Pieces of a puzzle - an IshRa SS| Epilogue - PG 26

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exploringmyself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

beautiful.. plz upd8 soon :)

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uamaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Super start, lookingbforward to reading the rest 😃

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@gk_09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Beautifully written Aani! Can't wait for the next parts 😃

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shalu79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow Anni.

the way u do detailing hats off.

really can visualise everything. picture get created in front of eyes while reading.

Loved it very much

waiting for next update.

Thansk for PM n also for writing this beautiful OS

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Love,

Shalu

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BeautyFooL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Aani, its brilliant start... loved it all from start to end!
You're amazing the way you have desribed RKB's pain, the feeling tugging at his heart and then his confusion at the end.. I seriously love your style of writing & sense of imagination.. You make it easy for readers to connect with the scene.. Loved this update thoroughly.. Waiting for the next update..

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ishra24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

very well written. it's beautiful.

Please update soon!

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Absolutely loved it. I could feel the pain of both Raman and Ishu and the guilt gnawing his insides. It was beautifully described Aani. Damn girl you write really well 👏😆.

I cannot wait to read the next parts. And yes, please do include a sound thrashing of the Perv in it. Raman needs to punch the guy senseless and who better to describe the scene than you 😃

Waiting for the next parts eagerly 😊

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UDEY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Pieces of a puzzle indeed... 😊

Great choice of epigraph n Beautiful...Beautiful delineation of his pain n confusion ... 👏

Looking forward to more insights into d Bhalla Soul 😳

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This is the 1st story (based on the latest spoilers) i read which focussed on Raman's emotions! And how beautifully!
There is no bigger war than the one you have to fight with your own self! He knows he has wronged Ishita. He knows he has let her down. He realises his mistake and that is what is going to make him right them all! And i am so looking forward to reading how he fights for his wife and gets her back the respect she so deserves from one & all!
Raman kumar Bhalla's pain, his longing, his guilt, his repentance...and his love for his wife...shone through your update! Superb!
Do update soon! Please make "ennoda superman" to wipe away Ishita's pain and our Karela Couple to come closer! :)

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Naveen Arshad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey Aani *hugs* Thanks a lot for such a beautiful start to your SS. I was so hoping you write one on this track, since the episodes to be shown this week would be unbearable. At least your SS will keep us in good spirits !! Loved how you expressed Raman's anguish and his missing Ishu so terribly. Can't wait for the next part. Keep it coming !!

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