Without You- updated chapter 1, pg 3 [On Hold]

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Seriously this was fun...I could visualize the entire scene in front of me...and can I say I love this Bhama! She is fun and refreshing to the core. But was that Madhav saying 'I have to hurt her"...I didn't get that part, I am a bit confused on that...

Nonetheless this was a beautiful piece but I will write more once you make a more clear picture on this one!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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You've put this on hold??? Why?

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Meself
You've put this on hold??? Why?

My mind is swimming with so many ideas for everything but this.
Writer's block

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

My mind is swimming with so many ideas for everything but this.
Writer's block

I float the same boat sister! I want to bang my head against the wall to have the ideas out it but then I am stuck, and stuck badly!

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Meself

I float the same boat sister! I want to bang my head against the wall to have the ideas out it but then I am stuck, and stuck badly!

It's so frustrating

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