OS: The Desire

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Now its left to your individual wild imagination to decide who has more power!!

roflsss

murugaa mujekoo power dhoo🤣

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.Ranju.

@.Ranju.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Ursh-
RANJ-JANI DI 😉
I couldn't stop reading this OS. I can't believe its your first one here. Really great. :) It was so hot & sexy. Oh I loved the last line. Too good. great job with the writing. Do continue, you now have 41 likes yay! How Raman kisses Ishu Aww so well portrayed every bit was amazing! <3
I want a longer OS next time na!

Thank you so much Ursh😃 I will definitely try to write a longer one next time😊

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Jani Di, edited my post.

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.Ranju.

@.Ranju.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni
Jani Di...as a first time OS, you were too good and wrote a bold one. And, the dialogues are too good, esp. the laptop and power wala😆. But, wild imaginations tum kuch de deti to hum bhi aage zyada soch lete😉😆.
Loved it Di.

Thank you Tanni dear😊. It was getting tough for me to imagine and write isliye readers par chodiya😆