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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello All😊 This is my first ever piece of writing. I am very happy and excited that I am writing my first OS on lovely couple IshRa.

Thank you Nikki (Nikki_Titli) and Namy (DreamWeaver) for encouraging me to post this OS!! 🤗Do let me know your comments which helps me for my improvisation😃
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It has been wonderful journey for Ishita and Raman since their marriage. First two months of marriage went in fighting and taunting each other.
As the days passed they started understanding and being there for each other while resolving their family issues.
Shagun and Adi wanting to come back in Raman's life had made him to confess his love for Ishita in front of his family.
Though Ishita had feelings for him could not accept as she always thought Raman does things for her to show either Shagun or Ruhi.
Raman was restless to get Ishita's acceptance for his love. He tried many ways of impressing her like putting flower on her hair, wearing lungi while visiting temple.
Ishita was enjoying the attention Raman was giving to her.

There was a business meeting for which Raman & Ishita had to attend. Ishu was wearing a transparent white saree. She was looking gorgeous.
Raman was unable to control his desires towards her physical beauty. He decided he will manofiy his Jhansi Ki Rani today after coming from the party.

There was a bright moonlight spread in their bed room. Ishita's face was shining when Raman checked her out while she was removing her jewellery.
He thought himself as SRK and remembered the scene from movie Devdas when adult Devdas and Paro meet for the first time!!Ishhh..

He went and stood behind her. Ishita saw his reflection in the mirror and looking at his eyes her heartbeat increased. She wanted her husband to complete her but was in denial mode.
Raman turned Ishita towards him and hold her waist getting her closer to him. He touched her lips with his thumb and Ishita had a current running in her body.
Ishita: Raman kya kar rahe ho aap?
Raman: Tumse pyaar karna chahata hoon
Ishita: Iss Jhansi Ki Rani bewakoof aurat se pyar karna chahate ho?
Raman cares her cheeks now. Ishita blushes and looks down.
Raman: Itna sharmavo math mere JKR mujhse control nahi hoga. He touches his stomach and says ee waali control nahi woh waali control and winks at her.
Ishita remembers their first night and pushes him away saying Ayyo Amma.
Raman: Ishu jitna tum mujhe saatoagi utna pachtaayogi baad mein and gives a devilish smile
Ishita: Running towards the door says dekhti hoon tum mein kitna power hai!!
She was about to open the door, Raman runs behind her and stops her barging her against the door.
Now his body was completely on her.
Raman: Mera power tho tumhe dikhadunga par tumhe abhi punishment dena hai
Ishita looks at him questioningly and asks Kyon?
Ranan: Kyunki Mrs Bhalla aapne iss room se bahar jaane ki zuraat ki. Punishment yeh hai ki you will not be going to clinic tomorrow. Aap mere saath rahenge poora din.Subha shower lene se raath sone tak.
Ishita: Acha aapne kaise soach liye ke man jaaongi. Mujhe bahut saare appointments hai kal. Agar takath paawer hai tho roklo.
She was enjoying teasing him about his power!!
Raman: With angry face, kya power power. Mujhe laptop samjh ke rakha hai kya jo mere power button ke baare mein baath karogi.
Tumhe mere power dikhane ke liye phele tumhara yeh bhashan dene wala muh band karna padega. Saying this he kisses on her lips.
Ishu reciprocates his kiss as if she was waiting for this opportunity. In the verge of showing each other's power they dont know how long they kissed.
After breaking their kiss Raman hugs Ishu tightly and whispers in her ears we both are equal in fighting and making love too. Ishu hits on his shoulders lovingly.
Raman breaks the hug and tries to lift her. She stops him holding his collar.
Ishita: Aap mujhe uthapayenge?
Raman: Now he gets irritated and says abhi bhi power hai mujhe mein.
Ishita: teases him saying nahi aisa nahi bola maine, aap itne chote height ke hai tho mujhe laga mushkil hoga.
Raman: He lifts her and while walking towards the bed says ab mein tumne dikha ta hoon iss chote height ka power. Ishu makes puppy face.

Now its left to your individual wild imagination to decide who has more power!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW...thats nicely written dear..loved the OS ...cute and naughty IshRa😳😊


Loved the dialogues ...and the concept..really nice try for 1st time...do write more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this ws such a HOT...full of DOUBLE MEANING OS..☺️🤣...

bt woman ur endpoint is NOT AT ALL fair..😡🤣...

nywz rockin os..am glad i could be of ur help..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woahhh Ranj, that was indeed a Hawwtt' update.. I read your update holding my breath to find out what does gonna happen next😳

I must say your first attempt to writing turned out nicely.. Its passionate, romantic and cute read.. I didn't know whether I should blush or laugh when I read it for last night.. Really cute intense read.. Like the dialogues.. And the way you ended it, I am thinking how I am gonna get on with work with the disturbing images you conjured up in my brains through your OS☺️. 😆.. If it hadn't been your OS, I would hv taken a silent exit after reading 🤣 Though I am not at all a shy person, I do get nervous to comment on a mature stuff ☺️😆

And Ranj, from our little interaction, I've got to know that you have an amazing Sense of Humor..I hope you do write a funny scene someday..😳

Lovely OS.. Do write more..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

WOW...thats nicely written dear..loved the OS ...cute and naughty IshRa😳😊


Loved the dialogues ...and the concept..really nice try for 1st time...do write more😊


Thank you so much Deepika!! I do have some ideas will try to write more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

this ws such a HOT...full of DOUBLE MEANING OS..☺️🤣...

bt woman ur endpoint is NOT AT ALL fair..😡🤣...

nywz rockin os..am glad i could be of ur help..🤗


@Bold samajh ne waale samjhenge😆 Thank you Nikki 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You Swati😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww your OS was so damn sweet,lovely piece of write up 😊
Do PM me when you write next 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very good dear..
mere aatma ko tabhi shantii meilegiinjab cvs aisaa kuch dikhaenge..

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