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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: iaddiction
OMG! this is sooo beautifully written! Had me hooked till the end. In front of this YHM is like a pg13 show.
👏👏

Loved Ishu.
Was a bit disappointed with Raman's force on Ishu and Ishu's confidence of having better men. But, other than that I loved it to bits and pieces. 😉

thanks dear 😊

@bold - LOL but its my inspiration and certain scenes in the show I would say are bold for the show considering this is on Indian TV 😳

@blue - well he is frustrated and as for her... many of us believe Ishita had lots of options Raman def is the luckier one here 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: lourel24
superb.I loved a lot ishu's ans.poor raman haal pehle se behaal tha aab to ... 😉 tsk! tsk!

thanks Lourel 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

im chitvan:)

I cant wait for my exams to get over so dat I can read other works of urs.. :)

Hey Chitvan thanks for letting me know your name and best of luck for your exams 😃

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sai

@sai14

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

I missed this one. I am glad i found it because this is amazing.

haha i love Ishita's come back. Raman Kumar Bhalla has met his match. You portrayed Raman's "dilemma" in a great way. very hot and amazing!

if yhm is ever looking for a writer or even guest writer you should definitely apply 😆 We will see so much of Ishra romance!

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Zinat

@zinatf

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Dear, you have been my favourite writer in this foru. I always read your FFs and eagerly wait for our updates. Woman, you have to make this one a SS or at least finish it with the consummation part...ab aur nahin raha jaayega especially after reading this...

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Aditi Sharma

@AditiDoc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Really nice OS! Loved how you portrayed Raman's thoughts!

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sai14
I missed this one. I am glad i found it because this is amazing.
haha i love Ishita's come back. Raman Kumar Bhalla has met his match. You portrayed Raman's "dilemma" in a great way. very hot and amazing!

if yhm is ever looking for a writer or even guest writer you should definitely apply 😆 We will see so much of Ishra romance!

Thanks Sai 😊

@bold - yep and even she said so - biwi takkar ki mili hai 🤣 You cant even imagine the level of happiness I had felt when that scene aired 😛

@red - 😆😆 though my content is not that EXPLICIT I doubt they would air even that considering I do not shy away from certain things, but if they do wanna use my stuff I am open to it 😉

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: fzin1
Dear, you have been my favourite writer in this foru. I always read your FFs and eagerly wait for our updates. Woman, you have to make this one a SS or at least finish it with the consummation part...ab aur nahin raha jaayega especially after reading this...

Thanks dear but this is as far as this story goes, I dont even see them in love yet to be honest so cannot write a consummation scenario as of yet if I ever do find myself there, it will surely appear here 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: AditiDoc
Really nice OS! Loved how you portrayed Raman's thoughts!

thanks a lot Aditi 😊

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Hi!

Not p**n at all. Erotica indeed.😉

We don't want you to stop writing such things. Let your imagination run wild lady. (pun intended) Only the underage seem to be a bit too many here. Grrr.

😆😳

Coming to the OS, it was written quite skilfully. The part at the end where Ishita Taunted Raman was the highlight. Poor Raman was having such a tough time throughout the party😆

If you could write something in continuation with this, where Raman finally loses control😉 A la icing on the cake.

By the way, I really hope you don't mind this😊, but it would become more enjoyable if the tense were uniform throughout., you know. I know you haven't proofread it, which is why you should not take this seriously.😊

Love

RDC

Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago

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