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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update..👍🏼

Originally posted by: madhavimanish32

AWSOME UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: Elita

Just love your in-depth portrayal of Raman... his every thought and feeling expressed by you makes me admire the character more and more. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

Aani I love your deep thoughts regarding consequences...

Loved it the way you expressed how Raman's failed marriage affected his siblings and parents...very well thought...

Very nicely implied that wrongs in his family was the consequence of his past life...

As always you have related things happened in the show and those that are going on very well, these thought processes helps see deeper into the characters while watching the show too...

You are making me impatient for the next part...but take ur time...sure u'll keep it up !!!

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

wow what an update Aani...

Hey Meet thank you 😊

superb yaar... i so wish Raman to understand Ishita's point of view regarding Romi in show too... u wrote that part awesome... be it Raman,Ishita,Romi none of them r wrong at their part...

Oh he will may be not immediately but he will in the show as well, as for none of them being wrong, well Romi isnt a bad person per se, he is in a bad company though and has made some horrible mistakes hopefully he will be redeemed, it would be something to see how Ishu transforms her devar, cos I think more than Raman' fear or anger, Ishita' love and support can change Romi. 😳

Romi needs to realize his mistakes nd rather then beating him or sending him to jail, i believe an emotional punishment can work wonders... the worst punishment one can have is guilty...

i so want this in Romi case... like may be Raman can stop talking to him or Ishita too give him cold shoulder etc. aur agar aisa kuchh na hua show mein then tum to ho hi for writing a story for me 😉😆

Oh he will be emotionally compromised I am sure I am not sure about Ishita, but I think Raman may give him a cold shoulder for a while or make it obvious he is highly disappointed with his brother, and that is bound to hit Romi hard. He worships his bro from what we have seen. And abusing him or beating him isnt the solution, no one learns their mistakes if you assault them, rather they have to realize it

loved the part Raman realizing how Ishita has changed his life and taking care of his family...

so in whole awesome update loved it...

well he has acknowledged it on the show too in Tamil no less, so of course he can say it here too 😊

aur han one more thing

don't kill me for this but first time u fast forwarded so many incidents widout making ur post longgg 😳😆... hats off for this 😆

LOL, I elaborate only when needed 😆

kidding han bura mat maan jana... think RKB's aatma entered in my body 😆 *runs away*😆

no probs Meet 😆

Originally posted by: SilverGold

Chapter 3:

This chapter rocked. The way you reasoned out everything was amazing, because I had also thought about this. Although I'm not a student of psychology...yet, I am interested in that subject, and so I had figured out a few of the emotions of the family members. And the Romi fiasco was something I had been betting upon that Romi had felt neglected and jealous of Mihir, and so he did that. Even Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla's emotions and guilt, which ended up in them not being able to give their children the correct upbringing is so to the point. Kudos! You nailed it here! 👍🏼

And yeah, even I don't hold prejudices. I mean we all need to talk right, my tongue is there for a reason! 🤪 I'm silly and crazy that way!

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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Aani... very good update...


Hey Lucky thank you so much no need to be sorry

about the Tolstoy quote... I love this one... I think was the first quote I 'quoted' on this forum, its very special to me.

I love this quote too, its a fav of mine and I find it so valid in a lot of cases, sometimes it amazes me how these few words encompass one of the basic truths of human life

I love reading anything that dives deep into Raman's pysche :) Amazing thoughts about why Romi & Simmi turned out to be the way they did. Subconsciously Raman is feeling guilty!!!

@bold - count me in on that too 😆 well you already know that and I think somewhere though the Bhallas never meant to, they neglected their other kids when Raman' marriage fell apart, and he.. well the poor guy was the victim here, so naturally it never occurred to him how things around him are falling apart with his own kin, someone with an unbiased view like Ishita, who can offer a third person view of the events could only help him see this and once he knows it, Raman is the kind of person who cannot simply do away or wash his hands off of anything he thinks he is responsible for, I hope the show explores this 😳 not because I have written it but because it would be beautiful to see how Raman and Ishita try to work through this 😳

And the way he has punished Romi in your story, I wish it happens that way.

I hope more than punished Romi is made to realize the gravity of his mistakes, you cannot teach someone by punishing them, not with physical abuse of any kind, punishment must be somewhat reforming and thats what made me write this

A few lines I LOVED, for their depth!

He was guilty of not proving her innocent.

He admitted on the show as much when he asks her to forgive him when he comes to get her back, when he says it was my duty to protect you and I will never forgive myself for letting you down but I hope you forgive me

His two brothers - he has never been partial, how can you choose who you love more when you cannot live without either of them.

how can you ever pick one over the other ever - I dont have more siblings just me and my bro, but being the elder one I know if I had to be in Raman' spot I would be so crushed

He cannot curse his stars enough for the misfortune he dealt out to his family by his failed marriage, as he cannot thank them enough for sending them Ishita.

Somewhere Shagun and his divorce have been a major cause of the dysfunction of his family, so I wont be surprised if he curses her and yep Ishita is his miracle

P.S - that last line reminded me of your 'Pieces of a Puzzle' :)

Aww thats so sweet - they are two pieces of a puzzle to me who fit together perfectly, they just dont know it yet 😳

Waiting for the next one :)

Will be up tomm 😃

Originally posted by: Shanig123

Hey Aani yet another amazing chapter . I sure do hope this is what we will see moving forward in YHM and not something so predictable of Romi joining team Vamp. From the time this track began my expectations were very high that CV s will execute this well. in circumstances like this you need to make a young boy be responsible for his own actions if need to mold or break him but eventually to be independent and trust worthy . Your words on Ishita is spot on .

You are one Brilliant writer my dear !!! Thank you