IshRa FF-all's well that ends well Pg1 chap1

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I am Dhani. I new to this forum. thou I was following show from start and wanted to write something on Raman Ishita. so I tried writing thoughts in my mind. Story is pretty much same just changing few bits. I hope You enjoy reading as much I enjoyed writing it. If you like it please leave a comment behind. Add me to your buddy list for PMs. THANKS

<font size="4">All's well that ends well</font>

Chapter 1 - Engagement Fiasco

For they are yet ear-kissing arguments~ William Shakespeare



"Bhabhi how do I look in this lehenga?" Trisha asked after checking her dress in mirror.
"You look great trisha" Ishita said idly as there was whirlpool of thoughts surrounding her mind. She is still confuse was she doing the right thing stopping the engagement. On one side there is mihika and mihir who love each other. And here is trisha who dreaming about her bright future with mihir. Ayyo murgan please help me how do I solve this mess. I must talk to raman again.
"mammiji main abhi ati hu, aap trisha ke sath rahiye" she left the room hurriedly.
Simi gritted her teeth she hates ishita with all her heart. She broke her family, they insulted param even got him arrested. She was waiting to get even with her.
ishita was searching for raman in crowd but he wasn't near her sight. Where are you raman.
"Papaji aap ne Raman ko dekha?" she asked impatiently.
"haan puttar woh waha caterers ke sath baat kar raha hai."
"Ji thanks papaji" she take fierce steps in the direction.
"Par huwa kya Puttar"
"Baad Mein Batati hu" she turn herself a little while saying without looking where she was going she bump into someone. Her sandal tripped she closed her eyes with fear but she could feel a hand snaked around her waist. It was raman she recognized his touch she open her eyes partly and yes her guess was correct. Raman was flashing his trademark angry glair; she clutched his shirt made stand straight.
"Woh Raman .." she tried completing her sentence.
"Kitni baar kaha hai aise adhe toofan ki tarha bhaga mat karo. Mujhe aadat hai tumhare mujh par girne ki meri jagha koi our hota ho aaj casualty pakki thi" He said Sarcastically. It always amuses him with her beahavior. It didn't matter what I say. Jhasi ki raani always does whatever she wants.
"Ho gaya aap ka , if not then finish it." She replied and twisted her lips in irritation.
Raman just nodded in reaction. What she said raised his anger she wasn't telling this first time but how can still thinking about reuniting mihir and mihika. Didn't I already clear myself than that mihika is not good enough for mihir. She got him arrested; she insulted him so many times. Besides if mihir still loves her then he could have told me before. He is my brother he share everything with me.
"Just stop it ishita maine tum se pehle bhi kaha hai ki mihir is getting married with only. Ek baar main samaz nahi ata" raman spoke in sharpen voice.
"Mr Raman aap raman ki shadi trisha se karana chahte kyu ki iss main aap ka faida hai. Mr Tandon is your big client you are encashing mihir for gain. How selfish you can be?" she took step coming face to face with him. She poked his chest with her finger; instantly raman remove it and pushed her back.
"I know what I am doing ishita and let me warn you agar tum ne trisha our mihir ki sagai main koi tamasha kiya toh mujh se bura koi nahi hoga" he said with deadly intensity which scared her a little. But somewhere she knows that he can't hurt her. All this time since they got married even thou he never said a single sweet sentence. But she always stood by her whenever she needed him. Even he supported her against his family she know he always earn this much of trust.
He walked out from there with rapid steps. Ishita stare at his figure walking and finally disappearing in crowd. Raman's anger was not main concern her but she worried about this engagement fiasco.
Just then someone put hand on her shoulder she snapped out of her thoughts and turn to see who is was. It was romi who she standing front of her, she looked at him in perplex.
"bhabhi who maine aap ki our raman bhai ki baatein sunli, I know how to solve this problem" he said in guilt redone tone. After all he was the reason for mihir and mihika's separation he lusted for her. Tried wooing her with all tricks he have used on every girl in his past but each trick become worthless. Now that he fall in love with trisha he knows what love is all about how it is hurtful to see her with mihir. May be its time face punishment for his crime; today decided correct his mistake with reuniting those lovers.
Ishita was still looking bewilder trying find sense in what romi was saying. How can he help me?
"But Romi tum kaise.."
" bhabhi actually ye sab shuru meri waje huwa tha.. maine mihika and mihir..MMS.." he muttered last words very faint voice.
"Romi why are you? What are you saying? Look jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho" ishita tried confronting him.
He inhaled deep breath and admitted all his mistakes how he plotted to end mihika and mihir's relation; Lastly the MMS scandal. He downed his head in remorse. Ishita's head started spinning hearing all this she grabbed corner of table for support. Mihir was innocent it was romi who spoiled mihika's repution.
She remember how she behave with him she even slapped him.Oh Murgan is this really happening!!
"Do you realized what you did could destroy bother family" her voice was shaking.
"I know bhabhi and I am really sorry for it but right now we can undo my mistake. Please bhabhi just give me one chance I promise you won't regret it." He took her hands in his begging for forgiveness. His voice was sounding genuine in conjecture with that he already confessing his mistake he surely deserves one chance. So she nodded her in positive gesture.
"Oh thanks bhabhi" he tried smiling but miserably failed thou he really appreciate chance which she is willing to give him.
"Now tell how do we stop this?"
"Bhabhi Raman bhai ye sagai rokenge nahi... agar hum mihika and mihir ek dusre ke samne laye toh sure they accept their love..par woh vibhu uska kya kare "
"Uski fikar mat karo she is not getting engage it was all plan to make mihir realize his mistake" Ishita said flatly.
Romi rolled his eyes in amusement. So they decided that romi will get mihika in garden behind ceremony hall and ishita will get mihir there too. This was first time in life when ishita was plotting against something. Romi quickly vanished from hall while ishita started her task to convince mihir.
She found mihir getting ready for ceremony and with him was raman who was helping him. Ishita cringe here face seeing raman in room. Ayyo yaha bhi aa gaye ravan kumar kabhi toh mera picha chodo. She knows she can't talk to mihir with raman being there. She has to get rid of him first she have plan in mind.
"Raman.. raman" she anxious walk inside the room.
"Oh pagal ladki chilla kya rahi ho... yaha mera statue khada hai kya kaam hai" in a monotone replied raman who still angry about her previous talk.
"papaji aa ko bula rahe hai un caterers ne Chiken curry mein kuch gadbad kar di" she animated expression on her face for lying. Thou she knows she is not good liar but here situation demands it.
"us caterer kit oh mein abhi kuch der pehle hi samza kar aya tha ki kuch gabad mat kar bade bade log aa rahe party mein khaana accha hona chahiye. Main usko uski curry mein duba mar mardaluga dekh tu"
He passed looked to mihir. Iss madrasan ne hi kuch kiya hoga naya bahana mil gaya mujhe parishan karne ka. Bolti hai non-veg nahi khati but pura dil mere sar toh khati hai.
"jaldi jayiye aap papaji kab se aap ko dhund rahe hai" she tried forcing him again to leave the room. Even raman was suspecting something uncommon in her behavior he was hesitating to leave the room.
He was sure that something was cooking in head.
"jaa raha woh kya hai I prefer walking aise andhe toofan ki tarha bhag nahi sakta" he taunted her.
Mihir sambhal ke rehna beta ye jhasi ki rani ke irade thik nahi lagte mujhe. He walked out of room while taking small steps.
She turned to mihir who was checking his appearance in mirror spotted somthing. She tried talking "Mihir...woh". But he instantly turns around gazing at door. ishita look in same direction and her mouth become O-shaped it raman hiding behind door.This man is too much .
She folds her hands and took a deep breath "Mr james bond kumar spying ho gayi ho andar ayiye"
Raman shocked gulped down lump in his throat. He came out from his hiding place gazing at floor. Ishita's lips curl into smile he was looking cute like a kid when he gets caught.
"I wasn't spying it just I dropped my phone somewhere I was looking for it" he explains himself trying get out of situation.
"So ab mil gaya"
"Haan..."
"toh ab jayenge aap"
"Mein toh waise bhi jaa raha tum ne mujhe late karwaya "and this time he really walked out of the room cursing ishita.
Now ishita finally can focus on her task.
"Mihir I want to talk to you"
Mihir recognized urgency in her voice. "Yes off course bhabhi..boliye" "Its about mihika"
His body stiffens hearing her name past few days were like hell for him whenever he see that stupid vibhu with mihika the sight burns him in jealousy. Mihika don't deserve that fool she belongs to HIM.
Yup truth was hard but you somewhere he too knew he and Trisha...it's just can't meant to happen.
"Mihir she is getting engage" she tried being dramatic as possible.
"I know bhabhi and I am happy for her" he turned away so that she can't see him gloomy face.
"But do you know that she is getting engage just because you are getting engage to trisha. Please stop her before she ruins her life"
Words hit him hard it's like someone slapped him. "Is it true bhabhi? But she told me she is happy with him. How can she play with life like this? Does she realize how serious this is?" He kept talking in single breath. "Only you can stop it mihir please please help me. I know you too love her very much." "But how" he hesitated. "I called her to meet in garden behind hall. You two sort this out"
"bhabhi par raman bhai.." "Please mihir for sake of your love" she pledge. He just nodded his head in agreement. Ishita and mihir walked out from hall ishita make sure that no one sees them. She herself admitted that being with raman made her more dexterous. Few months before she can't even think of getting into situation like this. Finally they reach garden she told mihir to walk further and while her stayed in back. She showed them way but eventually it's in their hands to resolve differences.
"Bhabhi" she heard romi.
"Thanks god aap aa gaye ..mihir kaha hai?" she point her finger ahead. Even romi was content that he was free from guilt. "romi mihika itni aasani se maan gayi yaha ane ke liye?" "No bhabhi actually she didn't want to come" "then how did you convince her?" "I told her truth about MMS" "Romi!!!"
"Don't worry bhabhi uss ne mujhe maaf kar diya" he said with small grin. Ishita too smile looks like everything falling into its place. "Look bhabhi" romi pointed in mihir's direction; she turns her face to saw it. Her face beamed seeing spectacle mihika and mihir hugging each other. Yay so love won again. Thank god.
"Congrats bhabhi we did it" they both shake their hands.
"Ye kya ho raha hai yaha" voice froze her nerves. She revolve aside saw his angered eyes stabbing her in heart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

Chapter 1 - Engagement Fiasco ~ Page 1
Edited by Charli_ - 11 years ago
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Wonderful dear... Really wonderful...👏

Wish Romi is this sensible in the show too. Please continue... and awesome Ishra Nok-jhok 😊
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Wonderful dear... Really wonderful...👏

Wish Romi is this sensible in the show too. Please continue... and awesome Ishra Nok-jhok 😊

thank you so much ...its nice be appreciated 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written dear..engagement fiasco indeed ...Cant wait to see their confrontation and confession..plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Beautifully written dear..engagement fiasco indeed ...Cant wait to see their confrontation and confession..plz continue soon

thanks hon. I'm glad that you like it ..i'll write next soon 😊
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Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

nice..plz upd8 soon :)

thanks a lot 😊
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Reallyyy awesummm.. amazingg update. Loved itt.. would love to read moreee.. plsss keepp continuinggg. Eager to read the next update. Pksss PM meee. Thnkuuu...
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Amazing part...please pm me...would like to read it further...

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