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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing start👏

Very much excited and looking forward to this story😃

Continue soonish!!

--Aishu--

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

fantastic update
interesting
continue soon..
thanks for the pm..

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

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Fairy...

@Fairy...

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Awsome starting

Very well depicted the childish behaviour

and its innocent questions

Loved it

Continue soon

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Amazing start

Can't wait to read more 😃

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Shanae

@..Shanae..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

i like it! especially the way it's set out.

But definitely need a lot more context on prajna. which you might've saved for the next part but for me, i like to imagine the character, put an age and face to it so i couldn't connect with her and her feelings. So for instance, a younger girl would be more upset and the wounds from the loss of her grand mother still fresh, if she's older then it's just vague memories and lessened pain. so i'd connect and feel for the character according to that.. hope that makes sense.. probably not haha

looking forward to reading more from your lazy highness ❤️

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@-Elysian-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ..Shanae..
i like it! especially the way it's set out.
But definitely need a lot more context on prajna. which you might've saved for the next part but for me, i like to imagine the character, put an age and face to it so i couldn't connect with her and her feelings. So for instance, a younger girl would be more upset and the wounds from the loss of her grand mother still fresh, if she's older then it's just vague memories and lessened pain. so i'd connect and feel for the character according to that.. hope that makes sense.. probably not haha

looking forward to reading more from your lazy highness ❤️

Its saved for the next one <3

i love the suggestion ! this is the first draft so im writing as it goes.

next chapter everything will be more clear.

thank you babes <3