ISHRA OS Tagathon # 3:Trouble is a friend - Page 2

Originally posted by: shalu79

Hi Anni Good morning 😊

Thank u for this treat in adv🤗

res:)

Wow Anni Awesome as always 👏

Loved that Raman wanted to admire his wife 😃

n the connection u made with jab we met was awesome.

one more slight similarity, there in movie too that owner/receptionist asked Shahid dont remember exact words bt something like "item kaha mili" n here policemen said "laundiya accchi hai" .

Shahid ne toh haske baat taaldi but our Angry RKB gave one punch to policemen😆

loved their converstion

Once again beautiful OS Anni

Love ur writing style

One thing I noticed may be I m wrong but this is the first time I am seeing ur most of dialogues in Hindi. loved all of them.

Thanks n 🤗 for this

Silly me. u ve already mentioned it in Intro part that u r trying hindi dialogues.

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

Whoa! Aani, first of all thank you for taking this tagathon ahead in such a beautiful way!😊

Hey Isha thank you 😊

Goodness gracious, it was a roller coaster of events! Unbelievable! And I totally agree that this is not your type, yet so fresh out of the oven in a totally different genre with hindi dialogues! You did a great job at it Aani! Dialogues were hilarious and it was so Raman and Ishita who were saying them!😃

LOL I decided to be a little filmy 😆😆 and do a different thing from the norm and also somehow this fic came to me in Hindi since Lucky' last line is mostly in the same language 😳 I am so glad you found the dialogues something IshRa would mouth 😛

I looovvve that you connected the Hotel Decent scene of Jab we met! That's one scene that is favorite to me in the history of movies I have seen! I know every dialogue of that scene by heart! God knows how many times I have watched that scene! Sometimes I only wait for the scene when the movie comes on TV and later change! Well suited for the situation you had created! Absolutely thoughtful of you!!👏

*hi5* I watch that scene and the one in the beginning when Kareena is going on and on and on and the look on Shahid' face when he simply cannot believe how much this girl can talk is priceless 😆😆

There were many snippets in this OS that I liked, but this one is the topper:

He is still lost in his thoughts when he feels her touch his arm and instantly almost recoils from her touch.

"Raman... Sorry."

He sees the rejection on her face, he had not meant to react the way he did upon her touch, it just happened. Her most casual touch burns him and in this proximity, with his current state of mind, he would not be able to hold back. But if he proceeds, he isn't sure what would be the reception from her end and that scares him.

I could totally connect to this! This is what they are going through right now in the show! Very well conveyed Aani! Kudos! 👏

thank you 😳😊

Loved Mihir's and Pathak's reactions to their fight and the laughs later on! Dialogues were bang on again! 😆

I like them as supporting cast, somewhat a first! most shows I cant even stand the side actors but this show has managed to make me react to each and every character - not always in a good way but I cant ignore them so chose to use them 😳

Lucky did a favor to me by tagging on of my fave writers for the next part and you did a favor again by tagging my other favorite Sai!!! 👏

☺️ and I love how Sai writes as well cant wait to see what she comes up with 😃

Can't wait for your part Sai! Come on bring out all your tashan! 😃 Can't wait can't wait! 😃

Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow that was spectacular. I have no words describe it. Trully amazing. The content, concept and the conversation and most importantly the dialogues. Everything was just mindblowing. It was like they were our own ishra in it and I was mesmerized by ur writing. Wonderful job

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hahaha...

god.. you are amazing writer...

i loved the os...

i can so imagine raman faking car breakage... to see ishita.. and

when asked through completely lying through the teeth...

lol... and policewaalas and ishra's connection - i think you too love it...

oh.. but not to forget that they can never be away from their original self...

fighting amongst themselves... and then satisfying their bloated egoes...

and knowing their feelings but scared about other's acceptance..

and not to mention i just loved the part where you subtly mention the pain of ishita after facing so many rejections

She felt objectified each time it happened as she also felt the reject stamp that she received repeatedly. A woman might be appreciated for her beauty but if she is barren, she was discarded as a useless commodity.

this line for me stole the essence of the chapter... isn't it so real when women are treaed as objects and the pain one goes through it and noone enquires about their will.. i seriously loved this line ..

added so aptly...

plus i loved how both of them were coming to conclusions of their own feelings... finally staring the acceptance of a relation beyond ruhi's parents...

and one more thing i liked about is the genuine feelings both of them had for subbu and shagun.. which makes them doubtful of their ownself... i know many people here wants to imagine that they didn't love subbu and shagun at some point but i feel they have had brush with these feelings.. and that makes them unable to trust each other yet...

do keep writing more