
Title: The Love Hypothesis
Author: Ali Hazelwood
Year Published: 2021
Genre: Contemporary M/F Romance
Trope/s: Fake dating, Professor-student, Forced proximity
Triggers: Warning for molestation
Maturity rating: Adult
Book rating: 3.5/ 5
Synopsis: Olive Smith is a 3rd year Ph.D student at Stanford, researching pancreatic cancer. She's all alone in the world, having emancipated at 16 and made it all by herself. Now, her BFFs Anh and Malcolm are everything to her. So when she has to make Anh believe she's over her ex, Jeremy, so Anh can begin dating him, she has no choice but to provide empirical evidence to a fellow scientist. And what better way to do that than by kissing a random dude? Except random dude is Dr. Adam Carlsen, the hotshot brilliant Assistant Prof in computational biology, but also a hardass and Most likely to be voted most hated adviser by the rest of the PhD students. Olive thinks he's antagonistic and unapproachable and so it comes as a surprise when Adam agrees to keep up the pretense, for self-serving reasons. They begin their fake dating which is having coffee at Starbucks every Wednesday at 10 am for 10 minutes. Because Olive thinks that is the maximum dose she can take of him. But convincing Anh and Adam's funders is gonna take more than that. So they keep going until things come to a head when they are forced to share a hotel room at a bigshot Scientific conference. But things happen at the conference that leads to Olive's dreams of completing her research hanging by a thread more precarious than the explosive reagents in her lab. And her actions can make or break Adam's future plans too. Add to that the complicated feelings she's having for him and you have a radioactive atom headed for fission.
Review: Ok, so when I was about a third of the book through, I was squeeing so much I thought I'd love it. In the end, I didn't hate it but it left me feeling somewhat deflated. Dissatisfied. I'm not sure even now if I can get into the specifics of why, but let me try.
Pros: Women and men in STEM, especially women in STEM or STEMinists as the author refers to them. Absolutely the number one Pro. There is not enough representation and this was soo welcome!
It reminded me so much of the time back when I was a student in academia and all the crap associated with it. Locking up your glassware and stealing pipettes, beakers and conical flasks from your neighbour. Praying your lab partner doesn't break more of them, and just praying you'll be left with enough at the end of the year so you don't have to beg your parents for fine money cos you've been careless. Sweetening the condescending lab assistants so they'd sneak in lab equipment for you. Sucking up to the absolutely abhorrent TAs and taking their derisive smirks in stride hoping they'd help you identify your compound during finals. Praying you don't go colour blind so you can identify the difference between bright red, deep red, cerise and crimson. Shaking in your boots when you have to defend your thesis and present your seminar in a scientific session, the absolute, crippling fear of being thrown a question you cannot answer.
This book brought back all those memories - some cherished but mostly painful yet altogether relatable. Academia is the worst & this book reminds you of why. It also reminds you of why it can be the best. Anyways, the point I'm making is you don't see enough books written where the MCs are geeky scientists and that is so wrong. Scientists are people too and they absolutely deserve HEAs!
I love how each chapter begins with a Hypothesis that is proved either right or wrong in the chapter. So innovative!
I love the science puns, references to crucial lab equipment breaking down just when you need them so you're stuck at a major point in your research & mostly the pain of not having enough funding. A lot of this book hinges on Olive pursuing her pancreatic cancer research and the advanced equipment she needs which her current lab and adviser cannot provide her, and her quest for someone who can which again leads to a major plot point and the eventual climactic moment in the story.
Another pro would be the demisexual representation. Again, you don't see a lot of ACE representation in books and media so this should have been welcome and it was. However, the author ended up stereotyping this a bit and it wasn't explored as much as I'd have liked.
Olive is an admirable FMC, she lost her mom to pancreatic cancer and hence the personal stake in her research. She is a fighter and has fought her way into Stanford and you get a sense of the struggles she faces as an impoverished student. She loves her friends and will do anything for them and later, when she falls for Adam, she will also do anything for him including sacrifice her own sense of well-being. While this may seem like a pro, it actually became a con for me as I'll come to later.
Adam is intelligent and tall (very, very tall as you'll know from the number of times this comes up!) and built and handsome. He's also a nice person but this is only evident from his interactions with Olive. To the rest of his grad students, he's an ogre which actually ends up giving Olive a hard time because she has to deal with the fallout as his (fake) girlfriend. The scene where he stands up for her is adorable. I love how considerate he is of her during their intimacy, asking for permission and never losing sight of consent. I love the way he teases her about her sexually harassing him 😆! And I love how in the end it's revealed how much he cares - and has cared for her unbeknownst to her.
The language is funny and quirky and Olive is the one responsible. Adam spends all the book playing straight guy to Olive's comedienne act. l love their banter, I love how he refers to her as 'smart-ass', I love their Starbucks dates and Adam teasing her about her sugary drinks and Olive teasing him about his health food kink.
Oh and did I mention my favorite (or one of my favorite) tropes - fake dating? I love it. And also forced proximity that ends up with them sharing a hotel room. The absolute best romcom tropes (fight me on this!). This book scores on that for sure.
But but...
Now we come to the cons that are many.
Cons: I thought about this a lot and there were several things that struck me as cons in the book but I can summarize them all with a single problem point. This book is written entirely from Olive's PoV. We don't hear from Adam at all. So whatever you know of Adam ends up being what Olive's impressions of him are. Plus the little tidbits that he reveals in conversations or his friends reveal about him. Thought initially this was captivating and mysterious, but later I found it annoying because I wanted to know what Adam thought about Olive. I realized I did not know Adam at all - except that he was moody and sullen and an ass to his students.
Based on this, one would think Olive would be well-threshed out but no! This book just ends up being a series of events thrown together where Anh forces them into embarrassing PDA situations (*eyeroll*), and Olive floats blissfully from one to another completely unaware. In fact, her self-awareness is so low that she needs Anh to tell her she has fallen for Adam.
Also, they don't communicate. I would expect scientists to follow method and logic above all else, but both MCs seem to lack this. Why they don't tell each other how they feel is a complete mystery to me. It just felt like an illogical plot point meant to serve up the HEA at the end. And add in angst where it wasn't needed.
And because you don't hear from Adam at all, you don't get what it is about Olive that made him fall for her. You only know Olive inasmuch as her narrative tells us. I couldn't even imagine her in my head because of how non-descript she is.
The sex scene: We have one sex scene in the whole book and man... nope, nope, nope. I think she may have put this in a cluster in one chapter so people who do not enjoy these sort of scenes could skip over them. I see a lot of readers on GR complain about excessive R rated scenes and perhaps she wanted to accommodate them. In fact this almost read like a YA novel if it wasn't for that one scene. I don't mind lack of quantity if there's quality but this one? It was so meh. I cannot pinpoint what it was about it that I did not enjoy but Hazelwood cannot write these scenes. Even the kissing scenes fell flat for me. I couldn't feel the chemistry between Adam and Olive. There are lots of cute scenes but the attraction and the heat is missing. The butterflies in the stomach feeling was absent. Yeah, I know this is very subjective so it's entirely my opinion. Others may feel differently. I just think some authors are able to bring this out beautifully and others just cannot.
The conflict and the resolution: Again, there was good build-up to the conflict but the way it was sorted felt all too easy and convenient and you got it right, deflating.
The gay best-friend angle was also a convenient and lazy trope imo. Both MCs have one each and very conveniently, hook-up! Although they are cute. 😳
The professor-student dynamic is also somewhat problematic, though Hazelwood brushes it off as immaterial because Adam is not Olive's direct adviser or involved in her study in any way. Even if it brings in a power imbalance in their relationship - but I shouldn't complain about this because a power imbalance exists in almost all romances - in terms of either age, experience or status.
So bottomline - Hazelwood sets up the romance beautifully, brings in some delicious tropes and banter, and a promising plot but fails to deliver that satisfaction that is so important in Romances. That blissful feeling in the end that these two have their HEA and all's right with the world, the birds are singing, the crops are thriving, world peace is here to stay and all the acne in the world have been banished from the face of the earth? That feeling was missing for me.
Still, Science and Romance is a combination you rarely see so I gave this the rating I did. But from the blurbs of her other works it seems like this formula is a rinse and repeat one with Hazelwood. So idk if I'll read her other books.
Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago