Mehbeer ff: The Revenge For Love chp 1 and 2

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<font size="5">This is a Mehbeer Story...I have written revenge story first time, hope u like it.

A girl Shalini gets dumped by her husband Abeer who she trusted the most, he leaves her on the road, it was raining heavily. She meets with an accident and gets a new face and a new name Meher but Abeer is unaware of this. She decides to take Revenge from Abeer on giving her such a big punishment for nothing.</font>

A girl is shown running after a boy on the wet road with umbrella . It was raining heavily and it was almost midnight. She finally reaches the boy and holds his arm stopping him from going.
Girl: u can't go Abeer, we are married to each other, I never did so on ur any mistake then how can u just kick me out of your house ?

He frees his arm with a jerk that she falls down on the road.
Abeer: sorry I didn't do it deliberately Shalini
He helps her stand and she hugs him tightly.
Shalini: please don't leave me...I love u, I have always loved u...don't do this please.
Abeer: I also love u, but we are not meant to be together Shalini.
Shalini: but why?
She said still hugging him and crying.



(Shalini Sahuta as Shalini)
Abeer: because God wants this Shalini.
He breaks the hug and walks away. She watches him. Judaai plays in the background.
A car comes towards Shalini in fast speed, she doesn't notices this and watches him walking away. The car hits her and she falls, her face gets smashed by the big stone. Abeer turns hearing her scream and runs towards her. He sits by her side and turns her placing her head in his lap.
Abeer: Shalini!
Her face was full of blood, she was conscious.
Abeer: Wait I will take u to hospital.
Shalini: no! I don't want ur help! I will die rather than living such life, no need to save me, jis trha pehle chhor k jarahay thay, chale jatey na, kiun murr k dekha mujhe? I want to die.
Abeer: stop being crazy...chalo.
He picks her up in his arms while she struggles to get out of his grip.
Shalini: chhoro leave me...I don't want to live.BR]Abeer: shhh
Shalini: leave!
She finally gets successful in getting out of his arms. She starts running with wounded face and falls. Abeer holds her.
Shalini: leave me plz.
Abeer: no
She stands up and sees a cliff near them and stands at the edge of it.
Shalini: if u touch me again I will jump from here.
Abeer: what's this Shalini?
Shalini: this is ur punishment, ab jab door jarahi hoon to tumhara pyar jawan hogaya? (she starts clapping) wow Abeer, isi trha I was begging u to not to go, ab tum bhi wohi dard bardasht kro.
She moves towards the cliff.
Abeer: Shalini rukjao
Shalini continues moving forward. He slowly moves towards her to stop her. She falls from the cliff, he holds her hand.
Shalini: leave!
Abeer: no I won't!
He tries to pull her up, she tries to free her hand. He pulls her up by difficulty and hugs her. She pushes him away.
Shalini: move away from me.
Abeer picks her up forcefully and takes her to nearest hospital. He asks the nurses to bring a stretcher quickly. They bring and Abeer lays her down on it. She is taken to OT. Inside the operation theatre, Shalini requests the doctors not to save her.
Doctor: beta aap ko bachana hai isliye apka husband apko yahan laye hain.
Shalini: Doctor, claim me dead, keep someone else in my place and let me escape.
Doctor: beti tumhe medical help k ilawa bhi koi help chahye krdunga lekin pehle medical help phir personal help.
She is given anaesthesia, she sleeps in its affect.
Nurse to doctor: do u think she'll be saved? iska chehra to ekdum bigar gaya hai.
Doctor: that is my responsibility.

The operation starts. After the operation is finished, Shalini comes in her senses after 15 minutes, her face was bandaged. The doctor comes and removes her bandage giving her a small mirror. She sees her changed face.
Doctor: I have told ur husband that Shalini is dead, I did as u said.

Shalini says in heart: from today I m Meher n not Shalini, Abeer, u will pay for what u did.



(Asmita sood as Shalini after plastic surgery)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
A very different theme.it seems that abeer loves shalini.otherwise why should he take her to hospital when she met with an accident? But then why did he leave her?doctors too lied to abeer that shalini is dead as per her request. Oh..now after plastic surgery she has a new face n with the name meher she is going to take revenge on abeer.interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Amazing FF.😊
The Story line is so Different and Interesting.😊
The Whole Conversation were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shalini says in heart: From today, I m Meher n not Shalini...Shalini is dead.




Flashback:
Doctors secretly injected Shalini with an injection which stopped her heartbeat temporarily leaving her face injured. Then they told Abeer that Shalini is no more. Abeer comes to OT. He cries vigorously seeing Shalini.



Abeer: I m sorry Shalini, u died because of me, kaash k main tumhe samajh pata or ghar se bahar na nikalta, to aaj tum yahan nh hoti.

He continues crying and runs out of the OT going out of hospital and runs on road. He stops seeing a temple and goes in angrily.
Abeer: why? why did u took her from me? Among so many people why her? why not someone else? how will I face everyone? how will I tell everyone about her death? I will have to tell them.

He goes to Shalini's mother's house and rings the doorbell cryingly. Suman opens the door.
Suman: u here? u came alone? did Shalini not come with u? why r u crying? is my daughter OK?
Abeer cries.
Abeer: she won't ever come now, she's dead.
Suman: no, don't lie, she's alive.
Abeer: she's dead mummy ji and it all happened because of me.
He tells them everything.
Suman slaps him.
Suman: what was her fault? why did u kick her out of your house? did u hate her too much that u killed her?
Abeer: it was an accidental death
Suman: to jao, I want her back, I want my daughter back, can u do this? no right? don't show ur face to us ever! which hospital is she in?



Abeer: city hospital
She goes along with others. Till they reached, Shalini was treated and given a new face, she was shifted to another ward, her body was replaced with someone else. It was finally the time to burn the body and then immerse the ashes. Everyone were crying a lot. Abeer told his family as well, some were happy on her death while some were sad. Everyone believed Shalini is dead.
Fb end.

Shalini/Meher: thank u doctor for listening to me and understanding my pain.

Doctor: u r like my daughter, don't worry, no one will know ur secret.

Shalini/Meher: can u make my discharge papers?

Doctor: yes, till then u rest.

Meher changes her sim card and does hotel bookings. The doctor signs on the form as her father and does all formalities , finally she is discharged.
Doctor: If u ever need any help, I will be there.
Meher: thanks it means a lot.

She goes out of the ward and sees Abeer standing there. She is shocked.
Meher says in heart: what is he doing here? oh c'mon Meher, he believes u r dead, u have a new face, he won't know u r actually Shalini.



Abeer was continuously looking at the room where Shalini was when she was injured. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Meher looks at him angrily and gets teary eyed. She goes from there hurriedly. She takes an auto and leaves from there. She asks the auto driver to stop and gets down the auto. She pays him and he leaves. She goes in the hotel and does entry in the register. She asks the receptionist for room 203. Luckily the room was available, she goes after getting the keys. As she reaches the door of the room, she recalls her and Abeer booking the same room once. She goes in unlocking the door. She looks around the room. She sees all the old moments.

Shalini and Abeer were laying down together on the bed with her head on his chest.
Abeer: When I m close to u I feel so good.
Shalini: me also, now living without u even for a moment is impossible.

He kisses her hair and promises to stay with her always. She smiles. Meher cries.
Meher: u broke ur promise Abeer. Because of u I have to stay away from my family and act of being dead. Don't know what they might be feeling. I m sorry Maa, Bua Tunnu. Really sorry.
She lays on the bed and cries. She sees Abeer laying on the other end of bed.
Abeer: u were always my life n will always be, I won't forget u.
Meher looks at him.
Abeer: hmmm, I won't break the promise again, sleep, u must be tired.
She adjusts herself in his lap, her imagination breaks when her head touches the pillow. She cries and hugs the pillow, she didn't knew when she fell asleep.
Abeer comes to his room and cries seeing Shalini's pics. Laakh dunia kahe tum nahi ho tum yahin ho...plays. He caresses her photo. He recalls the last time he saw her, how she jumped off the cliff and how he saved her, her accident, he recalls his last day with her.

Flashback:
Abeer holds her arm tightly and takes her.
Shalini: Abeer leave na I don't want to go...I won't be able to live without u...chhoro, mujhe nh Jana.

Till then he takes her till the exit and pushes her out of the house.
Shalini: see its raining, how will I spend night here.

Abeer gives her umbrella.
Abeer: take it, don't come in my house.

Fb end.

(After that u know what happened)

Abeer: m responsible for ur death.

He cries.

Meher gets a dream of her last day with Abeer and wakes up with a jerk. She picks her phone and looks at Abeer and her photos. She deletes them cryingly and looks at everyone's numbers in her phone.


Meher: kaash main aap sab k saamne aasakti or bta sakti I m alive...(she cries and then gets an idea) I will tell them the truth, I can't make them suffer because of Abeer.

She goes from the hotel room.

Will Meher be able to tell everyone? Or will she end up falling weak? Will anyone believe her? How will Meher take revenge from Abeer? To be continued.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Abeer is guilty thinking that shalini is dead.suman too is sad.fb is nice.but it's hard to imagine someone else with abeer.wish shalini was ashmita.I feel meher won't be able to tell the truth so soon.waiting for mehbeer meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all, I give you a warm welcome to IF.🤗 Congratulations for your first story in IF and your new story overall. This FF is little different with Shalini-Abeer love story. Abeer told Shalini he loves her but destiny does not want them to be together. Guess, something has happened between them as why Abeer threw her ot of the house. Shalini had an operation. The doctor is helpful saying that she is dead but her face is changed. Waiting 4 the next update.
Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Interesting Part.😊
Shalini Part was so Interesting.😊
Meheer and Abeer Conversation was so Nice.😊
The Flashback of Abeer and Shalini was so Interesting.😊
Abeer felt sad and Guilty thinking that Shalini is Dead,it was so sad.
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Meher goes from the hotel room locking it. She goes outside the hotel and takes an auto, she leaves from there. She tells the directions to the auto driver and she reaches. She pays the auto driver and goes to her building. She goes inside the lift and presses the floor number 28. Tunnu is also there in the lift, she doesn't sees him. Suddenly the lift stops in between. They panic and bangs the door of the lift. Tunnu's hand touches her hand. He turns to see who is it as the touch was familiar.
Tunnu: I have met u somewhere.
Meher looks at him.
Meher: yes u have met me, I m Shalini, ur sister.
Tunnu is shocked.
Tunnu: my sister is dead.
Meher: no Tunnu, she's alive n in front of u.
Tunnu: how can it be?
Meher tells him everything.
Meher: do u believe me?
Tunnu: a little.
Meher: I came here to meet u all as I can't make u all suffer because of Abeer.
Tunnu: I m happy u r alive.

He hugs her, she too hugs him.
Tunnu: but jeeju saw u dead .
Meher: it was me only, doctor gave me injection of stopping my heartbeat temporarily, and made my face fake injured coz that time my face was changed.
Tunnu: oh, but why is the lift stopped? do something...m suffocating.
The lift starts working after sometime.
Tunnu: thank God. Soon u will meet everyone else too.
Meher: will they believe me?
Tunnu: of course they will.

They reach 28th floor and opens the door of the lift coming out. They go to their flat, Tunnu unlocks the door and they go in. Meher sees Suman looking at her pic sadly.
Tunnu: Maa Bua aap dono k liye ek good news hai
Suman: kya good news? yeh kon hai?
Tunnu: yeh Shalini di hain... that death was a drama, accident happened but she didn't die.
Suman: she might be joking.
Meher: no Maa, m Shalini only...believe me
She says hugging her tightly. Suman breaks the hug.
Suman: I remember her all cold n lifeless in front of me, how can u act of being my daughter? go and don't give us a false hope.
Meher holds her hand.
Meher: recognize me, m Shalini only, just my face is changed.
Suman jerks her hand away.
Suman: u r someone else who wants to live here as Shalini.
Tunnu: nh Maa yeh didi he hain...don't u feel her touch is same like didi?
Suman: tell her to go from here
Meher: Maa m Shalini m not lying, if u want I will make u see the footage of the hospital
Tunnu: chalo na Maa
Suman agrees and they go to hospital. They reach and asks the doctor of the footage of her. The doctor shows the footage and finally Suman accepts that she's Shalini and hugs her.
Suman: what was the reason of this death drama?
She asks while going out of hospital.
Meher: I want revenge from Abeer for what he did, first he made me fall in love with him, then he made u all agree to make me marry him, he promised to support me every time and love me unconditionally but on the time of support he kicked me out of his house. I was never into boys in college, I just wanted to study and not make friends or boyfriend, but then..

Flashback:
On the first day of college:
Shalini comes to college in auto and goes in college paying the auto driver, as she goes in she slips by the watery floor closing her eyes in fear and falls in someone's arms. She opens her eyes and sees a pair of chocolate brown eyes looking at her concerned. As she looks in those eyes, she sees her own paradise in them. Its Abeer who saves her from falling.
Abeer: do u want to stay in my arms only? Should I pick u up and drop u to the place u want to go?
He asks jokingly as she was still in his arms. Without waiting for her reply he picks her up in his arms while she keeps moving her legs to get out of his arms and asking him to keep her down.
Abeer: where u want to go?
Shalini: leave me plz, everyone r staring at us, I will go to my class by myself.
Abeer: if m not wrong u study in 1st year of college right?
Shalini: y-y-yes but I will go myself, m not hurt, leave me
Abeer: u look like a princess so m treating u like one.
Shalini: thank u for saving me from falling now leave me Mister.
Abeer: Abeer Malhotra, and u r?
He asks taking her to the class.
Shalini: if u r done with being a gentleman then leave me whatever my name is.
He takes her till class and makes her stand on the floor.
Abeer: here u r, well see u around, m in the same class as yours, go in soon else sir will scold u.
He goes winking at her. She feels weird and goes inside the class. She sits on the first seat. Abeer roams around in the class and almost all girls were drooling over him, only Shalini was the one who wasn't even looking at him. He goes and sits beside her.
Abeer: Hi miss, why are u so quiet?
Shalini: because I have come here to study not to talk with people.
Abeer: ajeeb ho, all girls drool over me and they badly want me to talk to them but u r the first girl m talking to after Sasha.
Shalini: oh, great
The teacher comes and starts teaching, Shalini notes down the lecture while Abeer stares at her.
Teacher: Abeer why r u looking at her face? Note down the lecture.
Abeer: I find her interesting than ur lecture.
Everyone laughs while Shalini looks here and there getting embarrassed.
Teacher: behave urself Abeer, n Shalini u concentrate on lecture, it's his habit to joke.
Abeer whispers to her: finally I got to know ur name Shalini
She glares at him. The class ends, she goes out of class, he comes and holds her hand.
Shalini: leave my hand
Abeer: first tell me something, mujhse dosti krogi?
He bends down on his knees holding her hand as if proposing her, she looks on.

Chp 3 and 4
Chp 5 (in reply)
Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally when her family believed that she is shalini.that was unexpected. Good that you didn't drag it.first meeting of abeer Shalini..abeer staring at shalini and telling that she is more interesting than the lecture n abeer seeking her friendship are so nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its so beautiful love it
your first ff n so well written cont

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