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The Boy and The Boat

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I laid my head on her lap, staring deep into the stars above. Shiny and vivid, almost magical. "Tell me that story again Dadi," I nagged my grandmother.

"The one with The Boy and The Boat?" I nodded. She took her hand, gently ruffling my hair. "There was once a river called Nivaran. At its dock was an abandoned boat. They say, the boat only sailed on the will of the guardians of the river."

"MERMAIDS!" I cut her in between with my excitement. I knew this tale inside and out yet, I nagged her every night for a retelling.

She chuckled. "Yes, the mermaids. They guarded the river and the boat. It was their desire which enable the boat to move. So one day, an orphan boy spotted the empty boat. Curiosity got the best of him as he decided to sail to the other side of the river."

"But only the mermaids can move the boat," I frowned.

"You're right, only the mermaids were capable of moving this boat. But what can the poor boy do? He didn't know. So, he tried everything. Pushing the boat with all of his strength and even kicking it once in a while. But luck seemed to look away thus, nothing worked. He was on the edge of giving up."

"Did he give up?" I was well aware of the answer nonetheless asked away.

"Not entirely," she smiled. "It was getting dark and not a single house was nearby. The boy decided to stay the night on the boat. He threw his ragged bag on the boat and made himself comfortable. He looked up at the sky full of stars, wishing to touch them with his bare hand. Shutting his eyes, subtle movements of the wind danced around him. Taking a peek through one of his eyes, the boy was baffled. The boat was sailing!"

I jolted up from the floor, folding my legs and looking at her with nothing but eagerness. My favorite part was coming up.

"He could not for the life of him make up as to how the boat was sailing so smoothly. Better yet, where it was heading! He tried to look for a paddle to row the boat to a shore but there was none. The boy began panicking until it stopped moving. It was in middle of nowhere, surrounded by nothing but water and fireflies. Once again, he looked around with disappointment. "Lost?" a sudden voice pitched out. Startled, the boy almost fell off the boat."

"Woah..." my jaws must have been hanging since Dadi chuckled loudly. "What happened next?!"

"Prajna, wake up" said Dadi.

"But I am awake," I replied. Dadi's hand found its way to my shoulders and began shaking me. I rocked back and forth whilst she kept muttering something. Trying to make sense of her slightly faded face, I tried to argue but I seemed to have lost my voice. I screamed at the top of my lungs so my voice could be heard.

"PRAJNA SHUT UP!" My eyes immediately flew open.

"You're not Dadi," I murmured. There sat a woman beside me, in her mid-forties, hair so curly and eyelashes long enough for one to fly away.

"That's because I am your mother," she sighed heavily.

My eyes widened at the sudden realization. I had forgotten my own mother!

With a sly smile I wrap my hands around her, putting my head on one of her shoulder. "Good morning, mother."

"Dreams of Dadi again?" I nodded.

Recently, I have been thinking about my childhood. The times I have spent here in India with my grandmother. The fairytales she would recite every night to my childish demands. Couldn't help but smile at the thought of those good old days where everything was simple.

"The car's waiting Meena," my dad walked towards us. We stood up taking our luggage and headed out of the airport with my dad.

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Author's Note:

This is going to be different. If you trust my writing skills, give this a go and I promise you this will take you on a journey you will never forget. I guarantee you. Trust my words. Like I said before, this is 21st century girl meets magical realm. Just wait till she gets there, it will leave you in awe and wow. This chapter is important as it's the beginning. Don't neglect it.

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-Sanaya

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I N D E X

Prologue - Post Above

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res! I will read the whole thing properly when I'm done my exams and stuff.
Okay, so FINALLY, unres.

I like it so far, it's a little short, but we already got some important stuff. Prajna was clearly close to her dadi and she loved hearing the stories. Now, is dadi dead, cuz' I kinda' got the feeling that she is?

Anyways, I'm really excited to see how this story plays out, I really liked the story about 'The Boy and the Boat.' It would be really cool if each chapter, or every few chapters, the title could be one of dadi's stories, and there could be a flashback. Just a thought.
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res/unres

first of all let's appreciate the fact that I unresed within 24 hrs of resing
second the child version of the main character is hella annoying
but that was beautifully written
waiting for the next update, assuming that you will update
love, ashu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very enjoyable read!
This girl almost reminds me of myself when I was a kid.

And the story of The Boy in the Boat was remarkable! I love the way it was narrated with Prajna constantly asking questions lol

Can't wait for more :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Meryl-

A very enjoyable read!

This girl almost reminds me of myself when I was a kid.

And the story of The Boy in the Boat was remarkable! I love the way it was narrated with Prajna constantly asking questions lol

Can't wait for more :)


Haha, yeah she's just a child. I wanted to depict the childish manner we tend to have when stories used to be told. I used to act like this when I was a kid too lol

Thank you so much for liking it <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Thanks for the pm dear
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Nice start
So he was dreaming of his dadi
N her past stories
I can't wait to see what happened in the story to the boy in the boat
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Nice to see you with New Story.😊
It was Amazing Story line.😊
The Girl Part was so cute.😊
The Boy in the Boat Part was so Interesting.😊
The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Pranja is dreaming of her grand-mother who used to tell her fairy tales...😎...now where is she going with her parents...😕...waiting to see what happens next......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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