SS Kinship chapter 2 pg 4 check pg 6 note - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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greatt how unfair to stop there..pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why such doubt dear...you are the star writer ...so pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nadiya..Please continue soon! Abhi se mera dimag soch raha hai next kya hoga..kya hoga! 😆
Awesome start... continue soon will be waiting for this! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Naddiya. Pls continue...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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soooper

i really loved it

plz plz continue

i cant wait to read the next chapter

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats very interesting...ofcourse you should continue..you're an awesome writer and just love your work 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Doo continu nadi
Loved ur all work u know 😳
Really want to know his planei
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Posted: 11 years ago
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" you are a dramabaz do you know that " she pull her hands " playing with emotions is not right " she look away

" i am not , Ashok had brainwash him " he said looking at her

" Raman you are playing with his feelings " she open her file & started reading , he left his seat & walked to her he rotated her seat & placed his both arm on her shoulder

" he has to know i have move on as his mom had , & for that i need your help " he cupped her face & asked , she shakes her head to free herself

"Ruhi can't live without me " she said

" we will leave it on her , if she says she want to be with you we both will agree " he smiled at her

" this is too much " she said

" yar you are always ready to fight with me , what is your problem to pretend one " he said

" that are natural " she said

" oh mera maa maan jao na " he beg her

" Raman i am not your maa haata " she try to move him

" oye Ruhi ki maa " he hold her from shoulder " i have only 30 hour to tell him " he shouted

" he gave you time " she look at him in shock , he left her & shakes his head " aap bhi na " she picked his cell & gave him " call him at once before your they create more problem " she said , he look at her in surprise " aap sochta kitna hai " she made him realised , he called Adi & asked him to pack his bags as he is coming to collect him

" i have my own car" he cut the call ,Raman in embarrassment look at her , she look away

" no fight please , let me manage it " she said

" ok as you wish ,see you at home " he without looking at her walked out

" for kids what all this man will do " she became worried



At home

"Maa Adi is coming to stay with us " Raman said to Toshi ji

" Adi mera Adi " she became emotional " oh let me fix room for Adi " She tires to get up from her wheel chair

"Maa you tell me i will do " Ishita hold her arm , Raman look at her

" you came early " he was surprise to see her

" Adi is coming we should welcome him " she said & look away , Raman didn't has courage to look at her


"where he will stay? " she asked him as he enter the bedroom ,he look at her packing her suitcase

" here " he said

"where you will sleep ?" she look at him & asked

" i can sleep anywhere " he quickly taken out his clothes from his cupboard " he has a separate bedroom there , i want to give him his privacy " he was standing with hangers

"give me " she took it from him & walked to Ruhi bedroom , made space for his clothes there

"Ishita " he walked with his other stuffs

" where you both will stay ?" Simmi asked them, Raman helplessly look at Ishita

"Di i will stay with my parents "she said & drag her suitcase

"wait i will take that" he took it from her hand

" Raman what is this? " mr Bhalla shouted at him as he saw her luggage

"papa Adi said he will come & stay here with us only if Ishita is not here " he said

" tum pagal ho , for Adi you are asking her to leave " Mr Bhalla shouted at him

"Adi said if she is here he will not come " he look at the time

" i am not going anywhere , i am next to you all " Ishita come forward & said

" Raman will too stay with you , we don't have space here , you both will stay there, Raman if you don't agree with me call Adi & ask him not to come here " Bhalla ji said as his final order


Romi shouted " Bhai Adi aagaya "

Raman gave up " i will stay with her , but i will go there when Adi is asleep " he said & ran to Iyer home to keep her things

" sab Shagun na kiya hai " Toshi ji said , Ishita quickly hug her & walk to her place , from peep-hole she saw Raman coming with Adi

" IS your wife at home " adi asked before stepping in

Raman look at Iyer door as he knew she was watching them " no"

" ok " Adi with attitude walked in

" Adi " Toshi ji open her arms to hug him , he took a step back waved at her " hi "

Raman with eyes asked her to leave him " let me take you to your bedroom " Raman said

" oh God this place is so suffocated mom was right , a small place with too many people " he look around , everyone look at each other , he followed Raman

"you will stay here " Raman placed his bag , he walked to the dresser ,& saw Ishita bangle , Raman noticed it he quickly hide it in his pocket , Adi look at him

" because of you i have said sorry to my friend" he said

" you will enjoy here " Raman hug him & pat his cheeks

" please i am not Ruhi " he push him aside , Raman in shock look at him ,at the same time his cell rang" excuses me " he picked call & pointed at door , asking Raman to leave " mom you were right , it is so congested , i really salute you that you select Ashok papa "

Raman shakes his head & closed the door " I will hardly survive 1 day here " he said , Raman overheard it he dejectedly walk out to Iyer placed as he was too suffocated there


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Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yippiieee... phaassttt 1...oye... this toh is the awsome man... adi is such a ass... poor raman... n ishu.. so understanding. ... nw raman will be in ishu's house , in her room... I would like to see that...update soon... n plese pm me
Edited by Parvathi12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raman also feeling suffocated there 😆

hahaha good 1

Im loving .. update soon #Nads


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