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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

beatitul update!!
liked how wisely rudra n vanhi stop tht man eaters to kill children n eating human! and also learned their war strategy
thanks to tht lady sadhu n parrots! all credit goes to them
feeling very sad abt rudra's mother! poor soul at last freed.

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

friends i know most of u are imagining rajat and mugdha but excerpt them i have some other actors in mind..for grown up Rudra-Vanhi

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Mark!

I been wanted to read this for some time now, finally getting around to it :)

Edited by -Aarya- - 12 years ago

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

wow..gr8 one di.!!⭐️
u xplaind abt d Aheeras very niicely...
d lunar esclipse trick was gr8...
Rudra n Vanhi hav equal capabilities...
w8ng 2 c wat wil happen when dey realise dey r ones dey h8...
wil their friendship survive???

feelng very bad 4 d queen...😭

likd sadhuma a lot...
upd8 soon di...eagrly w8ng 4 moore...🤗

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

aru :

commenting on the 27th october update, loved how both Rudra and Vanhi used their intelligence and learnt the ShabdhVedhi trick , oblivious to the fact that they themselves are the so-called enemies. update soon.😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

thanks dear polly for reading

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

😊Ahem..ahem.ahem...
1.Thank you Arudi for good ff you wrote
Thank you Arunitadi for the PM you wrote.
I know I am a worst poet so please excuse me.😳
2.The entire story line was stupendofantabulous awesomly superb!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏I read it with one breathe and realized that I am again mesmerized by some certain 2 persons who take me with them where your story became real.I found that each and every scene were passed through on my eyes.
3.Rudra has something that make him different and so is Vanhi.But I like their pet name Neel and Sikha the most.
4.Now I wish to see a sword fight sequence between Rudra and Vanhi(I think they are grown up now) where Vanhi covers herf ace with a black velvet veil,only her eyes are visible and Rudra Speaks with his green eyes "Don't Vanhi...why I have to give up everything??Did I do anything wrong??I trust you,I care for you and I unfortunately love youSo you come to punish me for my that deed??"And Vanhi's blue beautiful eyes becomes for fiery and she tells"No...you are the son of my father's killer. And I want revenge...I love you too but right now you are my enemy and I hope we will meet in the another world and will be together there forever...I am sorry...forgive me."
"Saiyara tu Saiyara../Saiyara main Saiyara sitaron ke jahan mein/Milenge ab yara."

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Rimi i never got such beautiful comment r u thought reader or what??😛

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Rudra and Vanhi are going to complete their lessons to Gurukul.Well I will wait for their return from Gurukul as grown up Rudra and Vanhi or Neel and Shikha. I am fallen in love with Rudra and Vanhi...so as a lover I have a mad request...PLease write and finish this ff as soon as possible otherwise I couldn't sleep anymore.😭Please...
I can imagine only my MRs as grown up Rudra and Vanhi

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago