IshRa SS- 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' Final Part(s) updated Pg 8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Awesome

Luvd it

Beautifully written

Ur a amazing writer

Continue soon...w8ing 4 d nxt part

Thnx 4 d pm!!

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Honeymoon...❤️❤️
Cant wait to read more

Originally posted by: 4856

lovely...very well written...please continue..!! 😊😊

Originally posted by: -Raz-

WOW
Mashallah ..i haven't written THIS log.of a postgor anyone in a Long time...


you are indeed a gifted writer...im here sticker to my.phone reading your lob update which seemed so.short for me...Anyways if u can please please pm.me...and update very soo.

Originally posted by: -Shwetha-

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Nami, before I continue wud like to give u a tight hugs🤗 wow...such a beautiful track...it seemed like characters are coming before eyes 😳...sachi baba...once again I like to re-iterate that Vocabulary terms used is really awesome & the conversations was just perfect & It brings smiles on our faces...the sentimental & comedy touch- awesome ⭐️&the story just takes us away...b/w this is ur 1st SS of IshRa right, if iam not wrong 😳...will wait for the continuation for shimla track...IshRa rocks👏👏</font>

Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Oue Shwetzi jaan 🤗... Thanks a ton for such a wonderful words.. You always flatter me with your lovely comment.. I must thank you for sparing time frm your studies to read & comment on update.. So happy you liked d scene..
Really miss talking to you.. All the very best fr ur exams and come back soon 🤗

Originally posted by: re123

heyee namy dear🤗

i am sorry for late reply...😉.
Oye re dear [>:d<] thanks a ton for such a deliciously long comment.. ❤️

Here comes raman bhalla to meet ishita😳

his inner turmoil is always a treat !!!!

.phele galti karoo..aur baad mein toh sorry bhi nahi bolta🤣***well written dear***
That is a unique quality of Khadoos bhalla😳😆

heyee his hesitations toh dekho... receptionist ko bhi nahi chooda😆..onliners haa .***blissful***.😃

loved emotional part on ishu well written ...yes ruhi is angel fr herein real mean!!!...love this daughter -mother relationship tooo core..👏

" He never listens to sound advice." 🤣 🤣

so he is studying his wify to end 😳..lectures frm his side for a change😆**namy ye kya hora hai**
Kuch nahi.. kuchh nahi.. aur ek argument ho raha hai..

i loved lecture it is good one ...***pov**👍🏼

kadoos kabhi nahi sudhar sakta 😆..aga gayi wahi line pe

he is relived to an end seeing his jhansi ki rani back on action😳

bolo ..bolo why u came here😆...at last an apology and thnks from his mouth😃***dil khush kar diya apne***

she is over whelmed with this action...🤗
And I am overwhelmed with your comment 🤗

loved they way how they knew each other so well ...beautifully pinned up!!! great work 😃

ruhi shopping idea!!...jaise papa waise beti ziddi😆

naraz/sad hone se gift!!! har kisi ki kismat hayee😉***dont hit me now****

hw cute conv bw both father and daughter love too core...***yes papas are always angels fav😳***
That was my fav part dear😳

raman and his mood swings😆

bed wala scenes hw cute is it..thank u ji😳..hmmm☺️

picnic scenario was hilarious !!! raman vs his family 👏

honey moon😳😳

shimla ke sair karana 😉..

do dil ka bhi milan haaa..😳.

***uss pal ka hume hai intezaar ***

continue soon dear waiting... 😃

i enjoyed it all lot dear...

love u lot

⭐️
Tussi ne toh dil khush kar ditta.. cant thank you enough 🤗



Thank you very much..😳

Originally posted by: -Ursh-

I'm not going to get time to Unres the spot! so here goes!

Once again another phenomenal piece of writing :] I think your one of the best with the realism of how the characters speak and you capture that so well yaar! <3

I love the dental scene where Raman comes in. Oh dearo I feel like I am actually watching the show with how descriptive you are with each and every scene.

Toshi Ji dialogues are the best yaara! :) You are the bestest. Me loves Namy :) Tuse great ho!

Waiting for more x You know Me busy so can't sit writing to long comment.

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Outstanding start Nami Di!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?