Ishra SS: Biwi ho to aisi ;) part 5 updated ;) - Page 4

Originally posted by: dkapi1

Shagun and Ashok won't be sentenced for life but for a few years they will be in Jail. Param will sado in jail for baki ki zindagi 😆 Adi won't reform and will still hate Raman and his family... he was involved in that plan with his mom and Ashok and he knew that Shagun was alive! he played that drama to get Raman arrested!! wo abhi ni sudhrega and in my next update you will see ki kya hoga uska 😊

I will definitely Pm you and thanks a ton for liking my work 🤗

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Aw!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 Raman was Jealous!!! 😆 Aha🤪

lOved it!❤️ 👏

Aw!😳 The last scene was so cute!😃

Ty for the PM!😉

Is their a part 3 to this?

Thanks for liking it 🤗😃 and yes there's a part 3 as I have turned this OS into an SS 😊 I'll surely PM you soon for the next part

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

I'm sorry that this is the first thing i'm writing,

but the 24th line says RAMA. I ROFL'd at it for 2 minutes. Coffee date ki yaad dila di. 🤣🤣

But don't edit it please.

I love it when Romi teases IshRa like this.😳

I hope abhi toh sudhar jaye Adi, kyunki ab toh un dono se dur rahega.🤓

Oh My! Raman Kumar Bhalla is jealous of Romi! 😆

Aww.. Romi asked Ishu if she had dinner. And usne sandwich banayi unke liye. That was so cute.🥱

Chuchundar? 🤣

Ishita: Ravan meine raat ko uth ke tumhare lie paranthe banaye hai with tea so don't you dare leave the food and sleep! Chup chap khao fir jo marzi karna!

Awesome! 🤣

But end mein he hugged her and slept away!

But seriously, when Romi was speaking with Ishu in the kitchen, I wanted to give him a sweet hug. 🤗

I would love it if you turn this into an ss/ff too.

And maybe you should add "updated" to the topic title so that others can know about it.😛

And, Oh yes, Thank you for the PM.👍🏼

Rama was there by mistake but even I couldn't help laughing as I remembered the coffee date scene haha I won't change it to and devar bhabhi bonding bohot strong hoti hai in Punjabis but strangely they haven't shown much on that in the show so meine hi unki bonding dikha dee instead of using Bala for jalaufying Ravan, I'm using the sweet sweet Devar

Originally posted by: felciya

Very Nice. Romi and Ishita shared a very good bond . It was refreshing. Thank You for the PM. Waiting for your next update. I would like to read FF/SS in this concept.It's fine for me. So Go ahead Girl.

Originally posted by: eternalasha

Love the bhabhi devar relationship.

Ha ha ab green chilka ka rang Raman ka ho raha hai. Band namaste raho Romi.

Midnight paratha feast for Raman and hug with Ishu ... Yummy

Originally posted by: pkaur92

Omg this next part is so cutee!! They should definitely show the bhabhi devar angle in the show more frequently, bcoz in punjabi families devars and bhabhis get along ao well...well done for showing us this angle so nicely, and thank god someone made ravam kumar jealous lol

Thank god that adi is in hostel, dont like him one bit, but i guess not his fault, stupid shagun and ashok

Waiting to see what happens from the villains side maybe in the next part...? Will u be extending this or starting an os? If u do keep me in your pm list, anf thanks for pming me for this one..

Youre a great writer, and i love long parts to the os, they keep the story flowing !! :)

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Thankyou for ur great comments yaar 🤗🤗🤗 Dil khush kar ditta saada 😉😊 And yea I know ae sadde punjabian che ta Devar Bhabhi are like best buddies but show mein ye bonding gayab hai 😕 or meine Bala ki jaga Romi ko rakh ke mauke pe chauka marwaya 🤣🤣🤣 Adi ko tussi ta ki koi v ni pasand karda 🤣 oo te hale ni sudharan wala 😵 villians ki side abhi thodi der ke lie shaant hai as they all are pissauing chakki in jail 🤣🤣 and yes this OS is now extended and converted into SS 😊 I will Pm you the next update as soon as I will Update it 😉😃

Edited by dkapi1 - 11 years ago