Playing With Fire - An IshRa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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and yayyy i was waiting for you to write something 😆

*** I am back
Aani,
Thanks for respecting my wish for a disclaimer sweetheart😆 I still went ahead and read it while at work anyway 😉

Hey Lucky thanks for this comment 😆😆 ah I kept my word and as I did say my duty was done 😳

So i will comments in 2 parts here. The first one as a serious reader and the second, well you know 😛

😆😆 sure I do and I like this idea 😛

Part # 1 - LOVED the quote.

I found it apt 😳
- You have caught the thing that was on my mind too (again😊). She dressed up for 'revenge'. And he totally deserved it too. And the fact that he knows her intention, thats perfect

Yep her expressions were a clear indication of her purpose and when Raman was bowled over she had that mission successful vibe 😆😆

- Thanks for including that rain sequence. I don't know if I told you before, but that was the part where 'found' my Raman. He gives her the coat, but when she refuses he says something like, if you didnt need my help then why did you hold my hand when you were falling down earlier. That was the moment I fell in love with the show. If they had shown her taking his coat and then a couple of eyelocks lasting 5 mins, I think I would have stopped watching then. So thank you for reminding me of that 😊

OMG 😲😲 connection for sure Lucky that scene got me hooked to the show - its not a cliche rain scene for the reasons I gave in my os and you in the above comment, you can see the sparks flying here but not in the in your face way - its a slow burn, very subtle which is what made me take note of the show and the couple, they werent projecting physical attraction as the sole basis of a couple coming together like the tons of shows out there - there was this spark but also a clash of egos and wills - he kept his distance even when he offered to help, but his way was callous which is why she reused to accept it and he got annoyed - hope I made sense here 🤔 but it was obvious from this one seq - this is a love story of two very strong individuals who are bullheaded in their own way - no one can be deemed wrong nor can they be wholly right 😳

- Interesting angle on his libido. I know the show won't address it, but in real life, his turmoil (about satisfying his needs) would be so profound. I am glad you wrote about it. and very perceptive too

yep I feel as a man who perhaps has gone celibate since years now... his attraction for his wife which he is trying hard to fight is obvious but as you said the show wont obviously address it in a in your face way though you catch a glimpse if you can - like his bites 😆😆, than the 360 degree comment - its a giveaway of what he is doing in a very comical way though and yes the button scene also recently after they got trapped in that curtain he made no attempt to free them and enjoyed the intimacy of having a woman in his arms - I dont buy Raman being unable to find a way esp since his reason was so lame - I am tired like from what huh?🤔 😆😆

- His uneasiness at his growing attraction towards his wife... you have very vividly described it. Seriously, you know how much I love posts about inner turmoils 😆and characters 'thinking' about stuff. I loved this part too

Yep he is uneasy about being attracted to Ishita - he displayed that during the locked in scenario, yep he checks her out totally but he yells and fights just to keep her away... all of them are excuses since he is scared of acting on his feelings and of her reaction as well 😳

- As a continuation of the last point, you have so aptly described his frustrations with the fact that he cannot actually act on his attraction. Seriously, I would LOVE to see this in the show, and they way you wrote, I could imagine KP's expressions.

oh KP actually manages the expressions in this dept pretty well 😆😆 all the biting is evidence of that LMAO

- He lost his temper. WOW. that was so like him. How much more can a man tolerate no? He's already frustrated, she's tempting him and then she callously says something that could mean something entirely different. He had to snap.

Yep thats Raman for you, he loses his temper easy and here you have explained the reasons pretty well 😳

- He apologised immediately... NOw that is difficult for me to imagine 😆 and that too without any one-liners... don't make him too soft girl. I will not forgive you for that 😡😆

LOL he wants to stay SOFT Lucky 😉 🤣 ok jokes apart - this was because of the Perv incident - i actually included this because when the family stupidly believes Ishita is pregnant and ishRa have that fight- he says about her not being able to conceive and the look on her face makes him THINK for a second and he says how can she be pregnant when they aren't in a conjugal relationship... since they sleep apart - it shows he can be sensitive too, here he knows the blame of being called a characterless woman has hurt her once, he nearly did the same mistake again and so he said sorry here 😳

Part # 2
- forget everything i wrote in part 1😛 clean slate. imagine another reader writing this😆
- Haila aani... it wasnt remotely as evocative as the last one. why do you think this was like the 4 letter word you used... it was very maturely written my dear👏

exactly.. this piece wasnt meant to be evocative or graphic in nature but dealt with things if you notice them - his uneasy gait - that highlights his state, his need to go to the restroom to relieve himself and lastly the premature angle - I think a certain amount of sensibility is needed to discuss these topics in the right way hence the disclaimer 😳

- the way you described his turmoil through his actions. He has trouble walking huh? <ahem> That was priceless.

ahem exactly 😉 😆😆 sometimes less is MORE 😆😆
- Down Boy... CLASSIC. reminds me of a very infamous scene from an infamous movie... Wont say anything more😳

really?? I had heard it in some movie I cant recall which is the one you thought of here PM me 😛 😆😆

- the last 2 scenes... from the bathroom to outside... please can we have something similar on the show... Please please (says she looking up at the heavens). They were FUN and 'something else' <ahem> at the same time.


LOL I wish but I dont think so it will happen alas
As I end every reply to you with quotes... here goes one for you on how she looked last night

"A woman's dress should be like a barbed-wire fence: serving its purpose without obstructing the view." - Sophia Loren


Oh wow that quote is something gal 😎 so saving it perhaps it can be useful to me in the future 😉🤣

P.S: I am a very fast reader, so it took me 10 times longer to write this reply. and i am not exaggerating for poetic effect.

Oh I trust you 😃... I am very fast at reading too but typing does take time 😳

I am not watching the dance segments that came out today, and not participating in discussions in posts because I want to be surprised 😃 so i was hoping, praying that you would make a post today. and that it would be so un-related to the dance, that I can read and reply my heart out... Someone out there likes me I guess 😛

oh the segs sigh they are mindblowing i cant wait for the epi and am so glad I could fulfill this lil wish 😳😊

Did i tell you yet that i LOVED this OS???😕😆

I figured as much thank you Lucky 🤗

Originally posted by: shalu79

yippee

I m always exicted to read OS from u

was happy to see one in Index

was desperately waiting for one

After seeing intense n passionate salsa of Ishra in SBS/SBB segment ur Os was like icing on d cake.

I loved how u mentioned Raman remembered abt that rain scene n clinic from past.

also loved this part

He had tried to visit an escort once too but he simply could not go through with it. He had ended up sending the payment without even meeting her. He was not been raised in the way- he cannot even imagine what would make women so desperate or helpless enough that they would prostitute themselves. Alcohol became his reprieve.

It shows how strong his values are n also how much he respect intimacy n women even if he had very bad experience with one.

Loved how u expressed his love n desire for Ishu.

n end was perfect n hilarious

The king of oneliner n witty remark was speechless after what his wife said

Once again a brilliant OS Anni

Thank s n big 🤗 to u

Originally posted by: Bruce_L

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Aani, THANK YOU SO MUCH 🤗 🤗
That too matter of within just a few hours !!! This itself says how outstanding you're at writing !
L and L (Love and Lust) was the only thing that preoccupied his mind at that moment when he saw her.
And you have put it in exact words what were the actual thoughts running in his mind when his wife walked in beautifully.
Ishu is no less too.
Since the length of the scene has always been an issue, so rather thought of reading it in an OS and requested you!
Liked your elaboration of this part that always you do !
So just one word, FAB !!!
Once again, Thank you so much Aani 🤗

Originally posted by: CharmGal

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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

I LOVE U...🤣

I love you too 🤗
aaj khush toh main BAHUT ZYAADA HOON...🥳

Aww hamesha aise hi rehna 😃

**rushin to read OS**

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awww this ws truly AN EROTIC OS aani...!!i felt lik i ws LITREALLY WATCHIN YHM epi infront of my eyes.....

☺️ thanks Nikki

i think i should regularly bhi khaffa with u coz then i would get such FANTABULOUS HEAVENLY OS by u in return...😆😉

🤣🤣 oye blackmail kar rahi hai kya? 😲🤣

thnx a lot lot aani...luv uuu 🤗

love ya 🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗