Without You- updated chapter 1, pg 3 [On Hold] - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Prologue was wonderful srutha
Nice to read something on Krishna satyabhama
Can't wait for the actual story
Update soon!

Thank you Sayu :)

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Ah ah ah!!!

Srutha let me tell you I m in LOVE with this one!

Dharaa is so cute. Stubborn n sweet. Quite like me😳

And Madhava... Uff

So adorable, smart and ... OK, I'll stop there😆

I so so love your writings! So realistic and fun. I can totally imagine it happening. Can't wait to meet Revathi😃

Dau is so strict but fun😆

Please update soon!

Lots of love,

Mahi😛

PS- I love the pouts here😆😆😉

And the last scene was ❤️

Thanks Mahii 🤗
You can go on describing Madhav, for if allowed, I will do that for life as well 😳
Revathi is coming 😃
Dau is the best ❤️

P.S. The pouts are a part and parcel of this story 😆😆

Originally posted by: EternalStars.

UnRes!😃 Hayee me loved this.😳 I loved Dharaa-Madha/Satya-Shyam/Kanha-Bhu!!😆 Nok-jhok and leg-pulling Totally like today times!😛 Anant calling Dharaa 'Little One' was really cute!😃 And Kanha being laadla of everyone.As usual.😆 Butter-stealing and getting chased by his 'Dau'.Again adorable.😳 And the car scene between Satya and Shyam!😳 I loved the ending!Lord Krishna and her best friend being the same person.😆 And Kanha vowing to get it out.

Update soon!😃

I know right? And Dhaara and Madhav seem to be the type to pull each other's legs all the time 😛
Anant and Dhaara are like brother and sister only ❤️
Kanha is the forever laadla 😆😆
His name is Makkan-Chor. He has to be one, haina? 😉
Satya and Shyam ❤️
Well, they are the same 😆😆
He will get it out as He wishes only 😉
I will do my best :)

Hi Shrutha, when are you planning to continue this one? Can't wait to read the next part sooner than possible. Waiting for Revati's shy (I hope so) nature and Anath's eagerness to share fruitful moments with her.

Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi Shrutha, when are you planning to continue this one? Can't wait to read the next part sooner than possible. Waiting for Revati's shy (I hope so) nature and Anath's eagerness to share fruitful moments with her.

Working on the next part 😊
ReAnant is upcoming :) No worries :)

Originally posted by: Meself

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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Res? 😆😆

Originally posted by: Meself

I was trying to go hyper active...ye uski ka nateeja hai!!!😛

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Unres is where?