Without You- updated chapter 1, pg 3 [On Hold]

Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Yes😆

Sure, though you don't need them😳

Where did they come? :P

Yayy 😊

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Where did they come? :P
Yayy 😊

Ohh shit!

I meant Dau🤣🤣

Sorry, my mistake

Such a big blooper😆😆

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Ohh shit!

I meant Dau🤣🤣

Sorry, my mistake

Such a big blooper😆😆

😆😆

You made Dau Drau 🤣

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Ohh shit!

I meant Dau🤣🤣

Sorry, my mistake

Such a big blooper😆😆

😆😆

You made Dau Drau 🤣

Yes😆

Actually never noticed that it wasn't Drau😆😳

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Ohh shit!
I meant Dau🤣🤣

Sorry, my mistake
Such a big blooper😆😆

😆😆

You made Dau Drau 🤣

Yes😆

Actually never noticed that it wasn't Drau😆😳

😆

I am planning Dau-Revathi next chapter anyway 😉

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proteeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

What. if. I. call. you. 'Betiji'?

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome! Dhaara-Kanha's nok-jhok was so cute! And, Dau understands?
Can't wait for the sweetum-sweet ReAnant moments!
P.S. Let 'him' get naughtier! What's stopping you? 😉

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
What. if. I. call. you. 'Betiji'?

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome! Dhaara-Kanha's nok-jhok was so cute! And, Dau understands?
Can't wait for the sweetum-sweet ReAnant moments!
P.S. Let 'him' get naughtier! What's stopping you? 😉

Why Betiji, Pro, why? :P :P

Thank you :)

Of course He does. He is Dau 😉

They are upcoming 😛

Oh He will. Don't you worry :P Just drop suggestions if you have any :)

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saishree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Prologue was wonderful srutha
Nice to read something on Krishna satyabhama
Can't wait for the actual story
Update soon!

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Ah ah ah!!!

Srutha let me tell you I m in LOVE with this one!

Dharaa is so cute. Stubborn n sweet. Quite like me😳

And Madhava... Uff

So adorable, smart and ... OK, I'll stop there😆

I so so love your writings! So realistic and fun. I can totally imagine it happening. Can't wait to meet Revathi😃

Dau is so strict but fun😆

Please update soon!

Lots of love,

Mahi😛

PS- I love the pouts here😆😆😉

And the last scene was ❤️

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lakshmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

UnRes!😃 Hayee me loved this.😳 I loved Dharaa-Madha/Satya-Shyam/Kanha-Bhu!!😆 Nok-jhok and leg-pulling Totally like today times!😛 Anant calling Dharaa 'Little One' was really cute!😃 And Kanha being laadla of everyone.As usual.😆 Butter-stealing and getting chased by his 'Dau'.Again adorable.😳 And the car scene between Satya and Shyam!😳 I loved the ending!Lord Krishna and her best friend being the same person.😆 And Kanha vowing to get it out.

Update soon!😃

Edited by EternalStars. - 9 years ago

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