Ishra OS: One more chance......part 11 on page 7 - Page 4

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I loved every part

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very nice... each part well written... continue soon...
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Hey everyone!
On Saturday I will update
Part 9
Sorry I had exams this week
So couldn't update!
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Hi everyone!
I'm sorry I'm so late on updating
I had exams
Now finished!
I will update almost everyday maybe...
Well here is part 9 for you!
Enjoy!
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''Raman your and my relation is over!
My life will now start with Mihir and will stay with Mihir!
It's over Raman over!''
And the picture burns and falls the ground...
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Engagement!

Mihir and Ishita get ready
''Mihir where is my earrings!'' Yells Ishita
''I don't know!'' Yells Mihir back
Everyone already left for the engagement party
Mihir and Ishita were leaving and then
Raman comes out
''Bhai?'' Says Mihir
''You didn't go yet?''
''Oh no I was getting ready and then I was late
so I decide to come little later'' says Raman
He become furious seeing Mihir and Ishita together
They all leave and reach the venue
Mihir and Ishita walk in together hand in hand
Everyone starts looking at them
''Wow Akka you look so beautiful!''
Say Mihika running to her
''And ''jiju'' you also look tip top!''
Mihir and Ishita laugh
''Hey Mihir be careful I might take yours away''
Says Romi laughing
Mihika hit his shoulder
While Ishita and Mihir laugh out loud
Raman kept looking at Ishita admiring her
She looked so beautiful
Then Mr iyer ad Mr bhalla announces
the engagement ceremony to begin
Mihir and Ishita sit and the ring is brought
Simmi does all the rituals
And then Ishita happily
Puts the ring in Mihir's hand
''Oh wow Akka you quickly put the ring on whats the rush?
Those is just the engagement ring!'' Says Mihika
Ishita blushes
Raman looks away in disgust
Is Ishita really moved on?
Thought Raman
Did she not feel anything that night?
Raman felt like crying but he didn't...
Just as Mihir was going to put the ring on
Ishita felt sick
She quickly covered her mouth and ran to
The washroom
''Ishu?'' Said Amma
''Ishita?'' Said Mihir
Mihika and Mrs bhalla and Mrs iyer ran to the washroom
After a couple minutes all three lady's came out
Mrs iyer Looked furious
Mihika and Mrs bhalla Looked shocked
Ishita also came out with tears in her eyes
''What happened?'' Asked Mihir to Ishita
''Are you OK? Asked Raman
Ishita ran up to Raman
Also Mihika, Mrs bhalla
They all looked furious
And then...
SLAP!
Ishita slaps Raman in anger
Her eyes red
Everyone becomes shocked
''Why?!?!'' Ishita yells
''Why did you do this again?!?!''
''What?'' Says a confused Raman
Mihika walks up to Raman
''You slept with Akka again
When she was drunk?
You were te one who
Did all of this and your
Asking what did you do?'' Yelled Mihika
Everyone became shocked
''What?'' Said Mihir
''Ishita why didn't you tell me?''
Asked a shocked Mihir
''Mihir I was but then I don't know?
I'm sorry'' says Ishita
''But whats the big problem
What happened to Ishita?'' Asked Mihir
''Ishita is...''
''Is what?'' Asked Romi
''Pregnant with...with Raman's Child''
Says Ishita
Everyone becomes shocked
Mr Bhalla makes everyone leave
Mihir becomes furious at Raman
He walks up to him and says
''Why...why did you do this?
You knew I was getting married
To Ishita but you?''
Mihir starts crying
Raman just walks away
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Bhalla household

''How can Raman do such a thing'' said Mrs bhalla
''My son do something like this?''
Everyone was there
Mihika, Romi, Mr and Mrs iyer
Ishita and Mihir
Raman was inside the bedroom
After a long time he came out
Mihir was angry
He grabbed his collar and asked
''Tell me why you did this?''
''Because I love Ishita...''
Everyone was shocked
Mihir was furious
He slapped Raman
''Mihir!'' Said Ishita
''Mihir are you crazy don't hit him here
Ju...jus...just don't talk to him...''
She takes Mihir away
Ishita comes back and says
''Just because I'm pregnant
with Raman's child that doesn't
Mean I can't marry Mihir ''
Raman was shocked
''I am going to marry Mihir and thats final!''
Everyone agrees with Ishita's decision
And they leave
Ishita asks Raman to come with her...
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Mihir's bedroom

Raman walks in with Ishita
Mihir is siting on the bed Ishita walks to him
And sits beside him and gives him a side hug
Raman looks away and says
''Why did you bring me here?''
''We wanted to say to you
To stop interfering in our life
Also if you even try to do something
Disgusting toward me I will put you in
Jail!'' Says Ishita
''Yeah'' says Mihir
''Mihir you will put me in jail?'' Asked Raman
''Yes because what you did hurt me
You slept with Ishita knowing
That she is marrying me!''
Mihir says getting up
''Mihir come down'' says Ishita
Mihir calms down
''If you try to do anything
with my Ishita then it will
Be war between us!'' Say Mihir
''Fine then I guess it's war between us...''
Says Raman
Ishita and Mihir become shocked...

Precap:
Mihir Raman Ishita argument
Wedding!
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I hope you all liked it!
Please comment and tell me how it was!

Note~ part 10 page 6

Edited by samantha_151 - 11 years ago
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#35
Really loving ur story pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Hi everyone
I'm here with part 10!
Hope you like it!
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''Fine then I guess it's war between us...''
Says Raman
Ishita and Mihir are shocked
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''What?'' Asks Ishita
''It's war...''
Says Raman
''How can you do to this Bhai?
To your own brother?
You don't want my happiness?''
Says a shocked Mihir
''I do but not with Ishita
I love Ishita and I want to be
With her and our daughter Ruhi
And with are 2nd child...''
Says Raman
''Raman...''
Says Ishita
She has tears in her eyes
''Raman why do you want
To be With me?
You were never there for me
But...
Mihir was...
He helped me when I was
Pregnant
He also rushed me to the hospital
He took care of me after Ruhi was born
But where were you?
You weren't there
I needed you the most
But you though of me as a joke...
A toy who play with for a little bit...
Then just leave...
Do you remember?
~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~~
6 years ago
''Raman!
How could you!?!?'' Yelled Ishita
Everyone was in the Bhalla house
They found out that Ishita
Is pregnant with Raman's child
Everyone was shocked
But they all decided to get
Raman and Ishita married
They were all preparing
But one day before the wedding
Raman told Ishita about his bet
Ishita was furious with Raman
And told everyone of what he did
Mr bhalla was the most furious
''Raman do you think
I'm some kind of toy?
We are getting married tommorow
And now your tellin me about this bet?''
Yells Ishita
''Ishita I'm sorry...
I first thought that this was
All just a bet but then...''
Says Raman
''But then what?'' Asked Mr Bhalla
''But then I fell in love with Ishita''
Says Raman
''I didn't want to keep this a
Secret...
Ishita think if I really love you
I wouldn't keep this a secret
I told you because I love you...''
Raman grabs Ishita's hands
''Will you forgive me?''
Ishita takes her hand away from
Raman's and says
''No...
Were done!
We are not getting married!
And this child will stay with me!
Just go away from me!
I don't want to see you face!''
Ishita runs away
Mr Bhalla becomes more angry and
Mrs bhalla
Mrs bhalla walks up to Raman and says
''Get out!''
Pointing to the door
Raman and everyone becomes shocked
''What?'' Asks Raman
''I don't want you her any more
You hurt Ishita
Is this how I raised you!?
I would rather choose Ishita
Then you so get out!'' Says Mrs Bhalla
Mr Bhalla takes Raman
And kicks time out ( not literally)
I'm sorry I didn't mean to do this''
Says Raman
with that he leaves...
and he never comes back...
~~~~~~~present~~~~~~~~~
'If you think I'm ready to give up this child with you
then you're wrong!''
''I'm not marrying you!
I don't love you!
so please go away from my life please!''
Says Ishita
''How can I go away from your life?''
Says Raman
Ishita becomes shocked and just leaves
With Mihir
Raman looks on...
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Mihir's bedroom

Mihir walks back and forth in his bedroom
He thinks about the fight that happened
Does Raman bhai really love Ishita?
Does Ishita love Raman...
Mihir starts thinking
Tommorow is our wedding
What am I going to do? He starts thinking about different ideas
And then he gets an idea...
This idea was bad he thought
But it will make Ishita happy
Also Ruhi
He only cared about their happiness
He thought this was the best idea
With that he falls asleep...
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Precap:
Wedding!
Shocking decision!
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Yeah!
I finished 10 parts!
I hope everyone has been
Liking my
Ishra OS
Part 11 will be awesome!
Please comment and like
And send me buddy requests!

Note~ Part 11 page 7

Edited by samantha_151 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hi everyone!
I hope you all have been
Liking my OS
Here is part 11
Hope you love it!
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He only cared about their happiness
He thought this was the best idea
With that he falls asleep...
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Wedding day!

It was the big day!
Mihir weds Ishita!
Everyone was going crazy
Some people going here
Some people going there
What a mess!
Ishita was inside her bedroom
When she hears her phone ring
It's a text...
She looks at the name and
Says
''Raman?''

Ishita,
Please meet me at the terrace
I would like to talk to you about
Something don't worry I'm not doing
Anything wrong...

What does Raman Want to talk about?
Thought Ishita
With that with out telling anyone
she leaves to go meet Raman...
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Terrace

Ishita reaches the terrace and looks for Raman
She sees him and Says
''Raman?''
Raman turns around
''Ishita''
He says and walks forward
''Ishita listen I want to say this quick
I'm really really sorry of what I did 6 years ago
And the same thing I did now...
Whatever I said to you an...and...and Mihir
Was all a big ,mistake
You were getting married and that to my
Little brother...
I ju...jus...I just felt shocked
I did not know how I felt
Because we...we were suppose to get
Married and then suddenly you and Mihir
Ishita I'm really really sorry
From the bottom of my heart...
I just want to see you and Mihir happy
Will you forgive me?''
He looked at Ishita
Ishita was shocked with what he said
But she takes a deep breath and says
''Ok Raman
I forgive you
And I hope after my marriage
We still can be friends?''
Raman nodded as in yes
And leaves looking back at Ishita
Friends?
Thought Ishita
Why did I feel weird saying that?
What us happening to me?
Ever since I found out that I was pregnant
I'm feeling so weird as if i shouldn't ...
Should I?
''Ishu why are thinking these stuff
Of course you want to Marry him''
She said out loud
Or is this marriage just for our family?
( iyers and Bhalla)
Ishita thought she was being stupid
So she went back downstairs...

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Wedding!

''Ishu hurry up!'' Yelled Amma
''Coming'' said Ishita
Ishita walked in a beautiful bridal dress
Everyone started praising her
''Wow Akka you look
Sexy Mihir will be so
Shocked!'' Said Mihika
Ishita playfully hit Mihika's shoulder
''Pagal'' she said
Then everyone left for the venue
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Wedding venue

Ishita walks in with her Amma
Mihir came up to her and said
''Wow you look so beautiful!''
Ishita blushed
''Thanks Mihu!''
She said with a smile
''Mihu?''
Said a confused Mihir
''Yeah,its now going to be you
Nickname!''
Mihir laughed and
Ishita was laughed
Raman was watching them
He was smiling
He was happy that his brother
Was getting married
He smiled and just then Ruhi comes
''Papa come the wedding
Is about to start!''
She started pulling Raman
''Ok Ruhi lets go!''
They both walk and sit down
Mihir and Ishita were ready and sat down
Everyone took a deep breath and the ritual began...
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The priest asks Ishita and Mihir to stand
To do the saat phere
Each round they took
Raman felt hurt
Ishita felt ruined
Mihir felt...
The time is decreasing every phere
Mihir and Ishita take
After they are done the phere
Ishita sits back down and the priest Gives
Mihir the mangalsutra
Everyone starts crying
A tear escapes Ishita's eyes
Mihir ties the mangalsutra
Time is over...
He thinks
The priest gives the sindoor to Mihir
Raman looks away
I can't see this he says
Mihir sees Raman looking away
And sees Ishita crying
''No!'' He says
He gets up
Everyone looks at him shocked
Ishita stands up
Raman looks at Mihir
''I can't do this''
Says Mihir
''What?'' Says Ishita
''This this marriage I can't do it
I'm sorry but I can't hurt them'' says Mihir
''Hurt who?''
Said a shocked Ishita
''You and...''
''Me and who Mihir?''
''Raman''
Says Mihir who then looks at Raman
Everyone looks at Raman shocked
''Everyone I'm really sorry
But I can't marry Ishita because
She loves Raman and is just marrying
Me because She cant hurt us''
Mihir looks at Ishita who says
''But Mihir I told you
I love you not Raman
Raman was my past
Mihir how can you do those?''Ishita says
She starts to cry
''Ishu please try to understand
All of you try to understand
We all wanted Raman and Ishita
To get married
I also wanted that
After Raman came back
You all decided to get me ad Ishu married
Not before that
Why?
Because you all wanted
Raman to get jealous
Please try to understand me I can't marry her
Asks Ishita if she wants to marry me or Raman?''
''Ishu who do you want to marry?'' Asks Amma
''We will not scold you just choose
Who you want
Listen to you heart''
Says Mrs Bhalla
Ishita looks at Mihir
Who trys to tell her to pick Raman
Then she turns to Raman who
Is still in shock
He looks at Ishita and both have a brief
Eye lock
She then looks at Ruhi and the her stomach
Remembering her 2nd child
She takes a deep breath and says
''Fine I choose...
Raman...''
Raman looks up in shock
Mihir smiles
''I admit I still love Raman
When I told Mihir I love him...
I think when I told him I love him
That was as a friend
I actually love Raman''
She says with a smile
Mihir brings Raman to Ishita and says
''So bhai will you marry Ishu?''
Raman looks at Ishita who Is smiling
''Yes!'' He says
Ishita
Becomes happy and hugs Raman
''I love you Raman!'' She says
''I love you too!'' Says Raman
Raman and Ishita's parents
Come up to them
Ishita hides behind Raman
Raman looks at Ishita and understands
''I'm so sorry
We all didn't understand you''
Says Amma
''We just want you happiness
And if you want to marry each other
You may...''
Says Mr and Mrs Bhalla
Raman and Ishita become shocked
Ishita hugs her parents while
Raman hug his
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Raman and Ishita finishes their rituals
They take everyones blessing
They then go to Mihir
''Thank you Mihir!''
Says Ishita and hugs him
''Because of you I realized
Who I actually love...''
She looks at Raman and hugs him
They all get ready to leave
Amma starts crying
''Amma why are you crying
I'm just living across from you?''
Amma nods and hugs Ishita
Everyone from the iyers starts hugging Ishita
They all leave...
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Ishra bedroom

After all the rituals are done
Raman and Ishita go to their bedroom
They change and then Raman asks Ishita to sit
''Ishita I want to say sorry for what I did
6 years back
I should have not done the bet
I...I...I'm sorry''
A tear escapes Ishita's eyes
Raman hugs her and
Both fall asleep...
Scared about tommorows
Honeymoon!

The End!
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Hope you all liked it!
I'm starting a FF !
Please read that too!

Edited by samantha_151 - 11 years ago

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