IshRa SS- 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' Final Part(s) updated Pg 8 - Page 3

its well written article i loved it plz update soon

Heyy its nice ...loved da part wish in serial also this part wuld be goin on...anywaz pla continue soon...take care ...love aish :)

This update made for such a complete & wholesome read!
Whattay perfect mix & balance of emotions. From Ishi's love for Ruhi to Raman's conscience making him apologise & thank her.. From Ishita & Raman's conversation to Raman & Ruhi's cute moments.. From Raman's love & care for Ruhi to his usual aloof annoyed self towards Ishita at the end.. The update had it all. Thoroughly enjoyed the roller coaster ride of emotions!

Now for the cute family to go on a vacation. Eager to see what transpires between the Kaccha khatta aam & Jhansi ki Rani in Simla! :D

Do continue soon!

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Love the way u write...its straightforward ..without any melodrama still manages to touch the readers heart through the beautiful expression of little gestures and deep emotions

Beautifully written ...Loved his controlled way of showing affection and concern for her...Ishita ...poor girl is getting heart attacks after seeing Ravan kumar in such caring mode...Ruhi-Raman scene was adorable...Papa aap ki dadhi chubhti hai...lol

Amazingly written scene of IshRa ..how he said thanks to her and never let her go away in sleep...i was hoping for a morning aftermath of this encounter 😳...greedy me😛

U are a gifted writer...keep writing dear

Aww thank you so much for such a sweet comment.. I love your work too.. Coming such a sweet comment from your end means a lot..
Not sure about IshRa morning encounter but will try not to disappoint you😳

Thanks again dear🤗

Originally posted by: shalu79

I am fan of ur os, ss. Thanks for writing was really waiting for ur story. But where can I read it. I m not able to find ss. Pls help

Sorry sorry got it. Will read it n come again to comment

Wow superb. Loved it. Pls do continue.

Thanks again Shalu.. You're really Sweet.. Will be continuing this one soon..😃

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg Namyyy rockin rockin start...aww i could soo soo visualise evry scene....

cant wait to read IshRa's shimla trip..!!

thnx for pm n plz continue super soon..!!

Thanks a ton Nikki.. Glad that you could visualise the scene.. Your comment is always encouraging..
Will try to post next update as soon as possible..

Originally posted by: peric

superbb ... cant wait for the next part , update soon

Thank you so much!! Will do it soon..

Originally posted by: sudhajo

loved it,,, fantastic work

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: disha93

Awesome!!!!

Thanks..

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it

Thank you..

Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow this was superb cute and amazing. Many mindblowing moments firstly raman going to isitas clinic then raman and ruhis conversion was too cute even then the picnic convo. Really nice. Looking forward for the shimla trip.pm me when u update next

Thanks a ton for your sweet comment.. Glad you liked the scenes you quoted.. Added you in PM list :)

Originally posted by: Npadz

Awesome!! Looking forward to the next part 😃 Please PM me when you update!

Also since they're going to Shimla, will there be any romantic Kuch Kuch Hota Hai moments? 😉 Would love to see an SRK-Kajol type rain dance scene 😳

Thanks Npadz.. You know I'm a hugeee fan of SRK-Kajol.. and wow i love your idea of KKHH moment on IshRa As much as I'd love to see such scene, its very difficult for me to put it in words.. 😳 Still will try to put something nice..😳

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it update soo

Thanks dear..

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

awesome namita di.. best os 😃 👏 mujhe bhi sikhao na os likhna 😊

Thank you very much Ketu😳 You are a good writer yaar.. Nd i am always happy to help u with the titles😉😳

Originally posted by: momb24

Your very talented writer 😊
looking forward to reading more.

Thanks a ton fr your encouragement.. Means a lot :)

Originally posted by: priyavin

Raman and his mood swings😆

Lets see how Ishita would handle Raman and Ruhi on her own in Shimla ;)

Please pm me when you update next

Thank you so much..
Glad you liked it..
Will surely PM you when i ll update..

Originally posted by: uamaz

Many thanks for the PM 👍🏼
Two instant emotions to this part are 🤗 beatiful and 👏 well done.

Loved how raman has instigated a honeymoon trip for him and ishita 😳 cant wait for thr next part, 😆

Aww you are so sweet 🤗

Happy you loved d scene.. Will try not to disappoint you in the next update😳

Originally posted by: simples28

Oh woww yaar⭐️⭐️.brilliant👏👏..Loved how you perfectly portrayed every emotion❤️..The best for me is Raman being all protective about Ruhi😃😃..reminded me of my very own dad⭐️..Very true..Daughters are emotionally very connected to dads and dads are super protective about their daughters😊..Your story is so beautifully written..displayed every emotion so amazingly👍🏼..Wow abhi Raman aur Ishu bhi jaayenge😃..Par woh dono toh akele honge na..😉..Pls pls pls continue dear..😃 Eagerly awaiting your next update ..Thanks alot for the PM🤗

Aww Thank you so much for such a lovely comment🤗
Glad you liked convo between Raman - Ruhi.. I am also very very close to my dad.. So visulisation comes handy you know😳

Thanks a ton for ur encouraging words.. Means a lot.. Will be continuing soon... 🤗