ISHRA OS Tagathon # 3:Trouble is a friend

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
awww aani this ws so cute...ofcourse loved those intense lil romantic moments at the park the most...!!

nw waitin for sai's turn..!!

Thanks Nikki waiting for Sai too 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
fantabulous Aani 👏...
loved it to core😊...
aww it was sweet he stopped the car to admire the angel in front of him
but his lie 😆😆 poor Raman phass geya😆...
u sure u first time tried Hindi dialogues, mast Aani u were fab in every dialogue.
specially haryanvi touch... superb tha...
uff this hotel decent always take u too Jab V Met..epic scene 😆
me nd my frnds still laugh like a maniac on this scene 🤣
one of my fav scene too from movie 😳

Hi Meet thanks a lot for this comment and aww thats so sweet of you to say that you liked the lines as much and thank you so much about the laying my doubts to rest about the haryanvi touch 😳😆 somehow I was worried about that and yes my first hindi dialogue fic ever 😊

Ah I find JWM' that scene priceless and still catch it whenever I see the movie playing on TV 😛

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Taking a break and will continue with the replies later 😊 thank you everyone who has liked and commented so far 😃

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Absolutely engrossing and I couldn't stop reading :) .

Both of them seem to be caught in this emotional roller coaster where they are unable to understand their own and the other person's feelings. Each word, each action is a revelation to both of them. More than pride, its the fear of rejection keeping them from exploring this turmoil. Beautifully written by you.

Quite hilarious when Raman was caught in his own lie about the car breakdown. Poor guy did not know how to react 😆. Their conversation about their wedding moments was so touching. I hope they show something like that in the show. Raman went there once when he was in Mumbai and bought up the Rasam episode.

Loved the update Aani 👏. It was fabulous as usual.

Edited by paru_rox - 11 years ago

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Awesome! What an idea, sirjee!😉😆

Loved the quote Aani! Harry Potter!

With Ishita and Raman, I love reading their conversations in Hindi because I think their characters come out and express through the language really well.

Looks like their entire lifetime will pass in hesitating to speak out their true feelings!😆

I wouldn't have minded the post being longer😳😉😃

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awww. this was really amazing

I loved and enjoyed every bit so much 😃

I esp adored the ending with their usual fighting and then laughing together...😳

honestly, I didn't want this to end so please remove that doubt that anyone would get bored with ur spectacular writing...😉 😎

hats off to your fabulous work👏

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Vini

@Fenice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow, just wow!
My cheeks are hurting from smiling so much.
Those Hindi dialogues, especially 'Tera tau' had me ROFLing around.
The situations you created were so unexpected, but pleasantly so.
I loved every single line of the story, and I mean every SINGLE line.
You are really gifted.
Hats off to you and your brilliant writing skills.

Edited by Fenice - 11 years ago

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Shani

@Shanig123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Aani

Thank you for the PM , I decided to take a restroom break to read it as I knew I could not wait to get home ..I was rather impatient . Boy it was a long break but worth every minute .

You have beautifully identified there characters and written it so well that every word went with what has happened thus far with the show . I can only applaud you and tell you what a great witter you are . words you have selected takes even the reader to a whole new level. and leaves us with hope

Well done Aani ...

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

It's so cute that Raman actually stopped the car on purpose just to admire Ishita and then lied about it to her. The chase scene in the park was sweet and I loved how Raman punched the police officer when they commented on Ishita. Just like Mihir and Neil, it amazes me how IshRa can go from fighting to laughing with each other within minutes.

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

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Awieee! This was ADORABLE AANI!

aah! <3 okay, im so so sorry, im VERY VERY fond of all the three writers, really am... Isha, Lucky, Aani... but i will be a bit biased and say this, Aaniii!!! yours was definitely my most favorite of the series 😳

Other than my bias, the reasons could be that Isha and Lucky, collectively... they gave you a build up... a backdrop... and so you had to focus on the meaty content, it automatically gets easier, that way (or so i think? 🤔) lol, and you did exactly that, and trust me when i say i had a HUGE HUGE HUGE grin on my face reading it! REALLY! 😳 I know its never easy for someone to continue SOMEONE ELSES' work... i mean two people... three people... as in however many people... that many different perspectives! How i see a scenario and how you perceive the same can be different and STILL doing so much justice to it? BANG ON! YOU'RE AMAZING. I LOVE YOU.

the fact that Raman lied to HER, to the POLICE, well to EVERYONE except himself about the car breaking down, OMG! ☺️ 😆 😆 that was so cute! Absolutely loved it. Him nihaarofying his beautiful wife was just plain beautiful. Him having to "accept" the truth of having to want to spend time with his wife... AAAH! 🤣 APT! ;) LOVED it yaar! ❤️ this was seriously amazing and i absolutely LOVE HOW and WHERE the story is heading! I really hope the Tagathon never ends and amazing writers like you all keep continuing this for an eternity! 😳

Looking forward to reading what the next writer has in-store for us! 😳

Edited by serendipity. - 11 years ago