New FF - Two Different People (pt 8 - pg 22) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: suhasi.karan.1

cant wait to read more!!! pls continue!! its so nice lol


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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

Great job Jyoti, it really brought me back to how YMGGK was during the initial days and really looking forward to the next part😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Thank you so much for your comments and like friends . Here is part 3 . Hope you like it !!

Part 3

Karan and abha hugs each other. Karan was just lost in abha 's eyes and from behind Sania turns the music on loud in the background which brought abha and Karan back to reality.

Karan in mind " dude what was I thinking "

Abha shook him to bring him back again " what happen ? "

Karan blankly " what?? Let's dance"

Karan extends his hand and Abha joins him. And then everyone joined in too. They all had fun the whole day. Everyone left but Karan and Abha stayed with Sania. It was 7 in the morning when Abha's phone rang and woke everyone one. Karan still in sleep not wanting to wake up said " aww already morning "

Sania " yeah get up Karan. I have to leave for college don't you ?

Karan still in bed " I don't want to"

Abha comes out of shower right then Sania ran into shower. Abha looked at Karan and says " Karan get up we will be late "

Karan quickly gets up and sat down on bed and says " do we have to go to college today "

Abha " what "

Karan " I meant can we not go to college today "

Abha " well idea toh aacha hai Karan I don't mind, but sania is really serious about college"

Karan " that's fine na we both can go out and sania can go to college and then we will pick her up after college "

Abha " ok that will fine with me and I can show you my flat that I live in too "

Karan " cool that will be awesome "

After both Abha and Karan decide to go out , Sania leave for college and Abha and Karan were about to leave Sania's house when Sania's home phone rang. Abha went to pick up the phone and said " hello "

Person " hello abha tum"

Abha " Parkash baiya "

Parkash " maaf kardo Abha hum tumhe kal birthday wish nahi kar paai "

Abha " Koi baat nahi baiya par tumhe kashe patha chala ki main sania ke flats main hoon "

Parkash " Lata di na "

Abha " oh aacha sab kashe hain "

Parkash " sab theek hain Abha bus hum toh tumhe birthday wish karne ke liya kiya tha phone or ha woh tum kab India baphass ah rahi ho "

Abha " Lata di ko batya toh tha ki exams ke bhaat "

Parkash " oh theek hai. Tum college nahi gayi ajj"

Abha " woh .. baaaiiyyaa ajj main ek friend ke saath hoon "

Parkash " tumhe college nahi skip karna chaiye "

Abha " plz baiya kisko maat bataiya (tell) ga

Parkash " ok theek hain. Hum rakte hain phone jaldi hi India baphass ahh na "

Abha cuts the phone and was thinking " why is everyone telling her to come back to India fast "

Abha thought interrupted by karan " lets go."

Abha and Karan went to abha's flat and karan was to everything so net but it came to abha's room it was mess shoes everywhere and that made stunned " Oye tari tumara room toh bikul mera room jasa hain "

Abha " haan woh actually cleaning karna acha nahi lagtha "

As Abha was walking around and and Karan following her Abha trip over her own pair of shoes and was about fall but strong arms came around her waist as a protecter. Abha closes her but as comes to know she didn't fall but someone holding her. Abha opens her and right then Karan was abha had and eye lock. Both were somewhere in their own world forgot where they were. Slowly Karan brought back up Abha but still lost in each other.

Karan still out of reality " you are so beautiful "


Hope you like it friends !
Do leave your comments and likes !

Link To Part 4 - https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1915473&PID=52786911&#52786911

Edited by Abhakaran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
nice update..karan and Abha together..cute moments..good job..pls continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rechus

nice update..karan and Abha together..cute moments..good job..pls continue soon..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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toh room messy hona chahiye...kyun ?? 😆 btw, nice story line...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Great Update Jyoti, really looking forward to the next part and i could actually imagine the scenes 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
thank you! pls write more lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarcha

toh room messy hona chahiye...kyun ?? 😆 btw, nice story line...👍🏼

yes cause abha is like karan but will change later

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