JUST YOU?? AND ME (SEASON 2) PART 6 updated on page 20 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haila! I wanted the next part... Yeh to start KIA khali tune abhi yaha ... :/
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all am up again with the next part of just you?? and me... first of all i wanna thank you all for liking this fiction too.. and thank you for ur lovely comments.. i wont be able to reply them.. but plz i read them so dont stop commenting...\

also many are confused regarding the story and want character sketch of characters.. guys the story is different and if i give character sketch then all the fun of the story wud be lost.. hope u all will understand..

Part 1

Mrs. Drama queen (called out) : Arooo... Beta jaldi ready hojaa... Jana h beta...

Me: Ya mom...

I threw my cigratte and came to my room.. I took my brand new kurta n pajama n went to wash room..I shaved my beard.. My chest... After all it was my roka.. I had to look good.. I hope that girl is also good looking... Atleast she should match me.. Otherwise my frnds will make fun of me.. Afterall I look good.. M handsome.. College me ladkia marti thi mujpe.. Abi bi I have those letters written by those girls who were ready to die for me.. Just then I heard

Mr hitler shouting: Arooo !!!! Arooo. Tu Abi tak tayaar ni hua... Jaldi kar.. Varna tuje chhodke chale jayege..


"Muje chhodke chale jayegee.." I mean seriously... Mere hi roke pe muje chhod denge.. Papa kuch to naya soch lete.. ( I thought to myself..)My dAd always treats me like a 5 year all kid..I finished my bath n came out of the washroom..i dressed up.. and looked at myself in the mirror..i was looking fab..as handsome as tom cruise... College me hota na to do char ladkiya vese hi behosh ho jati.. I came out of my room n my big fat punjabi family almost jumped on me.. My aunts were pulling my cheeks.. Damn they are so irritating... My jhalli cousins were giggling keeping their palms on their mouth as if their teeth will fall of their mouths.. My munde cousins were just smiling looking at me.. Pagal kahi ke... Everyone became mad... Just then Mrs. Drama queen entered n started her drama.. She was crying.. I really cant understand why.. But yes she was crying... She hugged me.. I was expecting mr. Hitler too hugs me.. But his big fat ego.. He treats me like untouchable... Just forget it.. We all sat in car.. Oops chain of cars.. With so many gifts.. We reached to ladki wala's house... It was big house.. "Mera sasur to paise wala nikla..". I was happy... Her mother welcomed us.. They were all treating me and my family like celebrity...My family was throwing tantrums... As expected.. Pointing out faults... Khana accha ni laga, decoration esi honi chahiye thi, humara welcome acche se ni hua, we are not given proper attention...My family is a bunch of jokers I tell u ... That was hell embarrassing... They seriously need to behave properly... I sone how ignored them... I was waiting for the girl eagerly... Pata ni ladkiya itna time kyo lagati h... I hope she is good.. I was just sitting n waiting for her.. I only know her name.. Mr. Hitler didn't even show me her photo... I don't know why.. But I liked her name very much.. "nandini " ... Its beautiful no??,,, I hope she is as beautiful as her name... Just then a girl came to me.. In blue saree... She was very beautiful.. But she wasn't Nandini.. She came upto me running .

Girl: So u are Arjun...??

Me: I think so... (I smiled . But I really didn't like her tone)

Girl: U think so... Apne naam me hi confused... ( she bursted into laughter)

She was irritating me.. Ye bhagwan ne sare irritating log muje hi kyo diye h...

Me: Wat do u want??


Girl: Sorry sorry... M Mitali... Nandini's frnd..

Me: Hello Mitali...( o god.. Uski frnd . Matlab isko puri life jhelna padegaa)

Mitali: Waiting for Nandini??

Me: Ya... M here for her...

Mitali: She is coming in 5 mins..

My face lightened up... At last I could see her . Meet her. Mitali left.. Soon ppl started shouting ".Dulhan agayii.. Dulhan agayiii.."I looked around.. I wanted to see her... But my stupid family members stood in front of me... As if she was coming for them.. Kon samjaye in bewakoofo ko she is getting married to me.. Not to them... I was sitting at my seat... Chalo koi naa.. Ana to use mere hi pass h... I hope Mr. Hitler has chosen something good for me.. Otherwise toofan ajayegaa...Slowly all moved away in front of me.. Now I could see her .. But damn my luck.. She was coming slowly slowly... Wearing pink lehengaa.. With a flock of other girls n aunties. I could see everything. Except her face.. Coz the photographer was covering her face with his camera.. N this girl was also walking so slow.. Cant she was fast.. Still I was holding my breathe... My heart beat increased... She came near me..finally I could see her face.. Damn!!!!! She was beautiful... Very fair... Her eyes filled with khol.. Lips... Cheeks ... O m g.. Kya bolo me...I m proud of u mr. Hitler.. M proud that u are my dad... I think this is the first thing which you have done good to me...


so guys this is it.. hope u all liked it,,, plz leave your precious reviews below.. also ppl who want pms send me buddy request and like the prologue on page 1..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashley.Rhea

Haila! I wanted the next part... Yeh to start KIA khali tune abhi yaha ... :/


YUPS I STARTED THIS ALSO
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Wow...arangd mariage tht wid out seeing bride's face...thts very intrstng...loved it...esply groom eagarness...nxt updte pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Hey how r u? Hope everything is perfect
Sona di told me commet soo here im
Awersome proluge im sooo happy 2nd season start ho gaya but yaaar yeh kiya hai yeh wala sandhir ff nahi plzzz sandhir likho na phirse i dont like tht aroo name
Bye nd tk
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awsm and the family drama scene just brilliant
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Oh i loved the chapter...
Bt i loved d hero of ur story d most...
i mean he is funny n realistic...
u r amazing yaar...
i totally loved it... m very happy dat u syarted d 2 season of just u n me though its nt on sandhir bt then too m loving it...
update asap..

Love
harshita
Edited by oshinchaudhary - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
K dere is some problem wid d like button as m nt abl to like d prolouge... bt i want the pm... will try again to like it... just wanted to let u knw dat i want pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
The update was awsme

Di dis story is really different from our sandhir version
I m going to enjoy it

The update was funny

Arjun POV for his family amzng
Mrs drama queen n Mr hitler kya jodi h

His overdramatic Punjabi family going to add more fun

So bride name nandani indeed a nyc name
He was so curious to see her

When she came he thanked his stars he was mesmerized
Wtng for nandani intro

Update soon di
Luv u
Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30


awesome update dear... eagerly waiting for roka update...😉 pls update next part asap yaara

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