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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

amazing, super and mindblowing.

and thanx for pm.

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Superb 👏

Thanks for pm😊

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Very well written. Loved it thoroughly. Cudnt be more better. beautiful words. Keep updating.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Oshadharan bondhu,Aami jantam naa je tumi baangli.Aar baangla kobita aamaar ottonto priya.Jodiba aami khub beshi kobita porar shujog paayini,taao jatota parechi,seta khubi sundor peyechhi.Aar aajker kobitar shirshok ta pare aamar lagchhe kobitata shottie "Hoito Aamari jonno"

Joto sundor tomar English kobita guli hoye thik tototaai mishti aajker Baangla lekhatao.Aasha kori tumi bhobissote aaro beshi kobita Banglateo likhbe.

Loved d poem.

welcome bondhu😊
are...amar bangla kobitar sankhya english poem r cheye beshi
ami ogulo post kori na karan ogulor english translation gulo koto ta mul essence ta carry korbe,setai doubt thake.
but tomara I mean bengali reader ra jodi chao,ami bengali poem aro debo,translation korei😳

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: swetha10
Wow amazing dear..
thanx a lot for the pm..

thanks a lot

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
shudhu tomari jonne...Darun phataphato hoyeche...Ekbare durdanto...👏👏👏

tui bengali😉
bujhini to age😳

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: kbtr
What lang is that?
Have you published your works.
There is a lot of angst in your work. Perhaps that's why they are so gripping. Thanks, dear. Take care.

PS Love the Title

this is Bengali(bangla),my mother-tongue.
no no dear...I have no degree that considers me to publish them.

o...really??🤗
thanx⭐️

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

First Of All...

For Ur 3rd Gallery And Your Success !!!!!

Why Don't You Send Your Poems To Some Publisher ? They'll Love It !!!

Tomar Latest Poem-ta Khooob-i Shundor !!!! Khub Alada Thought-er Opor Lekha !

Especially Last Para :-

Nibhe jete jete jwale otha
Something flashing just before the end
Ar jwaleo nive thaker modhye parthakya toto tai...
& something dead in the whole life-span differ
Jotota neel ashru r laal rakter-
Just like blue tears & blood...

Khub Clearly Explain Korechho Tumi !!!!! Love It !! 👏👏

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Superb :)
Thanks for the PM

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ara_000
ashadharon 👏
i mean i am actually spellbound...!
Protita kotha r modhay bastab lukie royeche...!
Sotti i amra sapno dekhi,sapno dekhte keu amader sekhayna but still amra sapno dekhi but sei sapno gulo sotti ki kokhno hoy..!
Hoy na actually nd sei sob sundar sopno gulo bhenge churmar hoe jay jkhn amader samne opriyo bastab ta uthe ashe...!
Sotti i darun likhecho...! 👍🏼
Valolaglo erom ekta kobita porte ❤️

ami chesta kori bastav k niyei kobita gulo likhte😊

dekho,swapno j satti hoi na,ta noi...but amader moto kore amra take bastobayeto hote dekhi na.

actually amara vishan beshi expect kori...& ta puron na hole depressed hoye jai.

btw dhanyabaad🤗

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