Story: Broken Cheese Ball; NOTE:P23

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Keep PMing me K, I'll get down to reading it once I have a little time on my hands :) xx

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Res

I know both of you may not appreciate this "Res" business, but I really gotta run. Will edit this tomorrow. Sorry

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Awesome update Nidhi. Did you write this one one your own or did you guys Share the work like last time?

Omar seems like a typical amongst guy born to the rich household. Very well described I must say. So Damini found herself a friend on the very first day. But Naaz is quite different from her it seems. Oh well, I'm really eager to know the way this turns out.

Thnx for the PM n update soon. And sorry for taking so much time.

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Omar's image and feelings was described really well and I love the new bond of Damini and Naaz. 😊 Awesome update Kankshita and Nidhi 👏

Edited by SwaRonArsha95 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I've read the 1st chapter and that was AWESOME,will read the 2nd chapter soon too and then comment:)

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Hmm how do I begin commenting!
Because obviously two very good writers have joint hands to create a memorable story!
Damini- ah nostalgic!
Omar Dewan- the regular bad boy is it?
Instant chemical reaction eh!
I think I am going to stick around!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Guyz I was spoton wrong last time when I made a guess so I am not touching on that...perhaps I will wait till th story settles down ..pls don't stop th PMs

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Thanks a bunch for the response, everyone. We're both glad that you find this good enough to keep reading.

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Shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

hmm...omar dewan ...sounds as a rich spoilt brat ...damini having something chemical for him...sounds interesting...continue soon so taht i wud understand more of it...as always...ur style of expressing is unique and excellent...eager for more of it...

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Edited 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58138836

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NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

it was truly gorgeous ,, for some reason i can figure out why but damini and naaz remind me of peyton and brooke (OTH) .. loving teh character development, so smooth yet so incomplete- cant wait till you guys update again..

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