SS Kinship chapter 2 pg 4 check pg 6 note

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Raman walked in where Adi called him , he was double minded " what he will ask me ?" he saw Adi sitting , he waved at him , Raman walked to him

" bolo beta " he seated

" what so ever i asked you , you have to agree " Adi said

" sure beta , ask me anything " he smiled at him

" you want me to spend my vacation with you right " he narrowed his eyes & asked

" yes "Raman gave a big smile

" leave her " he look at his cell & said

"what " Raman in shocked look at him

" i don't want your new wife around you leave her" he said rudely

" Adi " Raman tries to find words

" ok fine " he stand

Raman grab his arm " Adi listen to me this is not possible " Ruhi words echo in his ears

"select one her or me " he said loudly

"Adi you are my first priority , but i can't leave her , as Ruhi loves her , she can't leave without her " he said

" why don't you say , you love her " Adi leave his arm

"Adi beta " he tries to hold him

"please now dare not call me , as you have lost all your right to call me beta " he said & started walking

"wait " Raman grab his arm

" tell me your reply by noon or i plan to go for a camping with my buddies" he said frees his arm & walked out , left Raman in shocked

" If Ishita goes means Ruhi too " he sat holding his head , he look at the time it was ten , he walked out hurriedly , "where to go ?" he drives intentionally reached her clinic , he realised as he hit the break " what i am doing here ?" he look at her clinic , he saw her car , he step down & walked in to her office

Ishita saw him coming in "yeh Ravan kumar yahan kya kar raha hai " she said " again he has toothache " she tries to read his face , he pull the chair & sat ." sab thek hai " she asked as his face was all red

" he asked me to choice between you & him " he murmur & look at her

" what are you saying ? i am don't understand you " she said & hold his hand which was lying on table

" Adi called me today " he look at her " Adi & Ruhi both are same for me , Ruhi can't live without you , if you go away from her sight she cries like anything" he said without looking at her , Ishita pull away her hand , he look at her & grab it

" Ishita i came here as know you are the only person who can help me right now " he said helplessly

" what help you want Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla ? you married me because of Ruhi , & today for Adi you are leaving me " she shouted

" i am not , Ruhi promise i am not , please i just need your help " he look at her & said

"what help " she look away & said

" you promise me you will agree with me " he smiled at her

" first you tell me " she said

"Jhansi ki Rani " he shakes his head & told her his plan

should i cont ?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear Nadiya never ask whether to continue ur story or not
Because ur stories r always fabulous be it one shot or SS
Please continue ur story
Now come to story fabulous start
That bratty Asi asked raman to leave Ishi
Humm though Raman doesn't want as he can't leave ruhi
Wow so he has a plan and goes to Ishi
Wonder what is the plan
I suppose he will ask her to pretend to fight with him
Or pretending to fight with him in front of that kid
Wonderful
Please continue soon as possible
Very eager to read further
Oh and please pm me
Edited by Angel13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sure - do continue - it will be interesting to see how Raman thinks he can have his cake and eat it too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i feel the same for show wala Raman too...he jst cant dump her coz of Ruhi..so there has to be midway solution...!!

donno wht CVs planned...bt would definitely wanna knw urs..!!
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why did u stop? tell us wat is Raman plan n?ur os is always awesome i read ur post update ur 2nd part as soon as possible
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Nadiyaaa😊😊..pls pls pls continue soon..😃😃
I found the start only so mashallah👏👏..Please update soon..
Im looking fwd to it..⭐️⭐️..I really want to know what Raman is planning..😊😊
You knw what..CVs can read your stories and take some ideas from it..They are so awesomee...😃😃
Thanks a lot for all your efforts❤️👍🏼..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start .. Plz continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes please continue!! Looking forward to it :)
And please PM me if you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nadsss continue please...
So raman come up with a plan to
leave ishu n get adi
want to knw more

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