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finally read all the updates that i missed 😃 awesome updates Aru!!
so they know each other with pseudo names n became good friends. 😊

thanks to all for reading and commenting...i am trying to update soon

beautiful update!
so their frndship is growing as they din't know abt their real identity
feeling very sad abt rudra's mother!!
she couldn't do anything coz of her cruel husband
she couldn't save mahamantri's daughter n nor could change view of citizen towards her!! and her bad luck continue with her daughter being same like her father & rudra too not knowing truth!! taking his father correct! hope she can tell truth to him!
so rudra & vanhi going to learn dhwanivedan vidya!!
it reminded me DV epi's of rt learning tht sort of skill!!
they want to learn it to defeat eachother!!
but may be both will fall for eachother in their journey!!

thanks for updating after long time 😃 waiting for RS too

Lovely update yaar... I loved dat sadhuma nd kids part...

Mujhe toh ye Kisi fairytales jaisa lagta hai...

Do continue soon...

nice part yaar...rudra n vanhi r so chalu thanks to sadhumaa
poors aheers got fooled by both of them n our rudra got little surprised by vanhi's princely attitude...god what will happen when he got to know that enemy he is wishing to kill is his new fr8 n future gf n then vanhi too
n queen died...poor soul has to suffer the curse of that #%$*& king...now how rudra will react on this,he is going to loose his temper on king well he deserves that
update soon...
luv u... :-)

you've written it so well! ur stories have always depicted emotions in a beautiful manner. i love with what ease ur able to make ur readers visualize the scenes. keep it up dear!!

thanks everyone for commenting

Well superb update...
Thanks to that sadhuma...
Who gave them hint hw to handle
that aheers nd for those two parrots...
The update some what funny nd nice but the end was so sad...
Felt very sad for rudra...
Hw will he react nw...
Update soon
luv u