The Risk to Blossom - IshRa SS - Final Chapter - Page 14 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Hello dear ,

The ability to convey something subtle so eloquently is definitely praiseworthy. In that respect hats off and huge round of applause to you dear.
The first step towards any kind of relation is being cordial with one another. Respecting one another and listening to one another. Currently that's what is very much lacking between Raman and Ishita.

Raman in your work finally realised that Ishita is a human worthy of his respect. Worthy of being dealt with as an equal. Worthy of being dealt with as a family. It took him a very nasty reality check to do that but he did. That alone shows that somewhere in him a part of the old Raman exists. The one who was kind and caring. The one who loved with whole heart. The way back to that Raman is a long winding road and also that Raman can never truly come back. But he took the first step and with that is born the hope of better days ahead for his family.

Ishita leaped into a marriage just for Ruhi. She was a mother gaining the custody of her child by legal means. In the wake of the prospect of getting a child to finally call her own and love , she didn't give much thought to the other name , the other relation that would be form. She didn't think into future. Hence the rude awakening she received. She was brave enough to voice her fears with a man who rarely ever listened to her. But the fact that she did meant that she wanted the relation to work. She knows that there is probably going to be no love like that of real lovers. But she wants to be real parents to Ruhi and parents always confer together for their child. They always come together to protect and nurture their children. Ruhi has come from a broken family and Ishita knows that a pretentious family will only maim her daughter more. Also she accepts that the Bhalla 's are her family and she cared for them. Being a Bhalla comes from her marriage to Raman , so how can she ignore him?

Well written and plotted.
Do write more.
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N


Hey N
Thanks a lot for your amazing comment😊

@red - ☺️ thank you

@bold - precisely why I wrote this SS I WANTED some sort of peace, some respect so very much for Ishita here I couldn't help myself and wrote this for that cause alone

@blue - yep the old Raman is lost forever and while I can see why he is, it doesnt justify RKB' present way of handling things nor his behavior towards Ishita, like Ishita herself said last night he treats his family too so badly at times dont they get hurt?

Yes he is hurt because of Shagun but should one person matter so much that you ignore ALL of your kin and the woman who you are indebted to beyond words ? Nope he needed a rude wake-up call to get that for sure and in the show I think last night Ruhi' silent treatment was exactly that!


@purple - as in the show Ishita is more sorted here, she too was betrayed by Subbu in a way but dint lash out on everyone and now that she has a child - Ruhi at that, of course she wants to give that child everything possible and be the best mother she can, but she knows that alone isnt enough for a child needs a family and for that purpose alone - as parents if Raman and she herself dont ensure Ruhi gets a loving environment than there is no greater failure for them as parents and that is why she wants this marriage to work, but she alone cannot do that.

She needs Raman to co-operate with her for that totally, as much as the rest of his and now her family too.



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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the ending. hope to read another SS or FF by you soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88

Loved the ending. hope to read another SS or FF by you soon😊


Thanks a lot Yashasvi will try my best to do so, but until inspiration strikes me i am on a hiatus 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks Pooja 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
u r such an amazing writer👏👏
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

u r such an amazing writer👏👏


thanks Deepika 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ur an amazing writer dr. Would like to read many more amazing works from U.
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Originally posted by: geethuvasudevan

Ur an amazing writer dr. Would like to read many more amazing works from U.


thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such a good read! Love how most of this was in Raman's point of view. I really really think you should write a sequel to this about them falling in love.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgomg

This was such a good read! Love how most of this was in Raman's point of view. I really really think you should write a sequel to this about them falling in love.


thank you so much for the comment 😊 as for the sequel... I am not going in the same vein but I have written another SS and OS's ... the thing is I couldn't see this story beyond this point so I thought best conclude it here 😳 But if an idea does strike me I just might write a sequel 😊

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