Ramblings of a baffled mind! (Ishita)

Hi Friends

So I took a short break, and wanted to write something that doesnt look anything like one of my stories. This is just a point of view of what Ishita must be feeling right now...

Note: Its not an OS, not a poem or a verse... just an arrangement of confused thoughts. A spur of the moment writing...

Please do let me know what you think?

I was always the serene one.
There were storms that threatened to make my mind insane.
and then there were weapons that tore my heart into pieces.
Nothing broke me, nothing had the power to wipe the smile off my face.
The only yearning I had was for a child to call mine, and I have been fortunate enough to have that prayer answered too.
I am being tested continuously, but no clamorous voices or obtrusive thoughts shall crush me.
I am at peace, or I thought I was.
What I don't know is how to react to the ripples threatening my heart and soul now.
The voices I hear now are softer.
The thoughts I now have are shy
The eyes that look at me are disorienting me.
Has his demeanour changed?
Or is it just a projection of my inner turmoil?
Why do the barbs not prick any more? why do they feel like hidden flattery?
Why does a mere grazing of his fingers over my skin feel like electricity?
Why is there so much rhythm in our steps even when there is no music?
Why do I chastise others for calling him the names that I used to?
Why does it feel like its raining desire, but my mouth goes dry at just the sight of his gruff face?
and Why oh Why does his face not look gruff any more?

cause ishoo has started to fall in love.

👏👏👏

amazing portrayal of ishita's inner mind. she has started falling for the man she detested and married for ruhi's sake.

aah BRILLIANT...totally JUSTIFYING Ishu's inner turmoil of feelings..👏👏

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

cause ishoo has started to fall in love.

👏👏👏

amazing portrayal of ishita's inner mind. she has started falling for the man she detested and married for ruhi's sake.

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aah BRILLIANT...totally JUSTIFYING Ishu's inner turmoil of feelings..👏👏

You are sweet Nikki 😊

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

Awww!!! Awesome Lucky!!! This is such good writing!!!

Why do the barbs not prick any more? why do they feel like hidden flattery?
Why does a mere grazing of his fingers over my skin feel like electricity?
Why is there so much rhythm in our steps even when there is no music?
Why do I chastise others for calling him the names that I used to?
Why does it feel like its raining desire, but my mouth goes dry at just the sight of his gruff face?
and Why oh Why does his face not look gruff any more?

Best lines to say the least!!!!

Thanks Isha 🤗

Really really happy you liked it

Amazing!! This is absolutely brilliant writing! How perfectly you captured her inner turmoil! I especially loved this line --

Your writing seemed like sweet melody to me.Too Good 👏 I could actually imagine Ishu, reading the write up