IshRa OS: Llovera! *CHAPTER 2* PG1

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Neeharika

@Npadz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Ooh that was lovely! Especially Ishita's diary entry. Looking forward to reading more 😊

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vidya29

@vidya29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Hello,
This was a nice update,a little shorter though.
Ishita is quite content keeping her love from Raman and I get her.There's a sense of anticipation,wonder and tons of flights of fancy.She's afraid though,I feel.
Raman is confused.rightly so.him reading her diary wasn't that surprising.He doesn't seem the kind to bother with manners,especially where Ishita is concerned.
Ishita's diary entry was quite apt considering it was written a year back.She didn't have much incentive to believe in an emotion as taxing as love.Quite useless at that time for her.
I am eagerly waiting for the next update.I like reading what you write.It seems quite rooted in reality.
Take care.

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Npadz
Ooh that was lovely! Especially Ishita's diary entry. Looking forward to reading more 😊

Thanks for appreciating!😃

I'm looking forward to writing more too.

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: vidya29
Hello,
This was a nice update,a little shorter though.
Ishita is quite content keeping her love from Raman and I get her.There's a sense of anticipation,wonder and tons of flights of fancy.She's afraid though,I feel.
Raman is confused.rightly so.him reading her diary wasn't that surprising.He doesn't seem the kind to bother with manners,especially where Ishita is concerned.
Ishita's diary entry was quite apt considering it was written a year back.She didn't have much incentive to believe in an emotion as taxing as love.Quite useless at that time for her.
I am eagerly waiting for the next update.I like reading what you write.It seems quite rooted in reality.
Take care.

I see you got their emotions completely.😃

Pleased to know that you find my writing rooted in reality.

Thanks a lot!

Hopefully, I'm not gonna give you such short updates from now on.

Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago

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Manu

@.scarlet.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

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EDIT :

Pareena !!

First of all , my apologies for unresing so damn late !

I don't really follow YHM much but then had to read it because it was by you!

You know what , after every piece that you write you get better n better n make me your A.C all over again...

Coming to this FF , it was fabulous ! The way you dealt with their fights , their masked emotions and inner turmoil was really nice .

My favorite part was the diary entry of course , that was so you . I mean it was as if you were saying all that on my face and it also suited the protagonist Ishita , very well . I can completely understand the depth of feelings behind this 😉 . I believe writing such stuff is your forte !

But I sincerely hope that this changes soon in your life ( at least after a year or so 😛)

As far as suggestions are concerned , all I can say is whatever YOU serve on my platter , I will oblige happily 😃.

Love

Mansi

Edited by .scarlet. - 11 years ago

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome start dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

Gracias! I'm glad you took the time to read my PM and open the link😊

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
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Waiting waiting😊

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

I like this story seriously. It is turning very interesting. I am waiting for these two admitting to each other in the show n in ur story too. keep it up.

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
I like this story seriously. It is turning very interesting. I am waiting for these two admitting to each other in the show n in ur story too. keep it up.

Sorry to have forced you to comment😳

Thank you so much! Reviews are my drug. Hoping to live up to your expectations😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

Sorry to have forced you to comment😳

Thank you so much! Reviews are my drug. Hoping to live up to your expectations😃

Oh i am happy u pmed me. I am relatively new here but i have never missed one single epi of the show. I was just busy somewhere else but i am falling in love with IshRa.😳