Mehbeer ff: The Revenge For Love chp 3 till 30 (Completed)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4774845&PID=139347892& chapter 1 n 2
Meher goes from the hotel room locking it. She goes outside the hotel and takes an auto, she leaves from there. She tells the directions to the auto driver and she reaches. She pays the auto driver and goes to her building. She goes inside the lift and presses the floor number 28. Tunnu is also there in the lift, she doesn't sees him. Suddenly the lift stops in between. They panic and bangs the door of the lift. Tunnu's hand touches her hand. He turns to see who is it as the touch was familiar.
Tunnu: I have met u somewhere.
Meher looks at him.
Meher: yes u have met me, I m Shalini, ur sister.
Tunnu is shocked.
Tunnu: my sister is dead.
Meher: no Tunnu, she's alive n in front of u.
Tunnu: how can it be?
Meher tells him everything.
Meher: do u believe me?
Tunnu: a little.
Meher: I came here to meet u all as I can't make u all suffer because of Abeer.
Tunnu: I m happy u r alive.

He hugs her, she too hugs him.
Tunnu: but jeeju saw u dead .
Meher: it was me only, doctor gave me injection of stopping my heartbeat temporarily, and made my face fake injured coz that time my face was changed.
Tunnu: oh, but why is the lift stopped? do something...m suffocating.
The lift starts working after sometime.
Tunnu: thank God. Soon u will meet everyone else too.
Meher: will they believe me?
Tunnu: of course they will.

They reach 28th floor and opens the door of the lift coming out. They go to their flat, Tunnu unlocks the door and they go in. Meher sees Suman looking at her pic sadly.
Tunnu: Maa Bua aap dono k liye ek good news hai
Suman: kya good news? yeh kon hai?
Tunnu: yeh Shalini di hain... that death was a drama, accident happened but she didn't die.
Suman: she might be joking.
Meher: no Maa, m Shalini only...believe me
She says hugging her tightly. Suman breaks the hug.
Suman: I remember her all cold n lifeless in front of me, how can u act of being my daughter? go and don't give us a false hope.
Meher holds her hand.
Meher: recognize me, m Shalini only, just my face is changed.
Suman jerks her hand away.
Suman: u r someone else who wants to live here as Shalini.
Tunnu: nh Maa yeh didi he hain...don't u feel her touch is same like didi?
Suman: tell her to go from here
Meher: Maa m Shalini m not lying, if u want I will make u see the footage of the hospital
Tunnu: chalo na Maa
Suman agrees and they go to hospital. They reach and asks the doctor of the footage of her. The doctor shows the footage and finally Suman accepts that she's Shalini and hugs her.
Suman: what was the reason of this death drama?
She asks while going out of hospital.
Meher: I want revenge from Abeer for what he did, first he made me fall in love with him, then he made u all agree to make me marry him, he promised to support me every time and love me unconditionally but on the time of support he kicked me out of his house. I was never into boys in college, I just wanted to study and not make friends or boyfriend, but then..

Flashback:
On the first day of college:
Shalini comes to college in auto and goes in college paying the auto driver, as she goes in she slips by the watery floor closing her eyes in fear and falls in someone's arms. She opens her eyes and sees a pair of chocolate brown eyes looking at her concerned. As she looks in those eyes, she sees her own paradise in them. Its Abeer who saves her from falling.
Abeer: do u want to stay in my arms only? Should I pick u up and drop u to the place u want to go?
He asks jokingly as she was still in his arms. Without waiting for her reply he picks her up in his arms while she keeps moving her legs to get out of his arms and asking him to keep her down.
Abeer: where u want to go?
Shalini: leave me plz, everyone r staring at us, I will go to my class by myself.
Abeer: if m not wrong u study in 1st year of college right?
Shalini: y-y-yes but I will go myself, m not hurt, leave me
Abeer: u look like a princess so m treating u like one.
Shalini: thank u for saving me from falling now leave me Mister.
Abeer: Abeer Malhotra, and u r?
He asks taking her to the class.
Shalini: if u r done with being a gentleman then leave me whatever my name is.
He takes her till class and makes her stand on the floor.
Abeer: here u r, well see u around, m in the same class as yours, go in soon else sir will scold u.
He goes winking at her. She feels weird and goes inside the class. She sits on the first seat. Abeer roams around in the class and almost all girls were drooling over him, only Shalini was the one who wasn't even looking at him. He goes and sits beside her.
Abeer: Hi miss, why are u so quiet?
Shalini: because I have come here to study not to talk with people.
Abeer: ajeeb ho, all girls drool over me and they badly want me to talk to them but u r the first girl m talking to after Sasha.
Shalini: oh, great
The teacher comes and starts teaching, Shalini notes down the lecture while Abeer stares at her.
Teacher: Abeer why r u looking at her face? Note down the lecture.
Abeer: I find her interesting than ur lecture.
Everyone laughs while Shalini looks here and there getting embarrassed.
Teacher: behave urself Abeer, n Shalini u concentrate on lecture, it's his habit to joke.
Abeer whispers to her: finally I got to know ur name Shalini
She glares at him. The class ends, she goes out of class, he comes and holds her hand.
Shalini: leave my hand
Abeer: first tell me something, mujhse dosti krogi?
He bends down on his knees holding her hand as if proposing her, she looks on.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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shocking update. Nice that Tunnu recognized Shalini. Suman accepted Shalini with the new face. Shalini-Abeer flashback was sensational. Abeer told the lecturer tat he is interested in her face than the lecture was hilarious.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Flashback continues:
Abeer: Mujhse dosti krogi?
He bends down on his knees holding her hand as if proposing her. She looks on. He looks in her eyes questioningly.
Shalini: I will think about it.
She goes.
Abeer: Akdoo, I will make her say yes by hook or by crook.
Someone taps on his shoulder. Its Nisaar.
Nisaar: what's up bro? kisko han bulwane ki tayyari kr raha hai?
He asks teasingly.
Abeer: yeh Jo nayi lrki ayi hai na Shalini, isko.
Nisaar: she's too quiet.
Abeer: Bolegi, vo han bolegi, Maine dosti ka hath agay barhaya hai, relationship ka nh, is me kya hai?
Nisaar: Point to be noted, waise kal fresher's party hai, yeh mauka hai bro
Abeer: PR vo nh ayi to?
Nisaar: Sasha se help mangte hain, chal.
They go to Sasha. Her back was turned towards them, Abeer winks at Nisaar and goes towards Sasha, he shuts her eyes by keeping his hand.
Sasha: arey kon hai chhoro na yr
She touches the hand on her eyes.
Sasha: Abeer
He removes his hand from her eyes.
Sasha: u greeted me like this, need any help?
Abeer: yes...Nisaar tu bta
Nisaar: khudko batane mein badi sharam arahi hai as if u r in love
He laughs and does high five with Sasha
Sasha: ladki milgai koi?
Nisaar: han lekin mujhe nh Abeer ko, I mean usey frndship krni hai us se, I think u can help.
Sasha: hai kon wese vo?
Nisaar: arey wohi Shalini jiske saath aaj Abeer class mein betha tha.
Sasha: oh acha...I have a plan.
She tells the plan (muted).

Abeer: will it work?
Sasha: girls get impressed by all this as far as I know
Abeer: OK then.

Next day, Shalini receives a courier. She wonders who sent it. She pulls out the packet from the shopper.
Shalini: dress?! but who sent it?
She takes out the dress from the packet, it was a white crop top and magenta mid thigh skirt with a paper attached to it. It said:

"Wear this in the party today in the college, i will be happy. Unknown."

Shalini: unknown...huh?! I wasn't going to the party, who sent it? I should throw it.

She goes to the dustbin but collides with Suman on the way.
Suman: kya hua?
Shalini: kuchh nh
She says hiding the dress behind her.
Suman: bta de, nh bolungi kuchh
Shalini shows the dress.

Shalini: pta nh kisne bheja hai? I don't want it.
Suman: college mein party hai?
Shalini nods.
Suman: to chali ja, parhai to hoti rahegi, enjoy kr
Shalini: PR main wahan kia krun GI?
Suman: enjoy krna, ye mauka baar baar nh ata...meri baat man to yehi dress pehen k jana, tujhpe boht jache ga.
Shalini agrees.

At fresher's party, Shalini enters the college hesitantly wearing the same dress because the dress was thigh length, she didn't wore these type of clothes before. Some boys come and flirts with her. She shoos them away but they holds her bare waist and pulls her towards them trapping her from all four sides. She gets irritated.
She says in heart: why did I come here wearing this dress? pachhta rahi hoon main.
Abeer comes and punches one of the guy. He hits each one of them and scolds them, they run from there.
Abeer: r u OK?
Shalini nods. Abeer stands still and his jaw drops seeing her beauty.


Abeer: u look beautiful.
Shalini: thnx
Abeer: nice clothes ha, thnx for wearing them.
Shalini: u sent them?
Abeer: yes, why? they are not good?
Shalini: no they r good.
Abeer: to kia socha tumne?
Shalini: about what?
Abeer: friendship
Shalini: kis ki frndshp
Abeer: I asked u something
Shalini thinks for awhile.
Shalini: yes...friends.
They go towards other people. On the drinks counter, a boy adds wine in every drink.
Abeer: will u drink something?
Shalini: yes
He goes and gets two drinks and gives one to her and drinks the other glass.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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abeer sent dress to shalini for her friendship.cool.he is so happy to see her wearing that dress at d party.but still she is keeping distance with him.shocking that wine is mixed in drink.will abeer shalini drink it?what will happen?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abeer-Nisar and Sasha's friendship is awesome. Suman telling Shalini to wear the dress without knowing the sender's name is questionable. Loved Shalini wearing that dress. Shocked to know that wine is mixed up with the drink. I hope Abeer is not behind these.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chp 5

Flashback continues: (In round brackets is the song)
Abeer drinks one glass of drink and Shalini drinks another one. It is announced that there should be dance, without it a party is incomplete. A random guy asks Shalini for dance and she goes with him. Abeer gets sad. Then a girl comes to Abeer asking for dance. He agrees. Sasha dances with Nisaar.

(Kaise kahoon ishq mein tere kitne hoon betaab main, aankhon se aankhein mila k chura loon tere khwab main)

Abeer keeps looking at Shalini while dancing.

(Kaise kahoon ishq mein tere kitna hoon betaab main, aankhon se aankhein mila k chura loon tere khwab main, mere saaye hain saath mein, yaara jis jaga tum ho, main Jo jee raha hoon wajah tum ho, main Jo jeeraha hoon wajah tum ho...wajah tum ho)

*Partners change*
Shalini comes to Abeer by spinning round n round and he holds her closer.
(Kya jaane tu mere iraade lejaunga saansein chura k 2
dil kehraha hai gunehgaar bnja bada chain hai in gunahon se aage)



Abeer twirls her and she falls in his arms
(Main gumshuda si raat hoon, meri khushnuma subha tum ho, main Jo jeeraha hoon wajah tum ho, main Jo jeeraha hoon wajah tum ho..wajah tum ho)

Abeer holds her waist as she falls and they have an intense eye lock. She gets up and turns to go but he pulls her in a way that her back touches his front. He traces her finger on his cheek and she closes her eyes by his touch.

(Hai yeh nasha ya hai zeher, iss pyaar ko hum kya naam dein..is pyaar ko hum kia naam dein)

He keeps twirling her and by now she started getting drunk and hugs him during the dance.

(Hai ye nasha ya hai zeher is pyar ko hum kia nam dein, kabse adhoori hai ek daastan aja usey aaj anjaam dein)

She feels dizzy and falls in his arms, he wonders what happen.

(Tumhe bhoolun kese main, meri pehli khata tum ho, main Jo jeeraha hoon wajah tum ho, main Jo jeeraha hoon wajah tum ho)

The song ends and he picks her up in his arms, they both fall on the floor by the drink affect. He quickly gets up and helps her up.
Shalini: what is it? why I m feeling giddy?
Abeer: even I m feeling giddy
Shalini: I think our drinks were drugged, how will I go home in this conditions?
Abeer: come with me.
He takes her and they collide with a bad boy while going. The boy argues and Abeer slaps him, he goes spinning to other side where Shalini was standing. Shalini too slaps him and again the boy goes spinning to Abeer. She laughs and jumps in joy while clapping.
Shalini: yayyy maza araha hai.
Boy: Teri
Abeer pushes him away from her.
Abeer: go else I will beat u
He goes.
Shalini: or maarte na, maza araha tha, humari thappar se WO gol gol ghoom raha tha... hahaha, sarr ghoome chakar khaye dil dil se takkar khaye hahahaha
Abeer giggles.
Abeer: let's go before some other boy comes.
He takes her to Sasha.
Abeer: Sasha u take her to ur hostel, she will stay with u for the night, take care, go Shalini n Sasha inform her mother.
She goes waving bye to Abeer and Abeer too waves her.
Sasha reaches hostel with Shalini and she starts jumping on the armchair.
Shalini: its fun to be drunk
Sasha: come down
Shalini: no no no I won't.
Sasha calls Abeer.
Sasha: plz tu aja yr Shalini is uncontrollable
Abeer: I will come.

Shalini continues dancing like mad. Even Sasha and Abeer were drunk now. Abeer reaches and the view in front of him made him laugh hard. Shalini and Sasha were fighting with make up kits. They even applied make up to each other madly. They applied blush on the place of eyeshade and eyeshade in place of blush, their lipstick was spreaded on the chin. They eat cake and the trio apply it on each other as well. They didn't knew when they fell asleep in the drink's affect.

Next morning when they woke up and went to mirror, they bursted out in laughter.
Shalini: how did I come here?
Abeer: Sasha brought u here as u said u can't go home in this drunk condition.
Sasha: it's fun to be drunk.
She laughs.
Abeer: Sasha, we should take her in our friend circle.
Sasha: what does she want?
Shalini: I want what u want.
Sasha: OK welcome to our group...let's have a group hug.

They do a group hug , screen freezes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dance was very romantic. How abeer protected shalini from the bad boy was nice.sasha shalini scene was funny. Now all are friends. Nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shabeer dance was romantic. Loved the moments of Abeer, Shalini and Sasha in the hostel.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
3 Parts were Amazing.😊
The Flashback part was so Interestingly explained.😊
Abeer feelings on Shalini and he complimented her was so Nice.😊
The way Abeer taking care of Shalini was so Nice.😊
Abeer and Shalini Dance was so Lovely.😊
Abeer, Shalini and Sasha Part was so Cute.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice update buddy
thanks for pm

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