OS: The Desire - Page 2

Awesome OS!!!
Loved it!!!
Ishra romance...❤️

Fantastic OS!! Naughty and romantic with double meaning 😆

Intresting OS Dear!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

Hahahah..naughtily cute😉😉 and romantic yaar😳😊😊 i was grinning the whole time😆..but why did you stop..😲😲 stop buttonwa kyon lagaye aap😲😲..pls pls pls resume karo na..pls😃😃..loved the OS😊

Jani Di...as a first time OS, you were too good and wrote a bold one. And, the dialogues are too good, esp. the laptop and power wala😆. But, wild imaginations tum kuch de deti to hum bhi aage zyada soch lete😉😆.
Loved it Di.

👏That was so much fun! Power?!😆

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Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

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Woahhh Ranj, that was indeed a Hawwtt' update.. I read your update holding my breath to find out what does gonna happen next😳

I must say your first attempt to writing turned out nicely.. Its passionate, romantic and cute read.. I didn't know whether I should blush or laugh when I read it for last night.. Really cute intense read.. Like the dialogues.. And the way you ended it, I am thinking how I am gonna get on with work with the disturbing images you conjured up in my brains through your OS☺️. 😆.. If it hadn't been your OS, I would hv taken a silent exit after reading 🤣 Though I am not at all a shy person, I do get nervous to comment on a mature stuff ☺️😆

And Ranj, from our little interaction, I've got to know that you have an amazing Sense of Humor..I hope you do write a funny scene someday..😳

Lovely OS.. Do write more..

Aww thank you so myuch Namy dear. I am glad I could confuse your emotions 😉

Funny scene will try to write😃

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Fantastic OS!! Naughty and romantic with double meaning 😆

Enjoyed reading it ... very good for a first time

Do continue writing more 😊

Thank You PreciousPri!! Will try my best😊