Ishra OS: One more chance......part 11 on page 7

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Hi! I have been reading a lot of ishra OS.
So that's why I decide to also create my own OS!
So here is my attempt hope you guys like it!

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Part 1:

He knew what he did was wrong he was a idiot at that time...
He wants to start over with his life his family and her...
He just wants to say sorry... but what would be her reaction?
He knew he would find her because he loved her...
He loved Ishita...

**********flashback**********


''Akka hurry up jiju is waiting for us!'' Said Mihika.
She was running to the front door when Ishita said
''Aiyyoo wait! I'm coming just 1 minute!''
Mihika was getting tired and yelled
''I'm going downstairs meet me there!''
''Ok'' said Ishita.
With that Mihika went out the door.
After a couple of minutes Ishita ran out and said
''Amma bye!''
''Bye ishu'' said Mrs iyer.
Ishita started cursing her self because she was late.
''Aiyyoo Ishu you are so late what will jiu say?''
At the same time Raman Kumar Bhalla was also
running in a hurry.
''Oh God late again!''
Both were in such a rush that they didn't even realise that
both of them at the same time came out of there houses.
Then ''BANG''
Ishita bangs into Raman and falls on top of him.
''Owww!'' Yelled Raman
''Aiyyoo'' screamed Ishita
''Tum'' they both said at the same time.
''Are you blind? Can't you look while walking?'' Said Raman
Ishita still realising the position she is in quickly gets up and says
''Sorry... I was in a rush that's why I didn't look and...and I fell on you.''
Raman was shocked by her behavior usually she would yell at him
and say it was his fault...but not today. Why? Thought Raman
''It's OK'' and leaves with a smile on his face.
One thing he didn't notice was Ishita was blushing.
Last month Ishita realized that she had a soft corner for Raman.
But since she didn't know about Raman's feelings se decide to stay
quite because she didn't know what might happen.
Then she smiled and went to meet her jiju and sister.
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''Akka! Why are you so late?'' Yelled Mihika seeing Ishita
''Sorry Mihika'' Said Ishita
Ishita decided to not tell Mihika and Bala about her encounter with
Raman or eles they might make fun of her.
''Ishu, Mihika now will you two just stand here and talk or can we go?
I'm really hungry!'' Says Bala
Mihika and Ishita laugh.
While Ishita and Mihika laugh they don't notice that some is
watching them and admiring Ishita's laugh
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Raman inside his car hears the laughing noises and realises
who it is ''Ishita'' he says...
After Ishita leaves with Bala
Raman says...
''I have to win this bet, I have never lost a bet in my life and I won't
now Ishita has to fall in love with Raman Kumar Bhalla...
if she doesn't then I lose the bet and I have never lost a bet in my
life and I won't now! In the the next 1 month Ishita iyer Will be mine
and that's a promise!''
****************Present****************
*BANG*
Raman slaps his hand on his desk
''That bet, if I hadn't done that bet this would have not happened
and Ishita would have still been mine.''
Raman always wonders what happend to Ishita after he hurt
her. But he mostly thought does she remember him?
If yes, how does she remember him?
But more importantly does she still love him?
They way he does...
Yes Raman admitted that he loved her even after what he did.
He knows he will get his Ishu back.
He knows he will...
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That's it for now guys! Please tell me how it was I will upload part
2 tommorow and I promise there will be a Ishra scene tommorow
A funny but romantic scene!

Chapters:
Part 1 Page 1
Part 2 Page 2
Part 3 Page 3
Part 4 Page 4
Part 5 Page 4
Part 6 Page 4
Part 7 Page 5
Part 8 Page 5
Part 9 Page 6
Part 10 page 6
Part 11 page 7



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sham24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it, cant wait to read more😃
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Originally posted by: sham24

Loved it, cant wait to read more😃

Thanks!!

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Brilliant start n update soon but i want a longer update, this one was really small! 😳
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Originally posted by: -cyndu-

Brilliant start n update soon but i want a longer update, this one was really small! 😳


Yeah i just started but i promise i will make it longer

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mast plz update ... cnt wait
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Waiting for update...pm us pls
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Hi i'm back with part 2 of Ishra OS: One more chance...
Hope you like it!
Note:
I decided not to do a romantic comedy scene between Ishra
I promise this is way better!
...
Ishra OS:
One more chance... Part 2
Yes Raman admitted that he loved her even after what he did.
He knows he will get his Ishu back.
He knows he will...
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''Ishita ishita ishita!'' yells Raman
He was so annoyed that a tear escaped his eyes
why why can't he forget her
Maybe because she also still loves him...
Raman everyday prayed to god that he meets Ishita
he wanted to ask her so much things like:
Did you get married?
How is my family?
How is your family?
Do you have a child...our child?
With that Raman looks at his watch and realizes he is late for a meeting
''Oh no! If i'm late for this the whole party will be ruined!''
He then quickly runs out and leaves for his meeting...
*******************Iyer's house in the present*****************
''Mamma hurry up I'm getting late for school!'' Yells Ruhi
''Ruhi today Mihika aunty will drop you to school" Says Ishita
With that Ruhi kisses Ishita on the forehead and runs to Mihika
''Ishu!" Yells Mrs Iyer
''What Amma?" asks Ishita
"Your in the newspaper again look"
She shows a picture of Ishita with the head lines
"Ishita Iyer Function Designer Of The Year"
Ishita just smiles and asks
"Amma where is my magazine?''
Mrs Iyers smile turns up side down and hands Ishita her magazine
and heads to the kitchen while Ishita heads to the bedroom
When Ishita opens the first page her smile also turns upside down in big bold letters it says
''Raman Kumar Bhalla CEO Of The Year!"
Ishita has a weird feeling in her heart hearing Ramans name
She throws the magazine on the bed and goes to her little Temple and says
"Oh god, why why do you keep doing this to me? When ever I'm on the front cover
Raman. Is this some kind of message for me? Do you want me to find Raman?"
Thinking about bringing Raman back was a great idea she thought everyone will be happy
Aunt, Uncle, Romi, Simmi, Mihir, Rinki
Amma, Mihika, Vandu akka, Bala jiju
Ruhi...
Me?
A tear escapes Ishita's eyes on thinking about Ruhi
She remembers when Ruhi asked her where her father is she told her that
He is in America and will comeback soon
But the truth is Raman lives in India
Yes Raman is Ruhi's Biological father
But she can never tell her that and she also can't tell Raman the truth about Ruhi
Just then her phone rings
''Akka where are you don't you remember you have a meeting with a big client
the client is going to come in a couple of minutes hurry up!" Yells Mihika on the other side of
the phone
'Sorry Mihika i'm coming in 10 minutes" Says Ishita
She quickly hangs up the phone and runs out the door
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"Akka thank god you are here Riddhima told me the client already came and is
inside hurry up go in!" Yells Mihika on seeing Ishita
''Yeah i'm going and please tell no one to disturb me
this meeting is really important!''
Mihika nods her head in yes and Ishita runs to her office
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''Sir I'm so sorry I'm late..." Ishita stops in shock
"Raman..." she says

Precap:
Ishra face-to-face
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Thats it for now i will upload part 3 a little later
Please tell me how it was hope you liked it!
Sorry this is so small part 3 will be much better!

Note-Part 3 Page 3


Edited by samantha_151 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey everyone I have exams next week so i have to study
because of that my Ishra OS will not be that much long
But I'm sure you will like all the stories!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice Update
Thanks for the Update

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