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Posted: 13 years ago

AS LONG AS FLOWERS

Life of man, treasure of man,

Possession of man, TIME of man,

Have a long run...

But towards the finishing turn..

Friendship of man, affection of man,

Admiration of man, ambition of man,

Last for a moment- or even whole lifespan

If they are pure, they are true.

Hope of man, brine of man,

Vast as the azure...

Undoubtedly having life-long guarantee

Always glimmer man just like a pleasure.

Love of man, hatred of man,

Stand in Time's eye;

Always offer man a pleasant yearning

With a glimpse of sad sigh...

Our life is very short at all.

Some golden memories glorify us.

So don't shorten your loving moment,

They are naturally as long as flowers.



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Posted: 13 years ago
This poem is 78% simple 😛 coz it's penned long long ago😎
next will be on Independence Day special.
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful poem 😳
keep writing more
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful poem👏
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising

AS LONG AS FLOWERS

Life of man, treasure of man,

Possession of man, TIME of man,


Beautiful!!! rumpu - well done!!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing as usual.
You always make me spell bound with your deep insight.
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 Simply fantastic dear...⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising

AS LONG AS FLOWERS

Life of man, treasure of man,

Possession of man, TIME of man,

Have a long run...

But towards the finishing turn..

Friendship of man, affection of man,

Admiration of man, ambition of man,

Last for a moment- or even whole lifespan

If they are pure, they are true.

Hope of man, brine of man,

Vast as the azure...

Undoubtedly having life-long guarantee

Always glimmer man just like a pleasure.

Love of man, hatred of man,

Stand in Time's eye;

Always offer man a pleasant yearning

With a glimpse of sad sigh...

Our life is very short at all.

Some golden memories glorify us.

So don't shorten your loving moment,

They are naturally as long as flowers.




friend like you, an angel in life
poem of you,a relief in tensity
writer like you, a valiant to words
and next pm of you
a dream to be come true

it was awesome dear
waiting for next and wow
independence day my fav
lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
really beautiful...so true things...thanks for pm

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