishita's eyes were locked in the mirror. Ishita had a scared shocked expression, and Raman was just lost, he had the dreamy look in his eyes.
Finally, after a staring session of some 3 minutes precisely, ishita finally gathered herself and spoke "Ra... Raman aa.. aap?"
He only further stared into her soul, making her further uncomfortable.
She immediately pushed her hair back from her shoulder, blocking the view of her flawless back from Raman. He was disappointed. Yes he was.
The unease for Ishita was only growing, but Raman was just in another world.
"Your Akka is a bit busy helping Mihir, trying to make this birthday the best birthday for your sister..." He said in a low, very husky voice, his breath fanning her cheeks, he was dangerously close to her ears, and his fingers were doing something on her neck, she could feel it, but something did tell her it was her illusion, her eyes closed in retort, but then she opened them, only to be sure what was happening, she was lost. She saw in the mirror that he was indeed lightly brushing the back of her neck with his fingers.
"So now..." He said in a huskier voice if that was even possible. "Let me help you with this..." With the last word, his lips brushed her cheek, sending a deep shiver through her spine.
He slowly, very gently moved her hair to the front and started off at the task that he was least skilled at. He had no idea how those doris worked... all he knew that he wanted to do it... wanted to take his own sweet time, devour the feel of her skin beneath his hands and cherish it forever. He deliberately touched her back, sliding fingers through the length of her back only to see her reaction in the mirror which was immensely pleasing. She stiffened, her body going taut, her eyes closed tight and her eyebrows twitching closer. He smiled. He liked that effect on her, and the thought that it was HIM who had that effect on her was absolutely elating.
There were 3 thin strands of doris that he had to work with and after a little struggle, he finally got the hang of it, and now that he was almost done, he obviously didn't want to let go of her... or this... and so he kept acting like he's still working his way through the doris... he kept fiddling with the dori and looking at her through the mirror and enjoying, Ishita on the other hand, had no idea if she was enjoying it or this was the most difficult and embarrassing task ever, the different sensations that she was going through as Raman worked his way on her back was absolutely undescribable. She wanted it to end this instance so she could take a breather, but at the very same time, she never wanted Raman to stop, she never wanted him to get his way through with those doris on her back.
But then suddenly, she noticed that he was only looking at her and not her back, she knew the effect she was having on Raman and she was extremely proud and happy about the fact, just as Raman was, she wanted to tease him, and be absolutely in control of herself and her senses, but she just couldn't. Finally, she spoke up.
"Raman?" she said, and that did it, he turned her around so they were facing each other.
She turned around shocked to see that her doris were done already.
She blushed and tried moving away from him but he held her from the shoulders... and then slowly slid his hands down till her forearms, devouring the skin. Ishita gulped. He moved them a bit to the right so they were away from the dresser and as soon as her back hit the wall, he caged her. She let out a slight gasp as the cold wall got in contact with her skin.
He gently moved a strand of her hair from her face and kept his finger lingering there at the side of her face for quite sometime before tucking the strand behind her ear and finally speaking.
"Ishita, you look amazing"
Raman Kumar, finally, genuinely complimented his wife on her looks. No mocks, no taunts, no teasing. Ishita was definitely surprised, pleasantly, maybe shocked? But she was smiling and she just couldn't control how hard she was blushing, she was looking down, staring at the floor with utmost concentration like it were the only thing to come in an exam she had to take.
Raman knew that they had come a long way. So many Joys and Sorrows and Happiness and Times of crisis they had experienced together. He had actually lived every single expression with her already... in such a short time. He had already realized a long time ago that she was the perfect partner in terms of spending a lifetime with. He had always known for her to be very practical, tactical, caring, loving, understanding, smart, unbiased and rational. She was perfect and beautiful from the inside, obviously a pretty lady from the outside too, but he never let THAT attribute attract him, never had he paid attention to it till lately... now he realized She was perfect, perfect not just inwardly but from the outside too... in every sense... she had it all in her... and come on! One had to admit, shes only lately started looking so unbelievably hot and irresistible!
Raman let one hand out and held her from the waist and brought the other one to her face, caressing it lightly with her thumb, and the rest of the four fingers in her hair towards and above the ear. She silently whispered Raman's name as she closed her eyes when she saw him moving his face closer, leaning in.
They heard someone at the door and Ishita suddenly woke up from the trance and tried jerking Raman away but Raman didn't move a budge, he held her tighter.
Ishita was scared now. "Raman... Raman, see there's someone at home, I heard the door" she said while trying to loosen the grip of his hands from her waist.
"So? Im IN my room, WITH my wife... whats wrong?"
Ishita's heartbeats were only accelerating by the minute. Her throat was as dry as ever and gulping again and again did not work.
"Raman, Mihika... her birthday. It must be her... we're getting late, please move" She pleaded with her eyes, still trying to remove his hands from on her.
"Shh!" He said keeping the index finger of his free hand on her lips.
Her lips. They looked extremely luscious, that steely glossy pink on her lips, making them stand out and oh-so-irresistible, he only wanted to taste them, only for a while, he promised... but he really wanted them... just to feel how they felt on his.
He was still completely lost. Noone in the world mattered to him. By now, he even knew someone was at their bedroom door and he did not even bother turning his head to see who it was. He just leaned in further, and kissed her. For the first time. For the first time giving in to the month old urges and cravings.
He did not glance around to see who it was at the door before he kissed her and held her in his arms. He simply just did it. Because it didn't matter who was looking, for the first time in his life, he didn't care... and that's how this was so different. He had to let her know... no matter what. He didn't know if it was Love yet... but he very well did know that if it was anyone that he wants to spend the rest of his life with, it could not be anyone better than Ishita.
The kiss did not last for very long, it was a gentle kiss, a bit more than a peck, wherein he promised her something, something that just the two of them knew, he sucked on her lower lip for a few mere seconds and savoring it for a moment or two, he closed his eyes a bit tight and breathing in sharply, like he never wanted to forget this moment, he broke the kiss. They kept looking at each other for a while, Raman brushed his thumb on her lower lip and looked towards the door only to find Mihika and Mihir standing there, lost in each others' eyes.
Raman faked a cough.
"Ohh, bhaai, Bhaabi, you're done, already? Good, acha suno... chalo, neeche chalen?" He said fixing his collar. Ishita hadn't been this embarrassed in all her life. Her sister and and devar... and to-be-jeeju had just witnessed her losing it to her husband, had just witnessed her FIRST KISS?! What the Hell does this Raavan Kumar think of himself? He couldn't even let her FIRST EVER KISS be in proper privacy, and to top it all, the witnesses were HER sister and HIS BROTHER?! CHIII! She cursed him under her breath, she was going as red and hot as ever.
The kiss had transported her to another world altogether, he was so gentle, so promising. She wanted more, oh so much more she knew Raman deliberately did not chuck the idea out of kissing her, and she also knew he couldn't prolong the kiss, all thanks to the intruders. She cursed under her breath again.
Mihika had the cheeky grin on her face and she herself was blushing. Mihir and Mihika left.
A teeny tiny voice inside her heart did tell her that Raman might complete what he had started, and then she did see him advancing towards her, closer, and closer, and more. He stopped right when his face was a few mere inches away from hers, and he tilted his head, and whispered in her ears,
"I think you need to reapply that strawberry-cum-lilacy lipgloss... it tastes amazing, I'd love to have it again... FROM your lips ofcourse" He winked and left the room, not before peeking in and saying "Im waiting for you, make it quick, we have a birthday party to attend"
I would say so so sorry for this delay ...kaan pakadke maafi etc... but with all your "mismatched" and "not related" nonsense that you claim at the start... I won't !!
Yummy update Areena just like Strawberry ☺️
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