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Posted: 13 years ago

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Finished da two chapters..Need to read more to undestand properly.😆.continue soon!😊

Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 13 years ago

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

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Intresting

Omar and Damini have a bit of thing in common..they dont actually acre abt the world!

Omar was described perfectly...and whoa..its damn intresting and the story has awe!!

Wow,,it will b great to read how the perfect damini loses her kinda control..

Like the convo of naaz and damini..

con soon!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I am off.

I haven't sent so many PMs at once in my life. 😳

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hey nidhi n kanks will read this FF as soon as my exams get over... dont stop sending the pms...

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Rich`

@cs-07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

looking forward to reading more of it. chapter o ne started.

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

hey savage thanx for pm...this is really nice story...i m really liking it...the way you have shown the internal feelings of omar...and his image...the new built bonding of naaz and damini is also superb...nd naaz is really adorable though she has a past but she is very joyful...and finally damini she is trying to establish to she is naturally slow in track but her description is also nice and upto mark...please send me reminder when u update next...thanx again for pm..

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

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Very nicely written gals. Omar deewan seems an interesting specimen. Loved how you described his build and his not to good behavioral traits. Looking forward to read on how the story unfolds. And waiting for our smart yet slightly sarcastic gal and charming yet impulsive guy to meet. I am sure this is going to be fun.

Thanks for the PM. Do continue soon.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Amazing Ones Nidhi and Khanks.

It was awesome one.

Thanks for pm.

It was very cute.

The way u described Damini and Naaz was superb.

Update next part soon.

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shweta211

@shweta211

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

This is what, multiplied brilliance.? :P Since I read both of you, I could make out a few here n there, biut it IS fluent, and really interesting. Nidhi and K, great job!