Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'd tell you dont trust me in the readers list😆!

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Congratulations for your second Non-Fan-Fiction story and that to of fantasy genre 😃!
I am already ready to read something of this genre and would love to read it!
But again like always you know me !😆

The starting was very good with Ryan POV about Zara , his little devil!
I could feel it, Ryan must have a hard time not to fall in love with her😳!
I mean how impossibly is it possible not to fall for someone you are bound to protect till eternity ends? Without love/care anyone woudnt have a heart to protect anyone! Angels are capable to that may be that is why he is the chosen one!

So here is also the suspence! Cool!
Would want to know wabout the silent treaty and ofcourse why of all the persons in the world Zara has gotten an angel to protect and from whom?

Continue soon dii!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi kunchu di🤗🤗
wow !!!!! this banner is sooo beautiful !!!
loved it ! so the new genre ! fantasy has been one of my favourite genre !
so the new concept is super rocking !
u literally brought me back to my childhood when i used to love this guardian angel stories😃 thank u❤️
Zara ...the innocent soul !! and Ryan her protector 😉 why do get a fishy feeling😆
Michael ...warned Ryan to keep a distance ! i'm already in dream land lalalalalala !!!
update soon di love u🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsumm Start Heli Di..😊 I felt lyk I was watching the Supernatural Series. Michael, Raphael, Castiel, Lucifer(Added too! 😉) And God! A Very fantastical start! Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and continue soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh no!! it's you!!! just amazing meri jaan!!
i never expected it...you just broke your usual style...and it felt nice to me...
but I know its gonna be emotional...you never can stop yourself of playing with emotions...either it human or angels... hehe...
do continue...the start says everything about the journey...&...I'm in.

keep writing.
thanks for PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice start nd concept ...u shud share it on wattpad too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Hey K.. 😛
Okay, so firstly congratulations on the new fic.. The title itself is so mysterious. 😊
To be honest, I'm not a fan of supernatural stuff, But I'm willing to give this one a chance coz it's you and I'm sure by the end you're going to make me cry and smile a lot..

Great start.. Looking forward to reading more on Ryan and Zara and their companionship.. ❤️

Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow di..
awesome start..
just loved it..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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indeed a awesome start di...
Ryan,he superbly described abt his little Devil Zara...
u made a awesome banner...
thanks for PM...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Kunchu di
ryt frm Zara's innocence to Ryan's responsible nature...loved everything 😃
waiting for more
thanks for pm 🤗

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