Ramblings of a dumbstruck mind! (Raman)

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Hi all

So... I am glad I waited till today to follow up on the Ramblings post I made. I wanted to do something similar for Raman, and boy did I get inspired last night

For those who haven't read the Ishita one, here it is Ramblings of a baffled mind! (Ishita)


I was in love once with the most wonderful woman in the world
A woman who dazzled me with her sheer beauty
A woman whose altar I laid my existence on
A woman who made me want to defy my own family
A woman who gave me two children, the reason for my being
A woman who always wanted me to be a successful man

Yes, the same one who broke my heart
the one who wasn't content with the love in my heart
the one who did not have enough love in her heart for me
the one who whose waning maternal feelings appalled me even then
the one just wanted me to be a more successful man
I didn't want to be in love any more

Slowly but steadily I gathered the strewn pieces of my life
I had a goal now, I wanted to be the man she was looking for
I wanted to be the epitome of success
I wanted to own the world
I wanted to warn every man about the precariousness of love

No, sir, I didnt want to be in love ever again

Now another woman walked towards me

She wasn't beautiful
She wasnt someone I would look up to, let alone worship
She was here only to take care of my child
She didn't love me and I didn't love her

Like I said, I didn't ever want to be in love again

I saw her yesterday as she walked in, looking the best anyone had ever seen her
But they were all so misguided by her looks
They didn't see her alluring soul like I did
She accosts the man in me
She appeals to that long-lost father in me
She cannot give me any children but is the best mother my child could ever have
She remains unfazed by my success
She is moved when I am better, not richer
She bonds me with my family
She is my family now

I am a fool... I was never in love before


"To him she seemed so beautiful, so seductive, so different from ordinary people, that he could not understand why no one was as disturbed as he by the clicking of her heels on the paving stones, why no one else's heart was wild with the breeze stirred by the sighs of her veils, why everyone did not go mad with the movements of her braid, the flight of her hands, the gold of her laughter. He had not missed a single one of her gestures, not one of the indications of her character, but he did not dare approach her for fear of destroying the spell."
Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Love in the Time of Cholera


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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sorry for being late Lucky 😳

Gal you are amazing with these drabbles


A woman who gave me two children, the reason for my being
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I wanted to be the man she was looking for
I wanted to be the epitome of success
I wanted to own the world

These are so true to Raman - the one who forgot even himself in his blind obsession to be the most successful man he could be - the woman he loved so much did end up being the reason and motivation of his success but in the process he lost the better part of himself along the way. She gave him the world by giving him two kids he adores more than anything, unfortunately she also shattered that same world and left it in ruins. He wasn't enough for her though for him her love was all that was needed, it was more than enough and he couldn't have that one thing.

No, sir, I didnt want to be in love ever again

he was willing for most anything but risking his heart once again, he knew he cannot take the pain and the sheer soul crushing, heart wrenching experience ever again - which he feared is all he could have and would have - oh I feel for him 😭


I saw her yesterday as she walked in, looking the best anyone had ever seen her
But they were all so misguided by her looks
They didn't see her alluring soul like I did
She accosts the man in me
She appeals to that long-lost father in me
She cannot give me any children but is the best mother my child could ever have
She remains unfazed by my success
She is moved when I am better, not richer
She bonds me with my family
She is my family now

I am a fool... I was never in love before



those last few lines and that quote Lucky oh wow I have to pick up Love in the Time of Cholera asap, I am yet to read it especially his acknowledgement that what he had with Shagun wasn't Love to begin with ... damn I am speechless ❤️

Beautiful hon absolutely amazing keep em coming

Love ya

🤗
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my goodness..PERFECT PERFECT...it ws as if RKB himself wrote it...u r too too good lucky..!!
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Brilliantly written. 👏
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

my goodness..PERFECT PERFECT...it ws as if RKB himself wrote it...u r too too good lucky..!!



Nikki... you don't know how much @bold means to me... seriously girl, thanks 🤗
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Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-

Brilliantly written. 👏



Thanks Divya 😊
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Lucky, you are simply amazing poet 🤗
What a way to describe RKB's emotions!! Brilliant Job..❤️

This lines stole my heart..

She wasn't beautiful
She wasnt someone I would look up to, let alone worship
She was here only to take care of my child
She didn't love me and I didn't love her

Like I said, I didn't ever want to be in love again

I saw her yesterday as she walked in, looking the best anyone had ever seen her
But they were all so misguided by her looks
They didn't see her alluring soul like I did
She accosts the man in me
She appeals to that long-lost father in me
She cannot give me any children but is the best mother my child could ever have
She remains unfazed by my success
She is moved when I am better, not richer
She bonds me with my family
She is my family now

I am a fool... I was never in love before

BEAUTIFUL!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Lucky, you are simply amazing poet 🤗
What a way to describe RKB's emotions!! Brilliant Job..❤️

This lines stole my heart..

She wasn't beautiful
She wasnt someone I would look up to, let alone worship
She was here only to take care of my child
She didn't love me and I didn't love her

Like I said, I didn't ever want to be in love again

I saw her yesterday as she walked in, looking the best anyone had ever seen her
But they were all so misguided by her looks
They didn't see her alluring soul like I did
She accosts the man in me
She appeals to that long-lost father in me
She cannot give me any children but is the best mother my child could ever have
She remains unfazed by my success
She is moved when I am better, not richer
She bonds me with my family
She is my family now

I am a fool... I was never in love before

BEAUTIFUL!!



Thank you Namy... you are too kind 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Lucky so sweet n emotional
Loved it.
Brilliant post.
Hope when Raman acknowledge that he loves Ishu, he expresses it d same way.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalu79

Awww Lucky so sweet n emotional

Loved it.
Brilliant post.
Hope when Raman acknowledge that he loves Ishu, he expresses it d same way.




Thanks Shalu 😊

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