Playing With Fire - An IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: PagliLadki

Loved it!

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

Hi!

Not p**n at all. Erotica indeed.😉

We don't want you to stop writing such things. Let your imagination run wild lady. (pun intended) Only the underage seem to be a bit too many here. Grrr.

😆😳

Coming to the OS, it was written quite skilfully. The part at the end where Ishita Taunted Raman was the highlight. Poor Raman was having such a tough time throughout the party😆

If you could write something in continuation with this, where Raman finally loses control😉 A la icing on the cake.

By the way, I really hope you don't mind this😊, but it would become more enjoyable if the tense were uniform throughout., you know. I know you haven't proofread it, which is why you should not take this seriously.😊

Love

RDC

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey Pareena thank you 😊

@bold -😆😆 I would if I could but you mentioned a major problem yourself, and I dont want to be held responsible for corrupting the impressionable 😳

@red - that was my fav bit to write 😉 and poor Raman is so gonna have a crisis one of these days considering the marriage rituals it seems to me have just begun 😛

@blue - at the moment I cant *ahem* visualize the scenario if you get my drift😉 if I do I would gladly share ☺️

@pink - thank you for mentioning this by the time I actually was free enough to go through with this it was already too late so will try to be more careful the next time 😳

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

You call me Pareena. I should know your name too. Is it Aani?😊

I completely understand. I couldn't believe it when a 14 year old practically assaulted me on my thread(Llovera, you know) just because I'd written that only 18+ people should have been reading that. She was proud that she'd understood the o****m thingy😲 She could've lied for the sake of my mind, at least.

Bonkers, I tell you. Unki bhalaayi ke liye hi toh kehti hoon, but these curious teens and pre-teens do not get the "impression"😆 (plural yes, cause I encountered more)

Marriage rituals have just begun--Exactly. Hmm. I see loads of IshRa entertainment and sexual tension round the corner. If only next week's spoilers didn't feature Shagun(and her manipulation of Aditya😡)

Anyway, thanks for writing such lovely, looong(satisfyingly so) , erotic(not all, relax) and grammatically super-impressive OSs😆

Originally posted by: KReyAS

awsom

Originally posted by: Rozy77

wow, this was amazing⭐️

too good dear👍🏼

I had a good laugh😆

I loved every single thing😃😃

descriptions were spot on for raman; his desires n his effort to control them⭐️😆

ishita was so awesome 😎... just loved that she had the last say n laugh😆

ur truly a gifted writer⭐️

will try to catch up with all ur stories...

take care

Originally posted by: PyaarDostiHai

Wait you're not continuing this?! Why not???

You're a very good writer. They haven't even done anything yet i'm sweating 😆

Keep up the great (and hot) work! ☺️👍🏼