ISHRA 'FF' ~~ 'To Trust OR Not To Trust' [Chap 4 - Page 8] - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

51

Views

26.4k

Users

27

Likes

215

Frequent Posters

sudhajo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awesome,,,,loved it. Ishra's emotions were really done so well//
itsme_aish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Beautiful Shivu😃😃..I loved this line esp "Every second spent away form her seemed like an eternity for him." ❤️
So cute it is to see that Raman is racing to get his Jhansi back in his life😳😳..And awww..poor Ishu..she is truly heartbroken..💔..She detested seeing Bhallas but she froze when it came to Raman..awww😳😳..

Its ok Shivu..no need to apologize..😊..Just keep updating FF😃..I love reading these FFs/OS..it makes me very happy😊😊..thanks for the PM dearie😊😊
ForbbidenLove thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#43
SO basically, as shown in the show is how Raman POVED Ishita's innocent here as well..Part 4 is the aftermath of what happened after Pervmeet was handed over to the cops...
Index - Page 1
Part Three - Page 7




To Trust OR Not To Trust.

~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~..~~


As, Ishita started walking out of the house...Raman called out to her.. "Ishita"...she continued walking out..The rest of the family members were literally just standing there, having their own mental conversation to what's going to happen... Raman hurried a few steps ahead and grabbed hold of Ishita's hand... At thievery instant, she jerked it off and stood in her tracks...Just few inches away from the front door of the Bhalla household, Ishita's back was facing Raman..


Where are you going Ishita?..asked Raman

"To where I truly belong..My house." Ishita replies back in a very stern tone..

"But..But..this is your house..."

"WAS!..I'm sorry, Mr.RamanKumarBhalla... this WAS my house but now it's just a place I detest."

"Ishita..please STOP it... stop throwing daggers at me through your words...Everything is solved now...Please, forgive me...

"What did you say?, I'm throwing daggers at you with my words... Well, your silence yesterday did far worse things to me.."

"For goodness sake Ishita, You're still thinking that, I don't trust you... I trust you Ishita..I really do..I know my Wife..I know her well...There's no way she would do such a thing not even in her dreams... You're assuming things...Did I tell you that, I didn't trust you that day when all the hungama happened?"

"Neither did you tell me that you trusted me.."

"Ishitaaa please, I can't do this anymore... This word game we're playing is going no where... Let's just please stop this and forget everything.."

"Same sentiments Mr.Raman Bhalla.. You can't do this anymore and neither can I...So like you said, let's just forget everything..Before that, let me go and get something..."


Raman was elated that finally Ishita was convinced.. Both the Bhallas and Iyers were equally Happy as well...That everything was back to normal...

Few minutes later, Ishita came back...Everyone was settled down in the sofa and chatting about whatever had happened thus far... Ishita stops at the door and everyone turns to look at her with smiles on their faces.. Raman gets up from the dinning chair and heads towards her to welcome her in but what followed was nothing but a HURRICANE in disguise...


Ishita handed over some folded papers to Raman...

"What is this?"

"See for yourself.."

As Raman opened up the paper and started reading the content of it...His hand was slipping down from the grip he first held the paper with..Tears were blurring his vision...With a disbelief look plastered on his face, he looks up at Ishita...

"Divorce notice?"

"Yes, divorce notice... I did tell you last night, didn't I?!... Did you think I was kidding? Not at all, Raman.. I've never been this serious in my life... I've already signed the papers... If you sign it too, we can go for a not so messy mutual divorce if you refuse things will only get ugly but trust me...however ugly it gets, the divorce will happen..."

"Is this what you really want?"

"Yes!... And also, you should be more happy now...There's no more pretending to act like a couple...This marriage was for Ruhi...but unfortunately that's where it ends... You and Me, were never meant to be..."

"Ishitaa..."

"Raman, please..Save your speech for the audiences and your business clients...If you stayed dumb at the moment I needed you the most, I don't wish to hear anything you've got to say today...It's OVER...Tomorrow, family court at 10am.."


With that Ishita turns and walks away..leaving Raman and the entire family gathered there feeling numb and sick within...The Iyers were shocked..as no one knew about Ishita's decision...

Raman brings the paper close to his face as if trying to zoom in to what's written in it...He knew it was nothing but his fate... And the next thing you know it..he crushes it into his face, crying and falling to the ground...


Chapter 5; To be Continued

Chapter 5 will most probably be the last part if not the 2nd last part.. Am trying to finish up on all my pending FF's and SS's... Finally got back my muse for this, so will finish off with this first...


Thank you all from the bottom of my heart. Do keep showing your support.😊
Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago
luvsagar thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Shivu...darling...such a lovely FF ! Loved how u displayed RKB emotions Loved ur Ishita...u should write more!!!!🤗🤗🤗
ForbbidenLove thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: luvsagar

Shivu...darling...such a lovely FF ! Loved how u displayed RKB emotions Loved ur Ishita...u should write more!!!!🤗🤗🤗


Thank you so much Nina... I've wanted to see emotional outbreak of both Ishita and Raman hopefully I'm able to do justice to it in the next part...
Nikki_Titli thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#46
finally u updated this...bt come on no divorce plz..i want to see my SHER RAMAN back who can handle this SHERNI ISHITA..😆.. waitin for next update..

this one ws short n lovely
Ram-an-tic.Moi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Phew! Extremely emotional updates Shivu! I read the last 3 at a go & by the end of it i was feeling as devastated as Raman must probably feeling! And could so well understand Ishu's turmoil!
Her anger, her sense of betrayal was well justified! She's fighting for her self respect here. But she is also fighting with the one person she trusted to trust her. I am sure that is the toughest battle to fight coz either ways you lose!
Raman! Poor thing! He is always at the receiving end even if he is not directly at fault! The loneliness, the dejection, the fear and the pain was so wonderfully written out!
Update soon please! And make IshRa happy once again!
avni_19 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Read all the parts together. Really amazing. Keep continuing
Eager to read more. Plss PM me... im waitingg. Thnkuu dear!
_Divya_ thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#49
read all d parts! 😃
its nice.. cont soon!
Geeta.R thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#50
A fantastic ff was a pleasure especially this way of dealing with trust and face off it was different than the usual emotional outbursts but I loved it. Please continue soon x

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

5 months ago

IshRa OS: Unspoken Desires.

On the show, we all know how Raman tried to give hints to Ishita about his feelings and desires, by keeping a box of condoms in her drawer. An...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan

4 years ago

YHM DT #8 (Strictly Reserved for IshRa/DivAn)

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14

4 months ago

FF: IshRa ISHQ !!

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

5 months ago

ISHRA OS:- Tumhare bina main adhoora hoon.

It was one of those rare calm nights in Delhi, the kind that carried a soft breeze, the scent of blooming mogra, and a strange kind of silence...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: thefarfetcher

1 years ago

FF: Submerse (AUTHOR'S NOTE on Page 3)

There's something bittersweet about finding a fandom when it seems dead and buried, but that's how things seem to have worked out this time. I...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".