Playing With Fire - An IshRa OS

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

haan blackmailin u KHULKE... 🤣

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

loved it ! ishita toying with poor raman emotions 👏😆 it was a treat to read your OS !

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Goddd...its unfair to write so beautifully ...girl u r so so so talented ..loved the way u portrayed poor Raman Kumar Bhalla's condition who is getting tortured by his gorgeous Jhansi Ki Rani...loved the way u showed her effect on his soul,mind and body...He commented on her saree that she looked like his mother and poor guy is repenting now😆😆...Cruel Ishu is not letting him breath properly ...Loved the way u changed the tone of ur fiction from Romantic comedy to emotional side when he could see the difference between her and other women ...or how he took up drinking instead of taking advantage of helpless women ...that defines Raman..he is so imperfectly perfect ...a man with golden heart who pretends to have a stone heart...

Again u changed the mood of the story in fraction of seconds so effortlessly ..when she collided into his arms and tortured him even more...the conversation was so IshRa like...i could visualize Ishu and Raman fighting with their hidden motives ...

U are one of the BEST WRITERS in this forum...keep writing dear...u r a gifted writer👏👏👏

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Fenice
Hello Miss!
I am a newbie on this forum but have been reading your works since "The Risk To Blossom" days.
I'm a huge fan of your works and had been waiting for the last two days for your stories. Infact, you and Lucky were the reason I signed up on India-Forums in the first place.Thanks for updating.
Now coming to the OS.
It was hilarious. Especially Ishita's last line. Good Lord, it completely cracked me up.
Raman's uncontrollable urges were greatly portrayed as well. I always wondered why nobody ever brought that topic up, but now you did. And quite awesomely too.
Eagerly waiting for your next story.😃

Hi Fenice I am Aani 😊

Welcome to IF and thank you so much it means a lot to me to read this - having a silent reader comment is a compliment in itself but the fact that you joined IF because of Lucky and I, that's truly such an honor ☺️ thank you 😃

Wow I felt I was overdoing the OS' here but so far everyone has been so sweet and encouraging about this - I am so touched by reading all of these comments 😳

thank you for liking this OS and especially the @bold bit that I believe was a very tongue in cheek thing 😆😆 and I appreciate the sort of humor so thank you for appreciating it 😊

@blue - I guess everyone of us has noted his urges and has takes too which I have read in posts here and there - I wonder if the makers will actually do something path-breaking here in this regard not that it would be a miracle to have Raman shown as a sexual creature but just raising an almost taboo on Indian TV is a big deal -and one of them sadly is the discussion of sex in our country

Cant say when I'll be back next but hope to hear from you again when I am.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
Hahaha!!! My Goodness, Aani!! That was one hot verbal encounter!!

Just loved how Ishu "spiked" her words at him and said those perilous stuffs that could prove to be problematic to her later on! 😉 Shouldn't be actually questioning the maturity...LOL 😉

RKB's plight was very vividly portrayed!

What a treatment to this OS Aani...Super hit! 😃

Isha my DM 🤗 🤣 oh how I love the way you have put this - hot verbal encounter 😎 ☺️ see I knew I had judged you right and found my fellow DM in you 🤣 🤣

@red - yep she can actually repent this later sometime - but wait.. would that really be repenting if Raman proves she was WRONG🤔 😉 🤣

Thanks Isha 🤗

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia
awesome..loved it :)

thanks Swati 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan
Superb os..
u r a wonderful writer :)

thanks Anoda 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
superb os. raman trying to control!!

thanks Dreamy 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
wait what? that's it? I am still waiting for the 16+ part. Lmao Aani, my gang had made fun of me for posting a reader's discretion before an OS and now it's your turn 🤣...
Superb one! Raman's almost snapping control was fun to read. Dayymn Ishita does know how to play with fire ;) Each and every thought crossing Raman makes him lose another thread of sanity. I was waiting for the final thread to snap for the 16+ part but sigh... 😆 we should get a sequel of this ;)

PS: Don't take my teasing seriously. It's all meant for fun.

Hey Madhu 😊

LOL the 16+ part is there not graphically though 😳😆 its in the implication of a certain things and activities 😉

@blue - credit to the poor file and phone almost chewed by RKB .. I could understand his plight 🤣

@red - she has to with a hubby like this one 😉😆

@pink - I cant have a sequel here but like I said... READ CAREFULLY this piece AGAIN, if you still ... have a hard time noticing the bits PMS are always welcome 😛

@purple - no offence taken yaar we are friends 😃

thanks for the comment 🤗

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: happenstance
res- currently on a train rammed full of people I somehow feel I need to read this without like 50 sets of eyes on me 😆 😳

Would love to hear from you and feel free to edit at leisure 😳😊