~MY HEART KNOW U ~ Ishra 4 shots story UPDATED CH-3 Part-B (page 17) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhu-taarey

Awww Moni 🤗 🤗 u in YHM forum seriously its so niceee to c u here😛 😛 😛 😛 after a long time i'm reading ur stories feeling so happy coz ur story have a great mixed emotion always...

coming to this story wowww 👏 superb u nailed it ishu's emotion and speech and raman's feeling towards ishu was totally good... i hope something happen like this and raman realize ishu soon in serial also... ya trust means a lot than anything... so ya continue bring our cute ruhi also...


Ps- i didnt read any of taarey stories yet coz i dont have time and also feel sad that no taarey now if i read i really miss them thtsy but i'll read urs after my exams🤗


😲 oh my god radhu
🤗 love u a lot my sweetu cutu buddy 🤗
i am also feeling super duper awesome after reading ur comment after such a long time 🤗
i always love ur special heart touching comments as they not only surprise me but also bring big smile on my face 😃
dil se big wala thank u yaar for this special , precious heart touching comment,
love u a lot yaar , dont worry ruhi bhi aayegi is story main bahut jaldi he ,
i also love little princess ruhi so very much . thank u so very much again , mera dil khush ho jaata hai tumhare pyaare pyaare comments read karke , love u so much my sweetest cutest buddy muahh 🤗
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
its ok sweetu i can understand that's why i wont force u 2 read
ALL D VERY BEST FOR UR EXAMS , 👍🏼
I KNOW U WILL ROCK THEM ⭐️
AND MY BEST WISHES R ALWAYS WITH U MY SWEETU BUDDY , MAY U TOP IN UR EXAMS 😉😊
TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING ALWAYS 😊😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

thank u so much dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

Ur start is really good I really wanna read ur story continue soon


i like few points which u highlighted specially when Ishita was telling Mihik wat Parmeet said when she entered in bhalla house no one there she was telling about shagun


aww dil se thank u so much dear 😊
ur comment means a lot 2 me 😊
ya i will try 2 continue soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: disha93

Hi dear!!!😊
I think I read you Taarey stories!!!! Nice to see u in the YHM forum!!!!
Wonderful start!!!
Ishita's conversation with Mihika is very heart touching!!!!


hiii 😊😊
i m also feeling nice 2 be here , with all d amazing people and wonderful readers like u 😊
dil se thank u so much dear for ur precious comment 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: simples28

Brilliant... 👏 ..so beautifully written dear 😊 I loved how ishu expressed her pain..
And Raman felt her pain too 😃 ..lovely..thank u so much 🤗 ..pls update soon 😊


awww I M SO GLAD THAT U LOVED IT 😊
DIL SE BIG WALA THANK U SO MUCH DEAR FOR A DIL SE WALA SPECIAL , HEART TOUCHING COMMENT 🤗
IT REALLY MEANS A LOT 2 ME 😊
😊
YA I WILL TRY 2 UPDATE ASAP 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Amazing start Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?


DIL SE THANK U SO MUCH DEAR 😊
YA I WILL CONTINUE SOON 😊
AND WILL PM U FOR SURE 😊
AND I HAVE SENT U A FRIEND REQUEST PLZ ACCEPT IT 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Nice start
update soon

THANKS A LOT DEAR 😊
YA I WILL UPDATE ASAP 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

~ MY HEART KNOW U ~

Chapter - 2 ( pms later )

Raman came in and stand in front of ishita and says " I do trust u ishita , I do trust u , my heart know u , mera dil ab tak itna to jaan gaya hai ki chahe puri duniya wrong ho par meri ishita kabhi wrong ho he nahi sakti , ( he didn't even realize that he remarked her as his while saying "meri ishita")

she always do d right , I know u , my heart know u ,

ishita ( while complaining ) - agar itna acchhe se jaante ho aap mujhe to phir un sabke saamne kuch bola kyu nahi jab vo sab apki wife ki insult kar rahe the , mujhe blame kar rahe the 😭

raman - because I was not in a condition 2 think or say anything at that time , mujhe samjh nahi aaraha tha ki how should I react 2 all this , everything was so confusing 2 me at that time 😕

then Raman holds ishita by her shoulders and says with tears in his eyes " my heart trust u ishita my heart do trust u after knowing how special , precious and beautiful u r as a human being , u r d one who have given so much love and care 2 my daughter by being her mother , u r d one who saved my ruhi , I could have lost her if u wouldn't have been there for her ,

Tumne he to meri princess ruhi aur mere beech ki dooriyan mitayi hai , tumhari vajah se he to main ek acha papa ban paya hun ,

Tum hi to ho jisne hamesha meri help ki hai chahe phir uske liye tumhe mere saare taunts he kyu na jhelne pade ho , tum he ne to business main mujhe bachaya tha , tum he to ho vo jisne meri behan ki help kit hi , tum he to ho vo jo apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina dusre ki jaan bachane ke liye ready rehti hai , tumhe ne to pooja ko bachaya tha aur uski delivery karwayi thi , jab koi kuch nahi kar pa raha tha tab tum he ne to sab kuch sambhala tha , tum he to jo us nanhi jaan ko ( baby ko) is duniya main laayi thi ,

U r d one who help others selflessly ,

U r d one who love others unconditionally ,

Tum he to ho vo jo sabse pal main dil ke rishte jod leti hai , sabko apna bana leti hai, apne sache pyaar se , apni care se , then how can u be wrong , u can never be wrong and my heart know this very well , my heart know my ishita very well 😳

(ishita was surprised that raman, her ravan kumar is saying all this , she was not being able 2 believe this, but his words were healing ishu's wounds on her heart and soul given by parmeet , raman words were relieving her , or I should say raman's love and care hidden in those words were healing ishu's wounds . she was just listening him without blinking eyes , while tears were flowing down from her eyes .. mihika was smiling in between her tears 2 know that her jiju loves her akka so much though he himself is unaware about his love for ishita , mihika could see raman's love in his eyes for ishita ... his love was hidden in his anger , in his tears , in his care , in his taunts also , this time ishita's heart was also feeling a different , a magical emotion ...but was not in a state 2 understand anything )

Ishita hug raman not being able 2 control herself more , she hug him as tightly as she could , in no time raman also hug her back as he know that hug was need 2 comfort her after what she have gone through , she was feeling much safe and protected in raman's arms ...😳

[ my little shayari 😆]

" teri baahon main dard apna bhool jaate hai ...

tujhse milte hai hum to khud ko bhool jaate hai ...

bechain dil ko sukoon milta hai teri baahon main ...

Mere adoore pyaar ko apna pyaar milta hai teri baahon main "

Ishita really feel so safe in raman's arms and raman also feel being completed in ishita's arms , they never wanted 2 move apart from each other , their heart wished 2 spend their whole life in each other's arms .. they have forget everything while hugging each other , they have even forgot that mihika was standing there only who was smiling seeing 2 lovebirds who have not even realized that they have fallen in love for each other .

Mihika coughs fakely - ah ah oo

But they both were so lost in each other that they were not affected by mihika

Mihika cough more loudly - ah ahoo

Now they both come into reality lolz they break d hug but while breaking d hug ishu's locket which she was wearing on her neck get stuck in d button of raman's shirt and they both look in each other's eyes , just 2 find some absorbed tears , some dried tears and some fresh tears along with love 😳 and care for each other in their eyes ,😭

( mihika was adoring her akka and jiju)

Ishita came out of trance and started freeing her locket from raman's shirt's button

But while doing this unknowingly both come so close 2 each other that they could feel each other's breathe 😉 and hear each other's heartbeat 😳 but ishita got a little shy and nervous , and starts doing that fast fast , and at last she was able 2 do that , and they both feel awkward and move apart unwantedly but they feel more shy and awkward seeing mihika smiling , 😆

Mihika says "aww akka jiju , aap dono sath main kitne acchhe lagte ho 😛

ishita - chup

mihika - ok jiju now we all know akka is right but how will we prove this , how will we bring d real face of parmeet in front of everyone????? , how will show everyone that parmeet is d culprit and not my innocent akka "

Raman - "good point mihika "

They all start 2 think what r they going 2 do 😕

Raman clicked his finger as he got an idea

Raman - I got an idea mere paas ek plan hai , but ishita mujhe ismein tumhari help chahiye ,

He told her something ( what was that ,u will get 2 know later ok😉)

Ishita - par raman main ye kaise ???? I cant do this , this is risky , I don't even want 2 see that creep again , how will I do this , agar kuch gadbad ho gayi to

Raman - come on ishita , tum to meri Jhansi ki rani ho 😉 ,tum ye kar sakti ho , kuch gadbad nahi hogi , I will handle everything , u just do as I say

Mihika - come on akka u can do this , and why r u worrying , jiju is with u na then just go for it , we have no other option

Ishita - mihika its not that easy as u r saying

Raman - listen ishita , main tumhe Jhansi ki rani aise he nahi bulata 😛, I know u r a fighter , and u r very strong , nothing is impossible for u , and tell me u trust me or Not ??

ISHITA nods in yes that yes she trust her , she trust her more than anyone else

Ishita - Hmm I trust u raman and will fight with u , hum sab milke usse aise sabak sikhayenge ki vo zindagi bhar yaad rakhega..

But u have 2 be with me always at every step

Raman - I M WITH U MERI JHANSI KI RANI 😉 , I M ALWAYS WITH U , main hamesha tumhare saath hun chahe mujhe apni family ke against he kyu na jaana pade , ab to hum us parmeet ko hara kar he rahenge , I m always with u 😊

They both caught in an eyelock which was broken when ishu's amma appa came in and appa say - " we r also with u in this plan "

Amma - humne tumhara plan sunn liya hai and I m so proud of u raman , thanks for supporting my daughter when she need u d most going against ur family ,

Raman - arre amma plz aap mujhe thanks mat boliye , ishita ne bhi to hamesha mere saath diya hai , to kya ab mera farz nahi banta ki main usse support karun aur usse is problem se nikalun ..aur jab mere he family ke member ne meri wife ko harass kiya hai , to usse punish karna to mera farz banta hai ...

Appa was a little teary seeing d kindness of his son in law

So raman gave him a side hug ,

While ishita was just surprised and praising him inside her heart 😛 , for being so good 2 support d right going against his family

Ishita ki nazaron main raman ke liye respect aur increase ho gayi

Mihika - ok now so we all r together , and ready for d war against d devil Ok so I should inform vandita akka and bala jiju also so that they also support us in our plan but jiju plan to kal se shuru karna hai na ?

Raman - haan we will start d plan from tomorrow , to ab main ja (before he could say jaata hun ishita interrupts )

and she says- nahi raman plz aap mujhe akela chodkar mat jaayiye na please don't leave me alone

raman understood that ishita was still fearing and scared because of that bad incident

raman assure her saying " ok ok relax ishita, I m not going anywhere , main yahin hun aaj raat tumhare paas don't worry , no can dare 2 harm u "

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Precap - ch- 3 part - a- ishra spending whole night together ,

Ch-3 part b - parmeet 2 be caught with A SHOCK

KYA HOGA JAB ISHRA HONGE SATH WITHOUT RUHI ???? 😉😉

KYA PLAN HAI RAMAN KA PARMEET KO PAKADNE KE LIYE ? WHAT KIND OF RISK WAS THERE????? WHAT KIND OF SHOCK I M TALKING ABOUT ????

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So 2 know more and get answers 2 all d questions , stay tuned , abhi thode se twists and turns aane wale hai 😛😛 so be ready for it

Sorry if I disappoint anyone but If u all really like it then plz do like as well as comment from heart , silent readers hit like plz

Take care and keep smiling always 😊
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: chinudolly


hii dear 😊😊
thank u for a warm welcome dear 😊
😲😲 oh my god sachi
hmmm so u r secretly silently following all my tr stories
nice very nice 😆
dil se thank u so much for that 😊

and i also love yhm esp ruhi so much 😳
and trust me dear readers like u r also a blessing for a writer 😊

DIL SE BIG WALA THANK U FOR THIS SPECIAL AS WELL AS PRECIOUS COMMENT
IT MEANS A LOT 2 ME 😊😊😊
TAKE CARE
AND KEEP SMILING ALWAYS
(and i will try 2 update asap , but plz u also read and KEEP COMMENTING Also as reader's comments encourage a writer so much )😊😊



ha ha ha ha...

yes i was follower of ur tr storys...all credit to dips..indu...who gave ur index to read...

i think i havent commented randomly...

now being a forum member for more than 3 shows...

i gets trouble in reading all fictions...so bcme lazy...he he he


but dont worry...wen ever i get time..i will be reading...if i dont get time to cmnt..

atleast i will like the fiction...

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