||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot)

AfflicteD

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Batameez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res=) Will edit soon!

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OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.

great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)

Arezo.

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

an emotional OS...

u can never know what life throws at u...u just have to accept it...

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow...that was very very intense and emotional. Beautifully written!

-Abi❤️

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meettu

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Posted: 13 years ago

sooo emotional os

how can parents treat dere children lyk dis

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divya22

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome yaar...
It is sooo painful yet touchy...
U hv described every emotion so nicely that i could feel it...
A really sad story bt Written amazingly...
Keep it up

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey...very emotional os...
U made me cry...
Y our lyf is nt simple????
Do pm me if u write another story...

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 13 years ago

awwesum Os ...sooo touching ...amazing ...thnxx fo pm

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

AMAZING
but it was painful

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abhayprsingh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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are you really a new writer coz i swear i wont beleive it!!!!its was such a beautiful update dat i'm speechless and not able to put my feelings in words..i did read the whole os wid full concentration and it really touched somewhere deep in my heart.while reading dat para which says ...I ran away from there to my home, the memories of my happy childhood flashing in front of me, then slowly, the times which almost shook my whole life, came in front of me. The faces I always longed to see, of my parents; the faces I always saw and loved, of Alisha and grandma; the lovely memories; the harsh memories came across me, as I ran across the road. So much noise, the noise of shouting of the people, the noise of the horns of the cars and bikes, the noises ware filled in the air. But in my mind, I had other noises- the memories.i was in tears..and once again i'm saying i still dont believe its ur 1st attempt..loved it dear..and love you and thanks for giving such a beautiful os..