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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

beautifully written n beautifully described too.Wat raman n his family has to go through after his divorce n how their life took U turn with the arrival of ishu.

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Aani I love your deep thoughts regarding consequences...

Loved it the way you expressed how Raman's failed marriage affected his siblings and parents...very well thought...

Very nicely implied that wrongs in his family was the consequence of his past life...

As always you have related things happened in the show and those that are going on very well, these thought processes helps see deeper into the characters while watching the show too...

You are making me impatient for the next part...but take ur time...sure u'll keep it up !!!

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Brb, ive only read the prologue/first chapter, will be done with the remaining two and comment together, here, within a few hours :)

#chores :(

HELLO! 😃

Finally! <33

Firstly, as usual, im really really sory for not keeping up in time... actually ive been rather busy... have had so much to do and its official. HOLIDAYS are WAYY busier than working weeks/exams! SERIOUSLY! Anyways, ab toh aagayi hoon na? 😳 better late than never 😉

I'm in love with Beneath The Surface 😃 i loved the intro and got really excited that you'll be focusing on Ishita? Her pain, her scars, her mushkilen and her betrayed trust... up till now however you wrote Raman... his pain, anguish, betrayal of the heart, betrayed trust, his problems... and how he was learning that EVERY woman is not Shagun... how with every passing happenings and moments he could see the innate difference, comparison between Shagun and Ishita... what Shagun was, certainly Ishita wasn't... and he was thus getting to know her... realizing her.

It was all more like whatever we've seen in Ye Hai Mohabbatein... each pain everything that Ramans gone through and couldnt be portrayed... you put it forward, through your words... youve described it all too well :)

How he was losing his resolve with Ishita in the picture, her being as charming and intriguing in nature as ever and how Raman was coming to explore her, beautiful. And then, the ugly facts coming out... about his family after her arrival... him pondering over it... his GUILT... him being grateful to her and not knowing what exactly to do about it, Everything up till now in your SS is going exactly where YHM is... how it is... and thus, so very relatable 😳 The punishment for Romi was perfect. This would make him really responsible and a better person hopefully. I would really like to see the devar-bhabi bonding. Him trusting his bhabi more than anything, telling her everything... seeking help from her... Ishita should also understand him... i love the real ishita and romi and their bond and this is exactly what i wish for them in the show too 😳

im only done till chapter 3, yet to read the 4th one, will comment on it tonite.

Fab job Aani! Another amazing piece from you! :)

Edited by serendipity. - 11 years ago

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

-updated

Sorry Aani had intended to edit earlier but it's been crazy.

It's so uncanny that you used the Anna Karenina quote, I'm re-reading it after a long time but those lines have always stayed with me.

I loved your exploration of Raman's relationship with Romi. Really struck some chords, sometimes older siblings can overlook the effects of their behavior and it's indirect effect upon our younger siblings. Raman carries so many burdens and it's unfortunate that this whole Romi saga will no doubt make him question himself further. Ultimately it will be another 'moment' in which Ishita will show him another facet of his character and enable him to embrace himself truly. I'm looking forward to the day he is able to embrace himself of all that he is. Became he is a truly beautiful soul.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Res

--- EDITED (Sorry for the delay)

Aani... very good update...

about the Tolstoy quote... I love this one... I think was the first quote I 'quoted' on this forum, its very special to me.

I love reading anything that dives deep into Raman's pysche :) Amazing thoughts about why Romi & Simmi turned out to be the way they did. Subconsciously Raman is feeling guilty!!!

And the way he has punished Romi in your story, I wish it happens that way.

A few lines I LOVED, for their depth!

He was guilty of not proving her innocent.

His two brothers - he has never been partial, how can you choose who you love more when you cannot live without either of them.

He cannot curse his stars enough for the misfortune he dealt out to his family by his failed marriage, as he cannot thank them enough for sending them Ishita.

P.S - that last line reminded me of your 'Pieces of a Puzzle' :)

Waiting for the next one :)

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

wow what an update Aani...

superb yaar... i so wish Raman to understand Ishita's point of view regarding Romi in show too... u wrote that part awesome... be it Raman,Ishita,Romi none of them r wrong at their part... Romi needs to realize his mistakes nd rather then beating him or sending him to jail, i believe an emotional punishment can work wonders... the worst punishment one can have is guilty...

i so want this in Romi case... like may be Raman can stop talking to him or Ishita too give him cold shoulder etc. aur agar aisa kuchh na hua show mein then tum to ho hi for writing a story for me 😉😆

loved the part Raman realizing how Ishita has changed his life and taking care of his family...

so in whole awesome update loved it...

aur han one more thing

don't kill me for this but first time u fast forwarded so many incidents widout making ur post longgg 😳😆... hats off for this 😆

kidding han bura mat maan jana... think RKB's aatma entered in my body 😆 *runs away*😆

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

interesting update..👍🏼

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Shona

@SilverGold

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Chapter 3:

This chapter rocked. The way you reasoned out everything was amazing, because I had also thought about this. Although I'm not a student of psychology...yet, I am interested in that subject, and so I had figured out a few of the emotions of the family members. And the Romi fiasco was something I had been betting upon that Romi had felt neglected and jealous of Mihir, and so he did that. Even Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla's emotions and guilt, which ended up in them not being able to give their children the correct upbringing is so to the point. Kudos! You nailed it here! 👍🏼

And yeah, even I don't hold prejudices. I mean we all need to talk right, my tongue is there for a reason! 🤪 I'm silly and crazy that way!

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

loved it.. had tears in my eyes whil reading it.. plz write more i love reading your writing :)

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Shani

@Shanig123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Hey Aani yet another amazing chapter . I sure do hope this is what we will see moving forward in YHM and not something so predictable of Romi joining team Vamp. From the time this track began my expectations were very high that CV s will execute this well. in circumstances like this you need to make a young boy be responsible for his own actions if need to mold or break him but eventually to be independent and trust worthy . Your words on Ishita is spot on .

You are one Brilliant writer my dear !!! Thank you

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