Ishra SS: Biwi ho to aisi ;) part 5 updated ;)

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Ishra SS: Biwi Ho To Aisi 😉😎
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Chapter 1 :Below

Hello everyone :D Im back with my second OS! Apologies in advance as this OS is a bit too long but I dunno I just like to detail things in my writings.. so warning for those who aren't that much into reading :P Please give me your feedback be it positive or negative as I always want to improve :) I can continue this if you guys think I should? (: happy reading and hope you like this concept :)

Raman at the hospital with Mihir; they see Adi weeping at the far end of the corridor, next to the room where Shagun was admitted. They paced towards him and notice that not just Adi but police was also there.

Raman: Adi, kya hua ye sab... [looking confused by seeing the plice officers there]

Aditya: [stands up, and looks angrily at Raman] He's the one! Inhi ki waja se meri mom ki ye halat hai [he points at Raman]

Police Officer: are you sure beta?

Raman: Beta ye sab kya bol ra hai tu? [he was shocked by Adi's behaviour]

Aditya: police officer; please arrest this man as he's the only reason why my mom tried to commit suicide. She was being mentally tortured by this man and I hate him! Please arrest him for the lifetime or if possible sentence him to death!

Raman was heartbroken. His son accusing him for the reason of that witch's suicide attempt and wanting him to get hanged to death made him feel like he was dead already! How could his son say something of him in such way! Itni nafrat from him was killing him... that too when he was always innocent! How he wishes that Shagun had actually died... he cursed his fate for marrying such a women!

Police officer: Dekhiye beta ap shant ho jaiye. Don't worry we won't leave this man agar inhi ki waja se Miss Shagun ne suicide attempt kiya hai.. .Lekin use pehle I will have to take Miss Shagun's statement as well. So tab tak ap please wait keejiye.

The police officer went to take Doctor's permission if he can meet the patient. Meanwhile, Param and Ashok also reached there. They saw Raman standing outside the room in such a poor state and while walking inside Shagun's room, they passed their smirks to Raman. Raman was disgusted by seeing them and he loathed both the men!

Nurse: Sir you can't enter the room until you get Doctor's permission as the patient is not in a condition to talk just yet.

Ashok: We already have doctor's permission so don't worry.

After that, they went inside the room.

In the Engagement hall

Ishita was really hurt that, Raman, who she had put so much efforts for learning this new and such complicated language Punjabi wasn't even there to hear her speech.

Lekin aisi b kya emergency aayi hogi ki unhe achanak jana pada.. ? Jab meine speech start kia to genuinely laga ki wo kafi khush the, fir achanak aise kyu chale gaye... ? [Confusion was all over her face] Pata ni mujhe aisa kyu feel ho ra hai ki kuch to gadbad hai! Romi ko shayad pata ho .. haan? Usi se puchdi han.. what the mein punjabi! Kuch bhi!

She started looking for Romi in the hall and there she saw him worried, trying to make calls on his mobile phone. She had a gut feeling that this had something to do with Raman. Reaching up to him, she placed her hands on his shoulder, Romi turned around.

Romi: [with the fake smile] jee bhabhi, sab theek hai na?

Ishita: nahi Romi sab theek ni hai

Romi: [got tensed for his bhabhi] kya hua bhabhi? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya? Naam batao chodunga ni use! [he placed his hands on Ishita's shoulder, trying to comfort her]

Ishita was so touched by her sweet Devar's concern for her and she was sure now that if Romi knew what was happening he won't hide anything from her anymore. So she started,

Ishita: Romi mujhe sach sach batana ki ye achanak kidhar gaye? And don't say ki tumhe ni pata as I've been observing from a long time that you're very tensed since the moment Raman left. So please I request you to not hide anything from me, mujhe bohot fikar ho ri hai Raman ke liye [she pleaded by folding her hands in front of him]

Romi was touched and emotional by Ishita's request. How can he hide something from her. In fact she's Bhai's wife and has all the rights to know what's happening.

Romi: Bhabhi pehle to app please mere aage aise haath mat jodo [he held Ishita's hands in his] and mein apko sab batata hun. I'm sorry ki meine apko pehle ni bataya.. Wo Raman bhai ko Adi ka call aya and he told him ki Shagun ne suicide attempt kia hai for Raman Bhai. Us ne apne aap ko aag laga lee and ab uska chehra b poori tara kharab ho gaya hai and police officer ko Adi ne statement dee hai ki Shagun ne ye sab Raman Bhai ke mental torture ki waja se kiya hai!

Ishita was traumatized by the news she got from Romi. She didn't have a slight idea that this could be the reason for Raman's all of a sudden absence. She was worried like hell for Raman!

Ishita: Romi mujhe please jaldi se jaldi Raman ke pass le chalo, I need to be with him [she pleaded again, with tears in her eyes]

Romi: [wiping Ishita's tears] Bhabhi aap royie mat and don't worry Niel saath gaya hai or Mihir b. Sab theek ho jaega ap tension mat lo.

Ishita: Kya? Mein tension na lu? Wo mere pati hai Romi and unpe itna bada jhoota ilzaam lagaya jaa raha hai and tum keh re ho ki mein tension na lu! Romi agar tum mujhe ni le jaoge to mein khud unhe milne chali jaungi but there's no way I'm going to stay home and do nothing! [she was about to walk away, when Romi held her hands]

Romi: Bhabhi ap akele mat jao, mein leke chalta hu apko.

They both rushed to the hospital, where Romi drove at the highest speed of his bike with Ishita behind. Ishita just couldn't believe that Shagun would commit suicide, she never loved Raman that was for sure than why would she burn herself for him when all she wanted was money and fame and nothing else. The idea of her commiting suicide didn't go well with her. Something was definitely fishy!

Her thoughts were interrupted by a sudden halt of the bike.

Ishita: Kya hua Romi, bike kyu roki?

Romi: Wo bhabhi aage ka rasta band kia hua hai police ne!

Ishita: Ab kya karenge Romi, Mujhe inke paas jaldi se jaldi jana hai or oopar se ye!

Romi: Bhabhi yaad aaya hospital ke liye hum zirakpur wale highway se nikalte hai. Panch das minute extra lagenge par fir b time se pohonchenge.

At the hospital:

Ashok and Parmeet came outside the ward.

Police Officer: If you don't mind can I go in and take the patient's statement?

Doctor: Yes you may go in

Ashok: Adi beta, ab ap driver ke sath ghar jao mumma is out of danger. And don't worry Raman ko koi ni bacha sakta ab so aaram se ghar jao mein thodi der mein tumse milta hu okay?

Raman hated how Ashok called his son Beta' in fact he loathed ashok and Shagun for ruining his life.

Aditya: Okay dad.

He left with Ashok's driver.

Romi and Ishita reached the hospital. They asked the receptionist about Shagun's details and after that they started running towards the room. While running Ishita bumped into a women covered with burkha.

Romi didn't realise Ishita was behind and he kept running.

Ishita: I'm sorry

Saying that she was about to run when her eyes caught the lady picking up her clutch from the ground. She had seen the same clutch somewhere but where...

Oh yes, ye to Shagun ka hi clutch hai, how can I forget jis tara se isne mere haath pe rakha tha by claiming that Raman still loved her!! Look at the guts of that witch! Raman chahe jitni marzi bezati karle uski but wo baaz ni aati! Khair accha hi hua isne us din mere haath mein rakha alls well that ends well! Mujhe pehle se hi gadbad lag ri thi .. kuch to karna padega! Mere husband ka sawaal hai and I won't let him down due to these cheapster's tricks! Shagun tum bhale hi kameengiri mein kam nahi but mein bhi Ishita Raman Bhalla hu and dekhti hu ki tum mere husband ko kaise chot pohonchati ho!

Ishita: excuse me mam, can I please ask you for a favour?

Lady: [confused] hmm [nods]

Ishita: I can recognise her voice its her! Bitch I won't leave you ab!! Wo mam meri beti ka accident ho gaya hai and she's in a very critical state. I need to go see her can you please take me to room no 453. Pichle 10 min se dhoond rahi hu nayi mil ra [ she pleaded her hands in front of the lady]

Ruhi ko kya hua, meri beti ka accident!i need to go see her agar use kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga... [she was panicking and quickly started moving towards the room no 453]

What she didn't realise was that this was all Ishita's trick to take Shagun to the room next to Raman's.

Mere lie tumhe akele waha le jana mushkil tha Shagun so this is the move I made ab tumhe batati hu ki kuttagiri kya hoti hai agar tumhe jail main sari umar na sadwaya to mera naam b Ishita raman bhalla nahi! Im sorry ki meine Ruhi ke bare mein aise bola but Shagun ko dhakka ni lagta to wo mere sath chalne ko razi na hoti.

Police officer: you are under arrest Mr Raman Bhalla for mentally harassing and torturing your ex wife Shagun.

Raman: I haven't done anything sir! Trust me I hardly talked to her apart from the social gatherings... meine kuch ni kia hai!

Police officer: We found this letter from Shagun which clearly blames you for her suicide attempt. Now I hope you won't argue anymore and let us do our duty without being interrupted.

Niel: Sir you cant arrest him just on the basis of the letter! How do you know if it is Shagun who wrote this as a lawyer I know you will need to provide proof of Shagun's hand writing.

Police officer: hamme mat bataiye ki humme kya karna hai! Handwriting match ho chuki hai.. hawaldar hatkadi pehanao inhe

Raman: Dekhiye meine kuch ni kia hai why the hell can't you understand?

The police officer was about to put the handcuff on Raman's wrist that at that very moment Ishita got there with the lady. Ishita had messaged Romi while walking to the room about what needs to be done and that all this suicide scene is nothing but a cheap trick to get Raman in jail. Ishita quickly signalled Romi to do his bit. Romi came and grabbed that lady's hand so she couldn't run away.

Raman on the other hand felt terrible for being trapped in such a situation where according to him no one could save him. He really wished Ishita was there so that he could meet her once and explain that he hadn't done anything. Seems like god really loved him, that at that very moment Ishita appeared with tears in her eyes. Her eyes were so puffy, he knew she had been crying ever since he left. He wanted to tell her that everything will be alright yet the words weren't coming out. He didn't exactly know what to say. He was about to walk up to her when he saw her going towards the Police officer.

Ishita: Officer do you have any picture of Miss Shagun?

Everyone was confused including Raman that why is she asking the officer for Shagun's picture when she has seen Shagun herself.

Officer: Yeah I do [he shows Ishita the picture]

Ishita: Well then you are saying ki is lady ne apne ap ko aag laga li right?

Officer: yes, she's admitted inside the ward

Ishita: accha, kya apne uska chehra dekha hai?

Officer: jee nahi as it's all burnt

Ishita: or baki ki body bhi jal gayi kya?

Officer: jee nahi and dekhiye ap hamara waqt na barbaad kare and hawaldar leke chalo inhe

Ishita: Don't you dare touch my husband you get that?

Ishita yelled at the officer and sub inspector

Raman, Mihir, Romi and Niel were shocked by that.

Officer: mam apne interrupt kia to apko b andar daal denge. This is the last warning

Ishita: shut up! Pehle to arrest warrant dikhao fir baat karungi

Niel felt so stupid to not have asked for that earlier...

Officer: dekhiye madam pehle to tameez se baat keejiye or maana arrest warrant ni hai but fir be humme ye letter mila hai Miss Shagun ka

Ishita: tum jaise stupid officer se aise hi baat karni aati hai mujhe! God knows tumhe officer kisne banaya!! [she snatches the letter from officer] ye letter means nothing you get that [saying that she rips it into pieces]

In the meanwhile media comes to the hospital

Media: mam kya ye sach hai that this officer is corrupted?

Ishita: yes ye officer ke naam ka tuccha aadmi ek no ka cheat hai ... ashok khanna ke talve chaat ta hai ye aadmi

Officer: how dare you say that about me

Ishita: [slaps him twice] tum jaise tucche officers ki waja se mere jaise pati suffer karte hain !! and jahan baat hai shagun ki so Romi zara us mohatarma ke oopar se burka to hatana!

Romi takes off the burkha from her face and its indeed shagun! Ishita walks up to Shagun and gives her two tight slaps on both sides of her face!

Ishita: ainda agar apni nazar mere husband pe daali yea unko hurt karne ki koshish ki to wahi ke wahi jaan le lungi tumhari bhalle hi mujhe fansi ho jaye! [she slaps her again] this one's for playing with my husband's feelings [she again slaps her]

Everyone here this man Ashok Bhalla bribed this useless officer for framing Raman because ye ashok is world ka sabse bada loser hai. Che fut do inch ke paaz zara sa b dimag nahi hai and that's why mere husband ke aage ye kahi stand ni karte to jab tak Raman hai industry mein tab tak ye lambu kahi ni stand karta and that's why he tried to frame my husband !! but lemme tell you loser khanna that one can never beat Raman in anything and have a nice time in jail!

Param, ashok, shagun, officer are arrested!

Raman was soo happy today, not because he was proved innocent but because he loved how his wife stood by his side today, he loved how she supported him and proved him right in front of everyone and the media. He didn't know his soft spoken wife was such a strong person and smart too. He was so shocked by her detective skills. Mrs James Bond Raman Bhalla.

They reached home, Romi on his bike with Mihir and raman and Ishita in Raman's car. Raman and Ishita were about to enter their house when Raman held her hand and stopped her

Raman: Ishita aaj mera saath dene ke lie thanks.. meine to soch liya tha ki ab shayad I'll be in jail for the rest of my life yet unexpectedly tum aayi and stood by me.

Ishita: Wo kya hai na us din dance se pehle promise jo kia tha ki mein hamesha apka saath dungi, so being the wife of CEO Raman Bhalla I couldn't back out from my promise you see. Or Raman I know you so well ki mujhe pata hai ki meri Ruhi ke papa kabhi galat ni kar sakte to bas fir jo bhi apke raste ayega oodi ta band bajani uppa ;)

Raman: wah meri Jhansi ki rani Punjabi tere utte kinni change lagdi aa

Ishita: tahi ta tussi meri speech add vichale chadd ke gaye see ni? [she faked her anger and quickly left inside the room]

Toshi: leh aa gaye mere dono puttar gee 😊 kitthe gaye see dove party cho? Kisi ko b iddhar ni pata ki kaha the tum dono...

Ishita: Wo mummy g kii dassan Raman nu meri speech inni changi lagi ki o mennu walk te lae gaye

Raman: Ye Jhansi ki rani marwaegi :P waise kafi smart hai, kab kaha konsi baat karni hoti hai isse acche se pata chal jata hai.. Aakhir Biwi kiski hai ;)

So guys abhi ke lie itna hi :P if you want me to continue than please lemme know I have the next part ready already :P haha this os was getting too long so had to chop it off here only :P but if you would like to read more please lemme know :) I'll post the next part too :* :*

Deepika ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS!! I liked how Ishita exposed Shagun's dirty trick and managed to save Raman from getting arrested.
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Nice os...
Love the way she exposed shagun...
Mrs. Bond raman kumar bhalla...
Shagun get so many slap ...well deserved by her
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Loved it so muchhh
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Thankyou everyone 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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i loved ishu character here
esply the lioness ishu role...

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Very Nice. It was nice to read how Ishita reacted when she heard about the incident n how she dealt with Shagun n Police officer was interesting. I liked it. Waiting for your next OS.
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DO COntinue yaar ...Update the next part soon ...if possible today only ...😆
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Wow this was awesome, i loved it
Shagun ashok deserve a life sentence, but what the hell will happen to adi, with whom will he live with then?? He will have to come to raman, i suppose? Can ishita help him reform??

If u continue, thats great, pm me :)
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That was awesome and so fun to read.
Shagun in a Gurkha and Ishita band bajaoing police officer.

Loved it. OS ho to aisi😆
Edited by eternalasha - 11 years ago

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