OS: A Night Away

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luvsagar

@luvsagar

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Pri

Such a cute OS ... Hope u continue.

Kashmir aisa Kuch YHM bathathe!

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eternalasha

@eternalasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Omg that was precious, truly. 😉

I could just see him marching over to get her with a lame-ass excuse that he completely convinced himself of.

And Mihika bursting out laughing. Apt.

So realistic and true to character all of it.

Raman was adorable.

You write so so well. Please do write more fiction as well.

Edited by eternalasha - 11 years ago

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

loved it.raman brought ishita in his own akdoo andaaj.hope to see such scenes in show too.

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awww this is supaa cutee...how i wish it just comes true in the show.

You wrote brilliantly for a first attempt...do write more

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--madhu--

@--madhu--

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awww it was such a cute os 😊

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Pri

What you wrote a os

Awesome job

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asha nair

@i4ishra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

One of th cutest os I read till date. ..I can actually see th scens in real just luvd th scen in ishi s rum it felt lik I m actually seeing th scen claps to ur writing skills👏 keep writing

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uamaz

@uamaz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Beautiful, enjoyed every moment of it.. if only this happened in the show i think the show Would stop because all viewers would be in coma 😆

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hey pri

I read your last line only nor

Well I can't do emotional stuff as well

So keep writing comic stuff

I guess that's why we connect so well

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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Nice, put a smile on my face 😊

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