Originally posted by: CavingIn
Hello dear ,
The ability to convey something subtle so eloquently is definitely praiseworthy. In that respect hats off and huge round of applause to you dear.The first step towards any kind of relation is being cordial with one another. Respecting one another and listening to one another. Currently that's what is very much lacking between Raman and Ishita.Raman in your work finally realised that Ishita is a human worthy of his respect. Worthy of being dealt with as an equal. Worthy of being dealt with as a family. It took him a very nasty reality check to do that but he did. That alone shows that somewhere in him a part of the old Raman exists. The one who was kind and caring. The one who loved with whole heart. The way back to that Raman is a long winding road and also that Raman can never truly come back. But he took the first step and with that is born the hope of better days ahead for his family.Ishita leaped into a marriage just for Ruhi. She was a mother gaining the custody of her child by legal means. In the wake of the prospect of getting a child to finally call her own and love , she didn't give much thought to the other name , the other relation that would be form. She didn't think into future. Hence the rude awakening she received. She was brave enough to voice her fears with a man who rarely ever listened to her. But the fact that she did meant that she wanted the relation to work. She knows that there is probably going to be no love like that of real lovers. But she wants to be real parents to Ruhi and parents always confer together for their child. They always come together to protect and nurture their children. Ruhi has come from a broken family and Ishita knows that a pretentious family will only maim her daughter more. Also she accepts that the Bhalla 's are her family and she cared for them. Being a Bhalla comes from her marriage to Raman , so how can she ignore him?Well written and plotted.Do write more.RegardsN
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