SurprisingPoeticCorner 3-Reachieving Paradise,LOST- Page 60

Originally posted by: Moumimon

last three poem read in one go...
as i was not here for some days...
love poems dear..just amaizing👍🏼

Originally posted by: uluvmg

lovely & unique poem I have ever read...👏

you rocks..keep rocking..👍🏼

(belated)Happy Independence Day to all fellow Indians!

excited for next poem..thanks for pm!!

Originally posted by: kiran_89

beautiful poem nd vry nicely written😳

nd happy belated independence day 2 u dear rumpu😊

Originally posted by: TimenTIMEagain

''Our life is very short at all.
Some golden memories glorify
us.
So don't shorten your loving
moment,
They are naturally as long as
flower''
well written and so true !
Nicely done independance poem and a belated independance day to u too !

Originally posted by: misha.as

Amazing thread ⭐️ 👏 👏
Lovely poems ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Great work 👏 😊

Originally posted by: nolla

Thanks for the wishes. And very good poems👏

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Happy Independence Day to you too, dear..

And this work was again really very beautiful..

You really are a blessed poetess..

Deprived Rose...Beauty of Dispute

There's a red rose...beautiful but...

Isn't it a little bit morose?

...WHY??...

Any guesses fellow-flowers?

Perhaps it's concerned about its reddish hue?

Perhaps a love-bird is going to deny it with a repressed smile?

Perhaps an insect discomforts its delicate core?

Perhaps its older petals refuse to adhere with calyx?

...Wrongful guesses...quixotic talks...!!...

It's remorseful for its significance.

For being used just for only one purpose-as token of love.

Why not for the relation,the divine relation?

That has fraternal essence,quarrelsome conceit & so more?

...The undefined relation of brother-sister...

The guy who threatens -"O..your 1^st love-letter?let me go to parent's room."

Who shouts-"hey,hold your tongue.I own the first right."

Who whispers in an afeared voice-"hello,what are you searching in my call-list?"

Who pleads--"shhh...please...remain silent...please...I pray you."

Is this the same guy---

Who wipes a cuty's tears with so much affectionate care?

Who swears-"I'm the barrier. None can over-leap you."?

Who winks-"Nothing is here for you."

Then offers his hidden hand full of gifts?

The girl who is always on tenterhooks to offer everything she possesses

To make his brother flash a smile,

Like a calm river who overcasts all upcoming dangers--

Is just a sister, nothing else.

...This soothing beauty implies the brother-sister bond made in heaven...

To love,to respect,to lull this miraculous feeling

Please value more hearty bond than blood-relation.