SurprisingPoeticCorner 3-Reachieving Paradise,LOST

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Hello,
I'm simply speechless...you made me so as you have shown marvelous devotedness to go through my poems.2nd poetic corner again has been finished within one month.
I want to offer you thanks from the center of my heart.
Hope you like these poems of 3rd phase as well.

-Rumpu😊

ye dastaan hey do diloon ka

jo ek dusre se na anjan tha na kabhi rahega

kuch to hey tere yaadoon mein---

jo mujhe har pal pahele rulake phir hasata hey


Beautiful songs are those...
which tell our heart to love...
with thorns,stones & tears...
One heart gets elated when...
It gets the true meaning of 3 magical words.




INDEX
PLEASE CLICK ON THE NUMBERS GIVEN ASIDE


Perhaps Only For You-- Page 1 89078243
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Lingering Limelight-Friendship,a Thorn-ful Rose--
Page 21-- 89314536

Lunar boon...Autumn is Here--Page 45-- 89586074


AS LONG AS FLOWERS--Page 68-89843091

Seed of Time-Dwindling Independence --
Page 85
90058500

Deprived Rose...Beauty of Dispute--
Page 108--- 90405373

In The Path of Thorn...Vagabond
Page-130---
90770788

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Link of Previous Corners

1st poetic corner
--- Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake
2nd
poetic corner---Surprising Poetic Corner 2- In The Shore of Nile
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Hoito Tomari Jonya
Perhaps Only For You


Harie jete chaoya ki abantar??
Is the want for being introvert restless??
Ami jani na...tabe anumaan korte pari
I Don't know...But trying to guess
Hoito haan...hoito na...
Perhaps yes...perhaps no...

Bhalobasar ekta bindu...
Just a drop of love...
Koto kichhu korte chai;
Want to achieve a sky;
Kotota samman ba sujog se pay??
But how far it's loved by men??

Tabu manush swapno dekhe...
Still men love dreams...
Swapno dekhte shehkhai ke?
Who is the pathfinder of it?
Kaalpurusher teer dhunuk ki nirdesh kore?
Arch of galaxy symbolizes what?

Nibhe jete jete jwale otha
Something flashing just before the end
Ar jwaleo nive thaker modhye parthakya toto tai...
& something dead in the whole life-span differ
Jotota neel ashru r laal rakter-
Just like blue tears & blood...

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u r really amazing dear
thank u for pm
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its party time for you



i like your writing works
and recently
is also
nice

little secret this time
but will enjoy exploring it
tfs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: salooni

its party time for you




i like your writing works
and recently
is also
nice

little secret this time
but will enjoy exploring it
tfs



hello dear😳
u r so sweet to make me aware to create next thread😊

but secret???what secret??

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Posted: 12 years ago
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super fab !!!!
loved it
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thanks to the core😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oshadharan bondhu,Aami jantam naa je tumi baangli.Aar baangla kobita aamaar ottonto priya.Jodiba aami khub beshi kobita porar shujog paayini,taao jatota parechi,seta khubi sundor peyechhi.Aar aajker kobitar shirshok ta pare aamar lagchhe kobitata shottie "Hoito Aamari jonno"

Joto sundor tomar English kobita guli hoye thik tototaai mishti aajker Baangla lekhatao.Aasha kori tumi bhobissote aaro beshi kobita Banglateo likhbe.

Loved d poem.

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