Ramblings of a dumbstruck mind! (Raman)

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
amazing. I was really touched.

u penned down raman's feelings beautifully

Thanks a lot 😊

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Amazing Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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Namita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wowww... so beautifully written ...

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creativeFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

my favourite lines are all the lines after raman talks about her soul. mesmerising

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wohhooo! Here goes the ramblings again, one being oblivious of the other.😳
Nothing specious and yet poetic. (I mean like generally poems are imaginary and exaggerated!)👏
Write some more. It's truly amazing.👏
P.S : Those PMs are much needed. Thanks again.😊

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-purpleorchids-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow,lovely taken on Raman's POV! 👏

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eternalasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

that is so lovely - every line apt

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum
Wohhooo! Here goes the ramblings again, one being oblivious of the other.😳
Nothing specious and yet poetic. (I mean like generally poems are imaginary and exaggerated!)👏
Write some more. It's truly amazing.👏
P.S : Those PMs are much needed. Thanks again.😊

Thank you again... and thats exactly why I am not calling them poems :)

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Reina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

My goodness, this was absolutely brilliant. I felt as though I was inside Raman's mind, and I could feel the angst it was that palpable through your words. In fact, it did brilliantly, not only to portray Raman's pain as a fictional character, but even that of a real man going through the real emotions. Especially, the last part where he concludes that he hadn't been in love before. It was such a nice way to reach that understanding. Loved it! 👏